Aetion
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| 02 Sep 2014 07:36 PM |
Enormity|
Bout to go all in someone hand me scissors I never thought I'd get an attack by interns Verbal decapitation setting eradicaton Kill everyone in the vicinity SO vividly you'd think it's a New World Conspiracy Ro Rap Game is MY Industry, my symphony Time to get dismissed by my brilliancy One vs Three, what a trilogy So why not get Thehot, and KH you see Trust issues so anyone signed to my therapy Take a skillet and kill it carefully My rhymes amazing Off beat like palpitation Black Shady with skin like Nyck Caution 6 Shady Records later here he is A label with a name common But that's none of my "bizz" My rhymes verbal I'm immortal Spinning the Earth in circle Flow so hard I can make the Nile go South Wanna diss? Let's see what spits outta your mouth Spit Rap Get ripped on Impact Your lack of rap matter of fact is the reason you get smacked Never come back I penetrate like the wall and a Tic Tac Rhymes sharper than Excalibur NATO Calibur, penetrate that cardiovascular Black Shady with the skin color opposite of Akon But I can make you darker with this fire - Napalm Bomb Can't handle such a flow Atomic That's why 4 people are dissing me, but you can't stop it Rhymes toxic get the concept? You get ripped apart, you're nothing, just an object Next one to diss this might get catastrophic Blur up like cataract My Flows are abstract Invading me is taking back your Habitat
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Here we go, bout to give you all an exlusive In a rap battle, you could call me the abusive... Thehotwildfire, making the actual comebacks Pointing at you with factual thumbtacks The reason for this, is your seasons are mixed This demon is split, the miskey is pleasing to fix Putting me on a hitlist, wishing I was gone for christmas But you had a split trip, let me escape like a flipped blimp Now I'm back, you lack the traps to even decieve me What you lack is smarts to even believe in me I was snooping around, looked at you being in a high school fan club Dude, dissing the world is not going to get you into a band pub Let me emphaize on the hate revitalized Your lies are really falling behind Being a bully, trying to get yourself a chain reaction but this pulley, doesn't have to bother on retracting You think I'm really kidding? Just go and search your name Spreading your chaos here sitting, you went into the wrong terrain What are you? A desperate boy? A severed toy? Whats the matter? Depressed cause you got DESTROYED?! You are the owner of an elite super saiyan group? No wonder you have no intellect or whatever it's called, see I'm slaying your ego, blunders is what you select This is really embarassing of you to own a nerdy place Get this into your clarity, you're only hurting space! "Are you smart enough to feel stupid, I hope so" Because you missed your real target unlike a torpedo Snoop clutch man, saw you around acting like you ain't down in town, making clowns frown while I went and lounged Dissing aetion and kh just because of an argument Congrats cause you went into my mind and fart in it You got the talent but not the needed skill This ain't even balanced, someone send me the bill! W-trap, seriously that is respected? Thats a name for the cave man You mysteriously are rejected, you know I slay plans? You're signed in thunder records, a bar above your boss But you have made a blunder when you forgot to floss (Jayrulz) Keyydronde, today is today, and yesterday is yesterday But pay day comes when you run away to your cenatary. I actually diss the paraites, why all the hype? You're just being as transparent as frozen ice I mean really, why are you a "swag monkey"? Maybe they should change you to "sad chunky". The direction you're going in, trying to pull lines outta your wallet Oh wait, you were showing wins? Cause only thing I'm seeing, is choclate As for zen, you can't count to ten, you ain't holding a pen Raps you rent, name was lent, not even a good diss was sent Look at you man, calling yourself a rap..what was it, shinaboi? I know you can't undderstand so I'll say this part slowly. Your name...ugh, I can't even talk about Like, your brain just went into a drought Mouse and the house, except you've been turned over Luck is with me, only thing you can do is hurt clovers. No need to continue with you, you're pathetic as it is You've been wiped off the menu, always had rap within. (satanboy123) This next guy, I'm just going to call mayhem Because hes been executed in my own snake pen Make sense, because you're acting pretty much stupid And no chanel won't marry you, she has her own cupid You're signed in another label? Man I'm surprised But you..just give like a homeless type of vibe I remember to your shady label that you've been dedicated But now you have just been fired, no such thing as compensation Wild n out? You ain't even a fan, my man It's about time you get a change of pants You nervous, popping like the weasel Hurt me, I know that you are not evil. A source of light is your krytonite I shine through the night, let me fight thats right, go into flight, write myself a dynomite, explode until you have retired Then show you what it means to have a fire. You can't even diss the label named Radix cause your raps have the quality of cakemix Try to say you all aren't fake, come on everyone stand up! Tell me that all of these people messed their plan up! For now I'm done, I've cooked these babies till they were overburnt When it comes to a fire and light, the slower one hurts
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You guys are more annoying than people who rap about money and lame cars. Cause KingRose is always usin the same bars. Go jump off a high cliff. Nobody wants you cause you're a wanna-be bl2ck who rides (D)'s. Saying you West Coast, then who sh0t you? And stop saying (S) in disses if it's not true. Somebody needs to h@ng you with st@bles. We all know I need Anger Management, But by judging your raps you're ment@lly d1sabled. And you were wrong when you said we weren't different. Nowhere near the same level, I'll make you disappear like I'm a magician. Everybody says I'm filled with fear, how? I just don't wanna battle a dude who's been working on the same EP for 2 years now. JayRuelz you need to know you are not Dre. I bet your next EP will sound like Yeezus by Kanye. Your mom says "Everybody knows you're a f4g honey." Mostly cause you're in a group called Swag Monkeyz. It's time for an investigation. Interrogating Keyyon about why he signed his brother, We deserve an explanation. There's never a time you say his flow's ill. He can't rap at all, He's 0-500 and get no k1lls. I already told you people I don't get you disrespected. But how you all think your music is good makes me wanna go detective. Hopefully you know you'll never get victory. With that so called rapper Taiske Uchimori. This is worse than Shady And Jayruelz being brothers. Cause Shady signed a "dude" that's in a group called Dogs and Puppy Lovers. When it comes to Shady Records you need to "Let It Go" Cause you can't be a rapper that gets excited over Naruto episodes. He's just a kid that draws anime houses. Then goes in the catalog and look's for 5 different star war's outfits. Thinking everything you spit goes the hardest. But you and Elemental in real life sound g@rbage. You people talk about when I rage. But I just listened to Ele's last track and he sounds like he's raging and is my @ge. You all act like primates. Throwing your (S) at each other not using your own lyrics, then saying I'm fake. Overall you all need extra help. And I'll diss Keyyon on a track alone, for now (F) Yourself. East Coast.
