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| 03 Sep 2014 03:07 PM |
You all will hate this so much but I just really hate this person so Its also hella long No one will probably even read this so embarrassing
V 1] I love writing about those who don't understand, get your head down, learn how to land. You learn it all but you fail at life, you're gonna break in strife like a stick with no weight. You never learned how to hate. You're destined for a dreadful fate. Don't know your self control. This is what I know, though.
C 1] You don't know yourself, lose respect in everyone else, because deep down you're a dreadful liar, you set your self confidence on fire, for the sake of everyone else. You put too much faith into the people you'll lose, I'm sorry, you'll only have yourself, so blow your fuse.
V 2] Life isn't a fairy tale. I know I'm young but I've blocked out the sun and now I know how it feels to be dead, I've only being living for a while, and you like to live instead. But let me tell you something that I've never told anyone, I want you to go and learn, and I want your happiness to burn. Not for being arrogant, just to watch the tables turn.
C2] You don't know yourself, and you don't know anyone else. You find trust isn't always so wise, because you wouldn't miss my demise. So I know that you're a liar, don't deny it, cause this town is on fire. You put too much trust in the people who you suppose must. They must.
BRIDGE] Its another story in the dread of my life, but I'll tell you, but I don't want to cause strife. You want to live, to succeed, and not fall, but no one will catch you, baby doll. You have to get up and live on your own, and you won't have a place to call home. All you do is block me out, but I can be so loud. You push it all aside like I'm nothing new, you think you beat me, one day I will be beating you. So listen closely and close your mouth. I want to get lost in the lonely crowd...
C3]You left me all alone in dirt and sand, but now I can finally stand. I don't care about you anyway, and you don't care about me. Well that's just what we'll have to see. I won't be thanking you, you didn't do a thing.
MONOLOGUE] I used you so I wouldn't be lonely
but now I'm placed in front of people who care
I won't even remember you were once there. |
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Vexull
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| 03 Sep 2014 03:25 PM |
True story PWPP?
Otherwise, nice. |
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| 03 Sep 2014 03:39 PM |
| Stop songwriting seriously your bad at it |
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Vexull
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| 03 Sep 2014 04:38 PM |
Thanks vex. and yeah, true story. I will never stop writing, because its what makes me happy so go kiss a shrub Also, all these creepy alts keep bullying people idek And i swear i locked this one |
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Indiella
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| 03 Sep 2014 04:46 PM |
| Word of advice, next time space your verses out differently because the way it's spaced makes me not want to continue reading it because it's as if I'm reading an essay. |
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Vexull
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| 03 Sep 2014 09:18 PM |
Lmao.
Also, Musicman is Master, so hate on him. |
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Wobull
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:20 PM |
I spaced it out that way, because of the form of the song. Its for a reason. Also, I don't like reading ro-raps because its so like long and stuff so |
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| 04 Sep 2014 02:26 PM |
| Actually it's not depending on how long the bars are. But even with long bars it doesn't take long to read it. |
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Wobull
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:23 PM |
okay. also, i thought we wrote a song together and became kind of buddy buddy why do you have a tude on me r u 2 cool |
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Wobull
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:25 PM |
| u called ro rap hard for the eyes so ya had to fight back but we cool k? |
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| 04 Sep 2014 03:26 PM |
not because its bad, just the layout. and k |
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Vexull
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| 04 Sep 2014 08:18 PM |
| RoRap is bad enough without the kne large paragraph of words. I agree with PWPP, space it out more rorappers. |
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Vexull
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| 05 Sep 2014 02:08 PM |
Everyone calls me a ro-rapper.
I'm not rap. |
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