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Re: Plea the Fifth (Response)

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keyyon is not online. keyyon
Joined: 15 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 1296
02 Sep 2014 11:06 PM
Time for me to plea my case. I plea the fifth to everything they said but...

Well.....

KING HURRICANE.......................

No lala land, no more games
it time that you take a step into shady's lane
You and that little liar lion
need to step down, i mean come on, was you and aetion even tryin
they'res no denyin that lion verse wasnt okay and ill admit it was kind of dope
but king hurricane if you think that one verse u did was gonna tear me down you bettah find a rope
and tie your neck around it and take a leap of faith
or tie and double knot a rock to your foot and float across the arctic lake.
Your gonna need to put your life to an end before i do it myself
and im a take you to a place where no one will hear you scream "HELP"
Imma take you first and turn the lights off
upper-cut you twice, then spray your face with lysol
let it sting you in the eyes
so you can open it up with everything a blurred line
they're wont be any surprise that im the one who the cops should come for
when you and your mother take a trip to the groccery store
but you suddenly have to go to the bathroom
i spray the room with poison but at first is smells like perfume
you die from the smell and your in the bathroom more like a cell
and we will finish on how i killed you when i see yo punk ass in hell.


+AETION+
Now who is this guy tryin to come at
it took you this long to respond back.
I mean hell your a radical and you make [s] so dramatical
i thought that your verse was gonna be like disney on ice, magical
but it was nothing but a fatal mistake and i was laughing my ass off
so hard that blood began coming out when i cough
alot of people can say i fell off, or that i became soft
well i did, i hit my wagon, and you became nun but a FEGON
Your the puny little kid who still listens to imagine dragons
oh your that guy from minecraft who gets upset when he gets killed cause he was laggin.
You claim your a legend, why are you braggin
about a title or a rank dat you dont deserve
you aint do nun but be drakes side bish.. W-Word.
yeah i heard altar threw you to the curve
that could just be a rumor that i heard or it could be true
it doesnt matter what position you choose ill keep on [f]in with you.
You can end my fake excuse for an ro-rap career
i wont give a [f] ill still be here
typing the type of topics that would make your cousin ball in tears
i spit this whack verse without fear of bad reviews
cause i never gave a [f] this was all just roleplay
KingHurricane and Aetion make a beautiful couple who enjoys cosplay
aetion i dont know why you would allow such a horrible rapper to collab with you on a song.
And king hurricane thinks that he can go on in this "rap game" without me that's funny.
HOW IS IT POSSIBLE FOR YOU TO RAP ABOUT INCOME WHEN YOU HAVE NO MONEY.
Now all i gotta say is hold up wait a minute
when my writer block is over both of yall bishes is finished....


+TheHotWildFire+
I dont even know why you were in on this track
maybe its because this was your chance to respond back
with some other rappers who may be black
and they will help you pick up your slack
you improved over the months, but rappin is still a skill you lack
you should just keep on producin ro rap music and earnin fake racks
im dumbing this down so you can understand
i got this entire warefare in the palm of my hand
you know how i can get i start out easy
most of my rhymes cheesy
most of em are basic until it gets real then i might go all out
tell me how can you be a wild fire, when your nothing but a gentle flower who will never sprout.


This is just round 1.
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SomePunk is not online. SomePunk
Joined: 13 Feb 2009
Total Posts: 8224
03 Sep 2014 12:49 AM
LOL ITS PLEAD NOT PLEA
please learn what you are writing about first
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keyyon is not online. keyyon
Joined: 15 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 1296
03 Sep 2014 08:02 AM
^ Nerd xD
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KingRoseXI is not online. KingRoseXI
Joined: 03 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 2872
03 Sep 2014 08:38 AM
Nice 8/10
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SomePunk is not online. SomePunk
Joined: 13 Feb 2009
Total Posts: 8224
03 Sep 2014 04:43 PM
sorry that I know 3rd grade vocabulary
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keyyon is not online. keyyon
Joined: 15 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 1296
03 Sep 2014 07:42 PM
rates
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ducky980 is not online. ducky980
Joined: 01 Sep 2012
Total Posts: 9083
03 Sep 2014 07:44 PM
2.3-2.6/10
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
Joined: 07 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 8168
03 Sep 2014 07:48 PM
Some long lines like
"but king hurricane if you think that one verse u did was gonna tear me down you bettah find a rope"
Broke the flow when I tried rapping it

And
"aetion i dont know why you would allow such a horrible rapper to collab with you on a song.
And king hurricane thinks that he can go on in this "rap game" without me that's funny."
Didn't really sound too good didn't it? Should have tried some internal rhymes if you couldn't have thought of some word for the end
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keyyon is not online. keyyon
Joined: 15 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 1296
03 Sep 2014 07:55 PM
^ if i cant think of a word that rhymes with something that is too basic at that moment i just move on to the next line.

But i understand where your coming from
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1Riblock1 is not online. 1Riblock1
Joined: 02 May 2011
Total Posts: 4771
03 Sep 2014 08:05 PM
"^ Nerd xD"
lol hcx
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keyyon is not online. keyyon
Joined: 15 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 1296
03 Sep 2014 08:12 PM
Rates or comments>
Constructive Criticism please.
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ElementalBlades is not online. ElementalBlades
Joined: 05 Jun 2013
Total Posts: 224
03 Sep 2014 08:43 PM
8.2/10

Rhymes ok,
too tired to try to rate this well,
but its ok,
rhymes good,
like the lyrics...
idk wat to say here lol
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keyyon is not online. keyyon
Joined: 15 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 1296
04 Sep 2014 04:09 PM
rates
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Scribbos is not online. Scribbos
Joined: 11 Mar 2010
Total Posts: 7591
04 Sep 2014 04:13 PM
honestly brah you need improvin. hit up my wip thread nd see what you think of that homie
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