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| 07 Sep 2014 07:51 PM |
It was a regular Saturday morning and I woke up and got a towel and some clothes. I went downstairs, saw my brother on the couch, never looking up from his book, and walked into the bathroom. I began to turn on the water. The water was somewhat red and it took me a few minutes to notice, after it tasted delicious. It turned purple. It tasted different but still delicious. After a while, I heard a crash from somewhere in the room. My family assumed that I must have dropped something.
I heard a voice say "Oh yeah," very quietly. I looked out of the shower to see a hole in the wall. Nothing else was found. The water then turned back to normal but still tasted delicous. At this point I knew something was going on.
I looked outside once more just to see Kool-Aid Man™. "Oh yeah!" he shouted. My family still ignored it, but I knew I wasn't hallucinating. He ran out the hole into a very pleasant world. I put my clothes on and followed after him. I was now in Kool-Aid World...
I walked around the world slowly, hoping no one who wasn't human found me. I found Kool-Aid Man™'s house and ran back to my bathroom. The Kool-Aid Man™ flanked me and punched my chin. I was knocked unconscious.
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| 07 Sep 2014 07:53 PM |
I keep thinking he's a giant bottle of blood but when i get to him its just fruit punch |
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| 07 Sep 2014 07:55 PM |
| add something with bonzi buddy that will really scare the kids |
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:08 PM |
Chapter 2
I found myself on my own couch. I decided to go make some breakfast. In the kitchen, I couldn't believe it... It was the Kool-Aid Man™! I then woke up in a dark room, tied to a chair. There was a hammer on the table and a slightly cracked window. I tilt the chair until I fell to the left side and the ropes went loose. I broke the window with the hammer and kept the hammer so if any other glass things (like Kool-Aid Man™) decided to appear. I crawled through the window and noticed I was in a factory. This was no ordinary factory.
The factory was making more Kool-Aid Men™ and I was scared. I thought there was only one Kool-Aid Man. I walked until I heard a voice say "Hey, you! Stop right there!" I ran as fast as I could and I heard gunshots. I ran even faster after the gunshot. I opened up the vent and crawled into it.
The vent was darker than the room. I held out my hammer, awaiting danger. That guard, or whatever it was, didn't follow me. I reached the end and bashed the vent with my hammer. I fell into a pit with a red, snakelike creature. It was a good thing there was light. I creeped my way to the next room, halfway there until I heard a growl.
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:09 PM |
| https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sw9QRxkEhUI NOO |
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:13 PM |
bump this deserves more views
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:16 PM |
| http://youtu.be/Lw6Q8qNryMk |
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:20 PM |
chapter 3 is coming tomorrow
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:21 PM |
| fruit punch him in the face |
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:25 PM |
chapter 3 trailer *kool aid men cheering in an arena* *bruno mars sad music* *main character laying in the middle of the arena* *camera slowly goes up and reveals the kool-snake* coming 9/8/14
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:34 PM |
| 10/10 who was the main character? |
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:36 PM |
@randy it will be revealed
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| 07 Sep 2014 08:48 PM |
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| 08 Sep 2014 02:42 PM |
chapter 3
I turned my head to see a glass snake filled with Kool-Aid. I was terrified. It had huge fangs, blood red eyes, well, actually blood red everything! It was to terrifying to fight. The lights turned on and I turned out to be in an arena. It was a trap. They knew I would do this.
The snake pushed me to the ground near the middle of the arena. I pulled out my hammer as I was on the arena floor. I had a plan, I would break the teeth so it would not be much of a threat and then go for the other spots. The vent was sealed, I couldn't use that. Time to fight.
It attempted to bite me and I took a struck at it's tooth, letting some of the delicious liquid fall on the floor. I was surprised to see the glass stretch and bend like regular flesh. It was really weird. Sort of like something mutated. I was able to hit the creature's eye while one of it's teeth jabbed into my side. I needed to heal. Fast.
It stood up high, about to crush me, but I managed to dodge it and do the final hit on it. Straight in the chest. It couldn't get upright or else it would die. I have won. The Kool-Aid Men™ stopped cheering when this happened. Is this the end of my journey, or will I have to go deeper in the factory?
im not sure if i should still go on
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