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Scribbos
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ChanelG
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| 02 Sep 2014 07:49 PM |
Well damn thehot o-o....
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| 02 Sep 2014 08:01 PM |
| Syllable count's looking better. |
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| 02 Sep 2014 08:17 PM |
| OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Vexull
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Wobull
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| 02 Sep 2014 08:36 PM |
| TheHot's verse is something I would expect in a diss I would take seriously . Call me a cave man? and I'm not even respected though |
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| 02 Sep 2014 08:49 PM |
Hurricane, let me explain you a thing: Raging can be a theme of a song Unleashed was that. I was dissin the types of people I hate in it.
Other than that, HotWildFire, your one of the only people I respect in Radix, and your verse was some of the best I've seen posted in awhile. 8.5/10.
Enormity, 7/10, didn't notice much rhymes the lower half, but I still like it.
Good diss guys, GG. |
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| 02 Sep 2014 08:51 PM |
Oh, and Hurricane; Dont get it twisted, if you wanna call me out on my voice, You can diss me IRL like I did to you. Bring it real or bring nothing. I'll take you down. |
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ducky980
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| 02 Sep 2014 08:53 PM |
king make sure not to spam metaphors out of desperation 3.2-3.7/5
thehot only major issues involve setup/word-order and badlands 6/10
kh word-choice, word-setup/order, summary-syndrome 3.2-3.7/10
all of the above had huge issues with syllables except for thehot who kind of near the ight area |
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| 02 Sep 2014 09:44 PM |
| Everyone was great although kinghurricane dragged you guys down with probably the biggest cornball verse. |
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| 02 Sep 2014 10:32 PM |
| enormity and the hot good deal |
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| 03 Sep 2014 02:33 PM |
| thehot 10/10 hurricane 9/10 |
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| 03 Sep 2014 03:23 PM |
| Golden, you will never be a rapper. You love to steal other people's ideas. Aetion's verse was okay at best and KH was a bit better, idk. 6/10 |
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Aetion
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| Joined: 02 Oct 2010 |
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| 03 Sep 2014 04:21 PM |
| @Lion When you haven't rapped all Summer long, not even once you get rusty for a bit. |
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iaw35
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| Joined: 22 May 2013 |
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| 03 Sep 2014 06:17 PM |
Amazing hot, you could of showed us you had some lyricism in you earlier Good Aetion Could have been a lot better if you applied yourself more Kh, you need to step up a bit higher, but other than tht great 9.2/10 |
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keyyon
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| 03 Sep 2014 11:11 PM |
LOL YOU WILL DISS ME ON A TRACK ALONE? With your verse you dissed yourself. xD. tbh Thotwildfire verse wasnt bad. 8/10 or 9.5/10
Aetion you was saying you was gonna sauce it up for me.. I don't see the sauce. Maybe you need to edit extra, YOU Did fall off, Join the wagon with me.. 5/10
and finally an excuse for a rapper give it up for HissyBish Hurricane. For making the W.O.A.T. Verse like come on i expected Thotwildfire verse to be whack but you proved me wrong. 3/10
gg guys
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keyyon
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| 03 Sep 2014 11:18 PM |
Weird thing is why yall mentioning group things in a diss? People have hobbies outside of rap lol. People like naruto. People like dbz. Were just not afraid to express what we like lol so i dont see how that is a problem. |
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JunJoe
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:45 PM |
...Well, this went better than what I thought. Only two people that rated it stupidly....
So I decided to take a look at how the diss went after thinking about it for a small bit and seeing that keyyon had posted his response. My own response to your comments is, Thank You.
I appreciate the honesty you all had given, and a few of you even posted ways on how to improve. I probably won't be releasing a song on roblox for another very long time, mostly because the MT community isn't much of a nice one to "ro-rappers". Which I don't consider myself to be part of because I don't post raps often.
Just remember, a diss is never serious in my view. A diss is mostly fun and improving your own rap skills. If any of you want to do something for me, keep doing what you're doing, and have a good time at these forums. Try not to get angry at something someone posted. So as I all ready said, thank you, and have a great day. :) |
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Wobull
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:53 PM |
I agree with thehotwildfire because I feel the same way about it too he's not a total cornball |
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| 04 Sep 2014 04:02 PM |
this is not music.
this is not music. |
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| 04 Sep 2014 04:05 PM |
| Indeed, desiredshark. All "ro-rappers" are really doing are writing lyrics, and we rate them on how much we enjoyed reading them xD. |
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