keyyon
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| 03 Sep 2014 10:56 PM |
[Intro] Ayo, How do yall expect two of my favorite rappers to get on a track and for me not to do a remix. This is Calm Down 3.0 And it goes like this..
[hook] Shady on the mic. (Ayo calm down nickel) Steady on the left. (Ayo calm down Shady) (Yo forreal, this is a big deal, Shade Dawg chill) Shady on the mic. (Aye Take a Pill Shady) Steady on the left (Ayo calm down Shady) (Yo forreal, this is a big deal, Black Shady come on dawg chill)
[Black Shady Verse] OOH God it seems like i have appeared in a barren wasteland why play poker with an impractical joker who knows every single card in your hand. I dont know maybe the same reason why they called D-12 A BAND. Do you understand that im the chosen one you can jump me anytime you want, i wont even run ill just stand there in front of your gun cause i love to hear the noise when you reload. CLICK, POW, CLICK CLICK, POW, WOAH.. CLICK POW, POW POW CLICK CLICK, WAIT PAUSE You have bad aiming did you just shoot santa clause??! (S] Theres no debate about who is great you better let the love take over, or endure the hate My minds a candle and it needs to be lit im hot headed, my head is hotter than the humans torch flaming [S] Me and KingHurricane have an issue How is he gonna talk to me saying that he never diss you but behind my back , instead of stabbing it he launches a missile Name a rapper who is iller than me, and would scream [f] you to run dmc Who is a die hard fan who rides Eminems D and can almost copy the entire style of slim shady.. (OF COURSE BLACK SHADY} I walk down the mental hospital with Hopsin And he told me to get the bottles Poppin But whats up with Aetion being an emotional softie lately and Whats up with King Hurricane it seems like this 10 yr old baby is a female who has mood swings daily (ehh) my number one goal is to be the best at everything i do so imma diss these soft nerds who use words to do poetry on haiku's so i hurry up and reach for a christmas ball launch the damn ball down the haunted halls i hit the Thunder Records window on accident now im feeling ashamed that i didnt bring along any other friends to take the blame but thunder records window is the shape of a nintendo and tell me why almost every ARTIST signed to yo Labelo raps like Iggy AZALEA when she did black WIDOW!! Did i say labelo yes i did, now start to jiggle ho or face the wrath of the BLACK original king Piccolo. (DIE) back? I never went anywhere i just been underground i been trapped down there for a while havent you heard the strange sounds i've been burried alive, but somehow i survive maybe i died but it doesnt matter because i had been revived (F] THUNDER RECORDS, RDCD TOO, IMG TOO AND RADIX ALL THERE MEMBERS HAVE A 8 PM CURFEW, AND I EVEN HEARD THAT KIERA AGREED TO SURF YOU) Awe dont get so defensive you know im only saying that to get you mad and when i first met TheHotWildFire i never thought that he was a lad. But im tried of people sayin that i keep on messin with vets dawg and i get bad reviews, i dont give a [f] if its biased or not im used to getting picked on. Its like MT is there own blog until i say something so offensive it gives em a blood clog. probably right now typing [" I DONT DO THAT THIS GUY IS A RO RAPPER HE WILL NEVER MAKE IT IN LIFE LOOK AT HIS BLACK ASS HES TALKING ABOUT STABBING PEOPLE WITH A KNIFE"] You [f]k idiot trick sit on my stick cause if i was to say sit on my [d] i'd have a content deleted Song....... And i get tried of these newbies asking me am i famous its driving me nuts, it makes me want to spit inside they're Enus So let me explain this , let me tell you maroon Goons what my name is
*Chikit CHIKIT* BLACK SHADY
I had an affair with a super secret singer but its not my fault, i didnt realize she had a ring on her finger. That's just life, and here is an example of what is bad for your health Like combat and kinghurricane who has to *blowing sounds* himself because he was trapped in the north pole filled with man-elves so they taught them that the best way is to do it yourself. (Whose one of the best artist in ro-rap) What kind of stupid question is dat.
"HEY NIKKI MINAJ AFTER ALL THAT REPUBLICAN CRAP ON TWITTER YOU WERE LEAKING AND OBAMA WON, HOW DO YOU THINK THIS WILL AFFECT YOUR ENTIRE WEEKEND"
Im not the real slim shady so i dont stand up F4-GON See me riding shot gun in the fell off wagon with Eminem, Jay-z, Dr.Dre, and Kendrick after dat verse he did with imagine dragons. But like i said im a G.O.A.T. Greatest of all time I could fall off but i'll still be in my prime So lionhart fall back before you make me commit a crime. Cause ill be coming for you next, ill break out of this cell Like Dan did when i was watching tv and got his last Fan-MAIL.
