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| 28 Aug 2014 09:32 PM |
{ Before Ye,Read this Application,Setted to 'Beside' and 'zqa' only,there is alot of reading,as his backstory is detailed. 'Ye have been warned' }
{ OOC / Roleplaying Skills : I do know not to godmod,powergame,I know what OOC/Out of Character is,I know was IC/In Character is,and I know how to use quotations,how to describe my actions,etc,etc. }
{ " Backstory : "Ruby",a born Orian,grew up with his father,in one of the various Wreckages of the Great Desert Of Icarus,mainly in one of the Abandoned Mines,near Steamson,He grew up with no known traces,of who,or where,his siblings,or mother we're,just known to grow up with his father,his father,had seem to be apart of the Rebellion before,as he seemed to be a powerful fighter,..,he was mainly told when he was young,about the History of This Desert..,the War of The Zones..,and the Wars that recently,and lately have been happening,but what he was most intrigued in,was when he would speak about The 'Rebellion',and mainly the other Group,or Faction,The Columbian Order,known as the Derectrum,or mainly just 'The Order'.." }
{ " At The Near Age of 15,a few years later,he was told by his Father,to train,yet he had seen a War going on,explosions,Warships,and Blimps..,and People,with Jetpacks,flying,in the nearby Town of Steamson,they soon took cover in the Mine,living in there from there out on,due to risking there lives if they stood out in the Desert,soon later,his Father taught him how to use Aura,and how to be fast with a blade,as they would begin to regularly Train everyday,eat,train,spar,sleep,repeat,He would do this everyday,until he soon became a good father,to soon redeem a blade called,Firegale,a Mystic 10 Foot Longsword,that is mainly channeled by Aura,which was a insane help to his Sword.." }
{ " At The Near Age of 20,5 Years Later,A Group Of Order,Soliders,came to the Abandoned Mine,as they found 'Suspicous' activity,in said mine,as they soon went in there,they found the two,as they protected there home,one of the Order Soliders,vicously slashed across his head,so it would hit it two eyes in one deadly slash,which due to how unhealable the Injury was..,would make him blind forever..,which is why,in present time,he now wears a Completely Gold Visor,to protect his upper facial area,from attacks... " }
{ " Finally near Present Time,He would leave the Wreckage,to wander the Desert,till he found the town of Steamson,he would wander it,seeing all the local factions,and all the fights,he mainly now sticks out Steamson,as he finds it 'intresting',yet he hasn't known which side to side with,but he is more near the Rebellion Side,as he finds the Columbian Order,not the 'correct' way in the World,he still though is confused,as he hasn't found any type of Faction or Group to side with,or Join.. " }
{ Age : " 26 " }
{ Race : " Orian " [ Admin/Moderator approved by 'Jackswigert' ] }
{ Height : " 11'7 " }
{ Weight : " 200 lbs [ Mainly Built Out Of Muscle due to Training ] }
{ Skills/Powers : " Advanced Aura User " }
{ Weapon : " Firegale " } |
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MrVincent
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| 28 Aug 2014 09:33 PM |
Did you repost this to advoid what I said or something?
Like I said, good story, badly executed.
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Xiord
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| 28 Aug 2014 09:35 PM |
Damn it, this is a repost. Now I want to rebel. |
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MrVincent
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| 28 Aug 2014 09:37 PM |
I see you've only edited like, 5 or 6 details.
And then, this isn't even a story or an RP. It's like they had a baby and then left it to die.
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| 28 Aug 2014 09:54 PM |
| Acutally this is a Roleplay/Game,Icarus,a Steampunk Type Roleplay Game,at some extent. |
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| 28 Aug 2014 09:59 PM |
| I agree,But the game is still in Alpha,when Beta is added,they might have a Sword Update,etc etc. |
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| 28 Aug 2014 10:00 PM |
| @Vincent It's not supposed to be a Story nor RP,as if you can read,it is a Application/BIO for my Character,Ruby. |
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