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| 15 Sep 2014 08:18 PM |
Prologue: The awakening.../
The darkness is finally broken by light. Very dim light, but it's nonetheless light. It is growing brighter by the second.
Am I being taken to heaven? you suddenly think. Then the realization hits you.
You never believed in religion. Unless you were somehow still alive, which you're pretty sure you aren't, then chances are...
But no. Moments later, the view of a hospital room comes into focus.
However... this wasn't a hospital room. Something just doesn't feel right. As if certain details are different.
"Another one has come too!" someone shouts
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:19 PM |
holy wait wait wait wait waaaaiiittt when you die you wake up in another form? but i don't realize waking up in another form |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:20 PM |
| And then it will be like darude - sandstorm music video |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:25 PM |
Chapter 1, surroundings.../
"Where am I"
A female figure stares at you with disbelief. Standing besides her is a girl, who looks very similar to her. She appears to be about 10.
Standing straight ahead are several doctors, as far as you can tell. On your other side too, contains several people wearing white.
No sound. Just silence. Nobody speaks. It's as if you were dead for years and had just come back.
But no, you are pretty sure you have never seen this place before. Never seen the female figures. Plus, something about the building still didn't seem right...
tbc.
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:32 PM |
Chapter 2, truth.../
After a moment later of some more observing, you begin to get inpatient, and increasingly confused. You want answers.
"Where am I?" you ask again
"Oh my god.." the tall female figure begins.
"What?" you ask
"I mean I just never imagined that... out of all the ones..."
This all seemed like a joke. Maybe it was part of the death process or something. Like the subconscious mind wanted to hang on to reality just a bit more.
You slowly get up. The things in your wrist fall off in the process. The people staring at you take a step back. A look of uneasiness spreads across their faces.
Then you realize what had been bothering you.
you're not human
tbc |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:43 PM |
Chapter 4, onto the end.../
"I don't understand....."
"Allow me to explain" the female figure begins.
"I am your mom. Or at least was. This is your sister. You have another one, but she too is stuck sleeping."
"What do you mean stuck sleeping?"
"This thing spread and... many people have become stuck in this sleeping state. We know that they are alive however. We tried calling out to them... everything. We get little or no responses. The government has decided to quit caring for them. That's why I lost hope in thinking..."
"Where are the others? The others who have awoken"
"They are in other hospital wards. Most of the people who enter this state wake up sooner or later. The only problem is, it takes around 100 years. And besides, none of them have memories of the sleeping state."
but why do i?
you hear a murmur from another bed within the room.
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:47 PM |
| then god came and said "everyone has free wifi" |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:47 PM |
It is often said,
your life flashes before your eyes.
This is true.
it is called,
Living. |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:49 PM |
Chapter 5, the end.../
"Where....?"
A female figure. You conclude that it is probably the sister your mom had told you about.
you look at her
Something didn't seem right. She didn't seem like how a normal person would respond to waking up to this, like how you had.
"Is this my...?"
"Yes."
"But wait then where...?"
no response
"Tell me where are we!"
silence.
then you realize what had been bothering you about the building.
It was so obvious.
How could you miss the fire?
end/
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:52 PM |
plotholesss IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO MISS A FIRE IN A HOSPITAL PLUS THE FIRE ALARM MUST OF GONE OFF
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:54 PM |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:56 PM |
idk you missed the fire okay
the point is you were really in the bad place and satan was messing with you |
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| 15 Sep 2014 08:56 PM |
TL;DR
"OT is like a saw, each spike of the blade is an OTer and we work together to eat away the woodworks of those we hate" |
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