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| 21 Sep 2014 11:50 AM |
If you are wondering what is this it's a book that I am making by myself with a little help from a few others.
"Hell Apocalypse" is a book about a man called "Jack" surviving in a crucial world that just began right in front of his eyes. He has to fight bandits, infected humans and sometimes to fight himself on what is the best decision's. Let me say this I made a few books that were unfinished or was too cheesy and maybe this book will be finished, and be released to the public in a month.
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phoniex
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| 21 Sep 2014 12:50 PM |
First of all, your grammar is comprehensible, so I must ask:
http://youtu.be/a0x6vIAtFcI?t=14s
~Rock is dead. Long live paper and scissors!~ |
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phoniex
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| 21 Sep 2014 12:51 PM |
Incomprehensible, not comprehensible. Sorry about that.
~Rock is dead. Long live paper and scissors!~ |
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| 22 Sep 2014 06:58 PM |
| I didn't ask for grammar opinion. |
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phoniex
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| 22 Sep 2014 07:10 PM |
But I cannot understand your post.
~Rock is dead. Long live paper and scissors!~ |
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| 22 Sep 2014 07:13 PM |
| We grammar police will be forced to detain you if you don't fix your post. |
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Piment
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| 23 Sep 2014 01:54 PM |
Grammar is not the most important thing at all sport fans!
"If you tell a big enough lie and tell it frequently enough, it will be believed.” |
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| 23 Sep 2014 09:20 PM |
| If a idiot can understand a post then a smart guy can too Phonix. |
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phoniex
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| 23 Sep 2014 09:37 PM |
| Quick Question: Is English not your first language? |
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| 24 Sep 2014 08:26 PM |
| Plus this is about a book, not say i'm wrong in grammar. |
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phoniex
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| 24 Sep 2014 08:35 PM |
| Okay, then your poor English skills are understandable, sorry about the disrespect. |
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| 24 Sep 2014 09:18 PM |
Hell Apocalypse though?
It seems like Hell is falling apart.
Maybe Hellish Apocalypse? No? |
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| 24 Sep 2014 09:54 PM |
This is a great idea for a story.
it be well. |
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| 25 Sep 2014 04:07 PM |
| Just finished chapter one yesterday and i forgive you phonix. |
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| 26 Sep 2014 05:59 PM |
| However, grammar is a bit important in everything, but in a ROBLOX post? Not at all. |
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BooneHEAD
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