North1233
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| 17 Sep 2014 02:42 PM |
I'm making a horror story called The Dread Diaries, where a kid, after moving into a new house in a new town, discovers diaries of people who lived in the house before him. The child reads the diaries and sees stories of bone-chilling horror. Then, he discovers that they are real, but his parents don't believe him.
Anybody got ideas for characters? |
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Zalchire
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| 17 Sep 2014 02:48 PM |
| That one overconfident gun old guy with a shotgun who goes into the basement but fails to exit. |
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soardlo
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| 17 Sep 2014 02:56 PM |
Ew no
I know you
You suck and got kicked from dragons
Ew no
Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds |
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vamking12
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:07 PM |
Write a decent first chapter first,
Your have a worst rep then me. |
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brigond
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:34 PM |
the evil spirit named brigond who sails throughout the house with his ghostly shotgun and spooks the spooked members of the spooky scary house
If humans are 72 percent water, would that mean that if I walked on you, I'd be Jesus? |
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North1233
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:36 PM |
*facepalm*
Guys, i'm serious. Quit joking around before SOMEONE does something they'll REGRET! |
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soardlo
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:37 PM |
STFU fegget.
#NoRagrets
Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds |
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North1233
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soardlo
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:39 PM |
as the plague
Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds |
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:46 PM |
Guys, i'm serious. Quit joking around before SOMEONE does something they'll REGRET!
I'm serious that if you do not learn proper English soon, I'm going to literally smack a crowbar up your stupid head.
Not speaking figuratively. |
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:47 PM |
You need a character with the brains a character with the strength a character that has the speed a character that's slippery an adventurous character |
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Jegudiel
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| 17 Sep 2014 03:50 PM |
Main Character
Ben North1233, A dumb idiot kid who goes into the basement and read's old diary's. Ben North1233 is not the sharpest knife in the drawer and has some "Issues." His parents dont beleive him because his issues.
Apperance: Ben North1233 constantly wears a bike helmet to show his issues. He constantly wears cloths to small for him and is majorly overweight.
Hope it helps <3 |
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North1233
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| 17 Sep 2014 04:11 PM |
@above
... I don't even..... If you post something like that again.... The results won't be pretty. |
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idunwanna
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| 17 Sep 2014 04:13 PM |
Ben North12345, A dumb idiot kid who goes into the basement and read's old diary's. Ben North12345 is not the sharpest knife in the drawer and has some "Issues." His parents dont beleive him because his issues.
Apperance: Ben North12345 constantly wears a bike helmet to show his issues. He constantly wears cloths to small for him and is majorly overweight.
made it better |
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Jegudiel
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| 17 Sep 2014 04:23 PM |
| Notice how I said "Cloths" and not "Clothes." Use that to develop Ben North1233 even more. His "Issues" should be shown heavily with description on how ugly his bike helmet is and how his cloths are to small. The cloths should be basically like rags and only rap about 40% of his actul body. |
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North1233
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MusaMansa
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| 17 Sep 2014 05:33 PM |
need a stereotypical black guy and as a twist he should die last/survive |
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| 17 Sep 2014 05:38 PM |
| A scareeeeee pizza store mascot that jumps out at you! |
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North1233
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| 17 Sep 2014 05:39 PM |
| you guys seriously don't get this. |
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| 17 Sep 2014 05:43 PM |
you guys seriously don't get this.
That's usually the fault of the author, not the audience. |
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North1233
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| 17 Sep 2014 05:50 PM |
*facepalm*
I was asking for ideas for characters, not some stupid people who pretend to be scary. |
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MusaMansa
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| 17 Sep 2014 05:50 PM |
stereotypical black man always need one in a horror story |
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Sahanke
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| 17 Sep 2014 06:00 PM |
| What you need is a skinny dude who seems weak, and ends up being the only one alive at the end just like ever horror movie ever. |
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North1233
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| 17 Sep 2014 06:06 PM |
| Sahanke, I'll just use that guy for the main character's friend. Do you want to help make the story? |
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Sahanke
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| 17 Sep 2014 06:08 PM |
| Sure. I will help when I can. |
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