*SHADY CHILL!!!!!!*
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keyyon
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| 03 Sep 2014 10:58 PM |
Calm Down 3.0 cause theyre multiple calm down's.
Busta ft. Eminem " CALM DOWN" Busta by himself "Calm Down 1.5" ( i think) Busta ft. Everlast "Calm Down 2.0" So mine
Calm down 3.0
i know i skipped 2.5 but You only live once you might aswell die now,
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james8522
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| 04 Sep 2014 11:16 AM |
9/10
Just dumbass MT'ers giving you 0/10 |
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james8522
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| 04 Sep 2014 01:15 PM |
| Of course, a biased vote. This is not even a decimal good. |
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| 04 Sep 2014 01:30 PM |
Not bad but there are a few lines I didn't think were right, like..
"You have bad aiming did you just shoot santa clause??! (S]"
So, 6/10 |
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| 04 Sep 2014 01:33 PM |
| Just awful you ain't no eminem you and the real one aren't good.. |
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:30 PM |
Lines that really don't have to do with the theme of the song, but I Read most of it and the rhyme scheme was great. Really short lines, then a long one that was like a perfect callout. 7/10
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ducky980
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:31 PM |
SYLLABLES TF YOU DONT IMPROVE YOU ARE AS BAD AS LION AND KING
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:59 PM |
So since you rated my own diss to you fairly, keyyon. I decided to take a look at the song you linked the diss to.
☣First of all, the impact was quite nice. I liked the fact that you had some disses about Thunder Records with KH (aka one of two targets) owning it. The only thing I can recommend is to keep rapping to add improvement.
☣The flow was all right but choppy in some parts.
"you can jump me anytime you want, i wont even run ill just stand there in front of your gun"
For example at here, if you added a few more syllables to the second line, the flow would be nicely done at these two lines.
☣The full idea or story of the song is nicely composed and simple. Just how a good song should have.
☣For my bonus category.... You did pretty good at adding metaphors, the song was quite unique, especially with the vivid imagines you popped into my head.
☣ In conclusion, the song was pretty good. There are some parts you could have improved on but all and all, I would have read this than do thirty minutes of work. I'll give this song a 7/10. The main factor to this rating was the metaphors. It makes this song a one of a kind, which was what raised this rating from a 6 to a 7. Keep improving and have a nice day xD.
☣Disclaimer: This is my opinion, not fact. So you can't say my rating is unfair xD. |
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keyyon
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:40 PM |
^ ty for a fair rating
for all the newbies who i dont know who gave it a 0/10 in this song gtfo lol to all of you who still compare me to eminem read the song again when i admit i ride eminem d and im not the real slim shady. And to all of you who were dissed in this song like lionhart who just cant give an unbiased rate to anyone with skill you have issues
@ducky The syllables in this back n forth
@thehotwildfire yh thanks. But i have a question for u lol |
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:43 PM |
"read the song again when i admit i ride eminem d"
O RLY? |
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:44 PM |
"And to all of you who were dissed in this song like lionhart who just cant give an unbiased rate to anyone with skill you have issues"
Be honest with yourself. Do you truly think you are that skilled? Your best factors were your multis and rhyme schemes and even those could use some work. |
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keyyon
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:45 PM |
Name a rapper who is iller than me, and would scream [f] you to run dmc Who is a die hard fan who rides Eminems D and can almost copy the entire style of slim shady.. (OF COURSE BLACK SHADY}
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james8522
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:46 PM |
| So you call people who gave negative ratings 'newbies'? Learn to accept opinions, not everyone is going to like your stuff. Accept it like ROBLOX accepts you embarrassing yourself on here. |
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:47 PM |
| i really doubt youve ever heard a run dmc record. |
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keyyon
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:52 PM |
| i've heard a few tracks from them but i didnt really like DMC |
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:53 PM |
"Name a rapper who is iller than me, "
On here? Not that it's a feat but: Street, Tokyo, Lion...
These are only a few that could kill you excluding myself.
"and would scream [f] you to run dmc"
Not a feat.
"Who is a die hard fan who rides Eminems D"
Not even good.
"and can almost copy the entire style of slim shady.. (OF COURSE BLACK SHADY}"
Slim Shady isn't even original and has been copied multiple times. You also can't mimic his ENTIRE style when you aren't on a record. I have a feeling you don't even know how to double time.
And biting isn't a good thing. |
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| 04 Sep 2014 04:08 PM |
| Ask away keyyon. I'll respond sometime later. |
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