Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 12:51 PM |
It was a terrible hot day in this s**t hole of a place.
I was bored and looking at the grey clouds in the distance...
I saw Elliot in the distance.
He saw some bees, he thought they were just regular honeybees.
Being the Angel that I was I flew over to see what the actual **** he was doing.
Those were not regular bees.
They were killer bees.
He started to get stung by them.
He was rolling on the ground.
I grew my wings and got my swords.
I flew over and grabbed him.
I gave him a Health Potion to heal him.
He was taking poison damage.
I had flew faster.
The Bees.
They.
Turned.
Into.
a GIANT BEE.
I didn't. I couldn't let Elliot drop. But I couldn't fly forever.
I had to.
I reset the universe.
And the Cycle Continued. |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 12:55 PM |
And the Universe was reset.
I was back on earth.
But the Sun was from North to South instead of West to East.
This created problems on earth.
Elliot was back at the same place again.
Only the bees were Snakes.
The Snakes loved Elliot.
And they had loved him a lot.
I was furious and Angry.
I killed all the snakes and reset the universe.
And the Cycle Continued. |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 01:13 PM |
WHAT THE HELL I HATE THE ANGEL NOW
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Luigi463
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:21 PM |
| Why do you hate the angel lol. |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:27 PM |
BECAUSE THE SNAKES WERE NICE TO THE BOY :(
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:29 PM |
| The Snakes represent evil ._. |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:30 PM |
oh nvm
Will there be some good snakes soon what no? ok
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:35 PM |
w8 m8 trying to recreate fan fiction with merlin eating a raspberry pi to have-
OH
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WRONG WEBSITE. |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:38 PM |
That 4th cycle wasn't made but the 3rd world reset.
I was sitting on top of the building while Elliot was eating ice cream.
Elliot: I love this ice cream what is it made out of?
Me: Honey.
Elliot: it tastes so good.
There were 2 suns now. I was slightly worried but not too worried. The temperature was colder for some reason.
Elliot: Hey -
Me: Yes Elliot?
Elliot: Thanks for saving from those bees.
I was seriously worried now.
Elliot remembered the 3rd cycle.
Me: Elliot how did you know about the bees.
Elliot: I also remember you.
Your name is A-
I hit the switch before OT could notice my real name.
And the Cycle Continued. |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:42 PM |
| Do you mind if i can make an alternative ending to this where Elliot becomes the snake whisperer |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:45 PM |
That was my initial 2nd part. He would have become a snake whisperer and revived major evil forces. I would have reset the universe. He would have still have been there but this time It was a battle between Order and Chaos instead of Good and Evil. |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:46 PM |
Sure make a custom ending.
But don't put it in this post. |
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:47 PM |
| https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Io3pdtdLzw |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:49 PM |
no not an evil snake whisperer possibly a good snake whisperer (infact when are there cases where there are snakes that followed their owner's rules?)
So
Elliot then became a snake whisperer and whispered to a certain snake an "Angelic Snake" And told her to gather up all the good snakes created by good people (Hardly any) And they have gone to war with an army of evil snakes the angel watched and sat back always telling elliot to becareful |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 03:59 PM |
...
But did the CYcle continue?! |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 04:02 PM |
@Luigi shhh hold on this is part 1 of my custom ending part 2 will be next when i think up an idea |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 04:06 PM |
This cycle was particularly long.
Elliot was turned into a Fox.
Yes you heard me.
A Fox.
Fox McCloud.
I didn't know what else to do.
But then I took a good look in the mirror and realized I turned into Jirbril.
And I said these words.
"I'M A GIRL ANGEL NOW!? WTF. I HATE THIS CYCLE"
Elliot was inside of an Arwing.
"I LOVE THIS THING! WOOOO YEAH!"
I didn't know what to do.
I reset the universe again.
But the Cycle Couldn't Continue.
OT didn't know how to respond to the story.
OT turned angry.
They rose.
They grabbed their forum weapons and attacked the universe.
Everything was broken.
Merlin died of Hip Cancer.
He died.
Of
It.
The story's universe was inaccurate.
The angel woke up.
Realizing he wasn't an Angel.
He was crying.
His imagination lived in secret
He cried because of the loneliness that struck him.
No one wanted to talk to him.
He was the one to ask for a small chat. No one else.
Just him.
He was alone...
and he had
Depression.
Anxiety.
Fear.
Fear of death.
Fear of Social Interaction.
Fear of everything...
The Angel wasn't an Angel anymore.
He was just a human living in his own imagination.
He did this sometimes.
But that was his cycle.
And.
The.
Cycle.
Didn't Continue.
It stopped.
He was crying, saddened, that no one wanted to talk with him, they were with their friends, they didn't want him... So he was lonely. Forever in the darkness of abandoned philosophers.
This was his story.
Diamond's Story. |
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| 13 Sep 2014 04:07 PM |
| This is actually interesting to me. |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 04:07 PM |
| End of Offical Story that I need to transfer to Microsoft Word. |
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randy295
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| 13 Sep 2014 04:11 PM |
CUSTOM ENDING PT 2
Elliot and his army made out of Good People And Good snakes they attacked and attacked Good vs Evil chaos vs order Eventually the good won
the angel somehow was killed in combat (Even tho there supposed to be immortal but whatever)
Then Instead of pushing a red button to end the cycle Elliot Then proceeded the other path the path where there will be no more cycle-restarting just living his life normal
This was the end of this story
(No Cycle continues,this is a custom ending that kinda counts as a good ending tho) |
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Luigi463
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| 13 Sep 2014 04:15 PM |
Custom Ending Legit Even though the Angel Died.
That Angel once the death occured the Cycle Couldn't continue. So once Elliot made Order win the Universe continued in it's current position. This wasn't good. The "Big Bang" Occured and the Universe had accidentally recreated Good and Evil after Order and Chaos.
Order lost the battle since Chaos won.
But Good creates Evil
Order Creates Chaos.
Good = Natural Order and Chaos.
Evil = Mechanical Order and Uncontrolled Chaos.
Your Custom Ending is the beginning of the Current cycle you and I are in. |
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