keyyon
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| 02 Sep 2014 11:26 PM |
Intro: a lot of people say that im “ a devil worshiper” or that I “am a player” or that I am just a plain out bully. Some say that I offend them a lot and I deserve to get my ass kick. Maybe that’s true. But. Whose gonna challenge a black devil with red horns.. HAHAHA.. - Rap Devil
[Black Shade Verse] Seems like my problem was being nice. I made a boy put his lice in a bag. Told him he was a f4g (waaah) then taped his mouth shut. Told him “shut up before I crack a nut” Maybe I was joking or maybe I wasn’t all I know is that he was curious. So I grabbed my knife, and put an end to his life then smiled for the camera *why so serious* they say that I need to stop but this is just my addiction. BUT in addition to rap, it had to come from the eviction and in my imagination im speakin to alot of nations tellin them that black shade is real and that none of his raps are fiction. I enjoy Killing sprees, yeah blame that all on me. Cause I am the maniac! Now I know what your saying maybe im right or im just a kid who used to eat black crayons (yuck) and it seems that you only wanted to collab with me cause i was popular, im tried of seeing you stare at me with your binoculars. You probably wish you was brave as me. Well the fact of this act isn’t as cool as that but imma teach you how I act. I act all nuts nahh man i am insane Say I don’t give a [f] that’s my claim. And scream “ I’m aids free” well that’s a fact! Yall probably wondering when am I going to get to the point. After my addiction I got an eviction so I got angry and started to smoke a joint!
{Hook} This is my addiction… (EATING, KILLING, DRINKING, SMOKING) This is my ADDICTION! ( smoking, sniffing, selling, dealing, drive by, shooting, stealing, lying)
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Altair55
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| 03 Sep 2014 02:58 AM |
| Wow man epic this is just simply epic |
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Wobull
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| 03 Sep 2014 07:40 PM |
| I think you put out some random bars just for the sake of a rhyme. It wouod have been better if you didn't, because I like what you're trying to say. Maybe 7/10ish? Yeah. |
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| 03 Sep 2014 07:48 PM |
| Ty for the constructive criticism. @wobull |
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