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Re: already in love BY KIKI

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nickiminaj903 is not online. nickiminaj903
Joined: 01 Nov 2011
Total Posts: 446
13 Oct 2012 09:50 AM
you dont have to try to hardddd
you you already have my heart
its just right from the start
you dont have a thing to provveee
not when theres a thing on youuu
cuz im already in loveee
with u

ok honey i got some secrets to tell u
how can i even get through
its just me and u
getting i know u like me so
so just say your fear u wont know
i know u like got it got it
so there nothing to be afraid about
u got me on speed dial
man im in a pile
all i need is u to smile
ok time to start the case in trial

you dont have to try to hardddd
you you already have my heart
its just right from the start
you dont have a thing to provveee
not when theres a thing on youuu
cuz im already in loveee
with u

ok just say ur name
no not really this isnt a game
i know u feel the same
im kiki from the tropicals
now im historical
yep thats how it goes

you dont have to try to hardddd
you you already have my heart
its just right from the start
you dont have a thing to provveee
not when theres a thing on youuu
cuz im already in loveee
with u (IM KIKI)


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sweetiepiek07 is not online. sweetiepiek07
Joined: 18 May 2011
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13 Oct 2012 09:51 AM
after reading this, my head hurts.

~My one regret in life is that I am not someone else~
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link6249 is not online. link6249
Joined: 06 Jan 2011
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13 Oct 2012 10:26 AM
Why you say "I'M KIKI"

And there's a rule that requires to use grammar.
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nickiminaj903 is not online. nickiminaj903
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13 Oct 2012 10:29 AM
kiki is my stage name ok and i do use proper grammar
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link6249 is not online. link6249
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13 Oct 2012 10:59 AM
No you don't...


and what stage? .-.
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crayon24 is not online. crayon24
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13 Oct 2012 11:06 AM
m00zik frms
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Overrwatcher2 is not online. Overrwatcher2
Joined: 17 Aug 2012
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13 Oct 2012 11:40 AM
get out

*end transmission*
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ducky980 is not online. ducky980
Joined: 01 Sep 2012
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13 Oct 2012 12:01 PM
Im actually quite proud of this! This is a major step up for nicki
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nickiminaj903 is not online. nickiminaj903
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13 Oct 2012 12:22 PM
thx ducky all ur advice really helped out
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nickiminaj903 is not online. nickiminaj903
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02 Nov 2012 01:20 PM
mm
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
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02 Nov 2012 01:45 PM
"and i do use proper grammar"

me fail english thats unpossible
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Coolguy65789021 is not online. Coolguy65789021
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02 Nov 2012 02:19 PM
This is horid.
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nickiminaj903 is not online. nickiminaj903
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17 Nov 2012 09:22 PM
i like the song idc what u guyz say
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
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17 Nov 2012 09:25 PM
"i like the song idc what u guyz say"

1. you only say it because you wrote it
2. if you don't care, then you wouldn't have bumped this thread, let alone said anything in the first place
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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17 Nov 2012 09:32 PM
This is bad, like everything else you've written. Either improve heavily, or just stop.
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RobloSamus is not online. RobloSamus
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17 Nov 2012 10:23 PM
Of course you couldn't finish your incoherent wall of text that you call "a rap" without saying "I'M KIKI" like a moron
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nickiminaj903 is not online. nickiminaj903
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17 Nov 2012 10:39 PM
U guyz r so annoying now i know y u guyz cant get girlz and people loe my music maybe rap isnt ur ting
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smartcarter259 is not online. smartcarter259
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17 Nov 2012 11:44 PM
I've had girlfriends before...i'm sure no one likes your music

~Snake Bite Emergency Repair Kit~
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
Joined: 17 Oct 2008
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19 Nov 2012 12:49 PM
"U guyz r so annoying now i know y u guyz cant get girlz and people loe my music maybe rap isnt ur ting"

1. you don't know about my love life
2. even if I was single, why would I care? I'm the kind of person that if I'm in a relationship, then I stick to it, and don't search for ones in desperation
3. those people who "loe" your "music" are other ro-rappers who just kiss everyone's ass
4. I love rap, but you're still garbage
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
Joined: 17 Oct 2008
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19 Nov 2012 12:56 PM
oh and
5. learn to take criticism, you say you don't care, yet you keep replying to everyone and getting butthurt over no one liking you
6. you said you'd improve, yet you're still just as bad as ever
7. people who work their own name into their own songs are d˜˜˜˜o˜˜˜˜u˜˜˜c˜˜˜h˜˜˜es
8. stop adding onto more letters onto words like thisssssss. it's annoying, and a sign of bad lyricism
9. read some poetry from the greats like Edgar Allen Poe, and Shel Silverstein. Listen to some music with good lyrics to them like Opeth, or if you're into rap, J Cole, Tech N9ne, and Big KRIT.
10. nicki minaj is a bad idea to get influence from, as well as pretty much almost every modern mainstream rapper. even actual fans of hip-hop think she is terrible. stop listening to her and listen to some better rappers
11. this "song" was meaningless, don't try to be deep since you'll end up failing
12. use grammar, lack of grammar is another sign of bad songwriting

that's all I have for now
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polska900 is not online. polska900
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19 Nov 2012 01:26 PM
Meanies
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Embankments is not online. Embankments
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19 Nov 2012 01:37 PM
The only person who somewhat managed to stick their name or nickname into a song without looking like a prick has probably been Eminem with "My Name Is".
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Overrwatcher2 is not online. Overrwatcher2
Joined: 17 Aug 2012
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19 Nov 2012 01:59 PM
Crash made some really good points, especially about reading poetry from people like Edgar Allen Poe (My personal favorite) and Shel Silverstein

let's cut his feet off
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ducky980 is not online. ducky980
Joined: 01 Sep 2012
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24 Aug 2014 12:01 PM
lol was i really the only one who noticed the plagiarism

hold hold hold hold me tight now
cuz im so so good to goo
dont say dont say goodnight
you knowwww
you had me at hello

necrobump
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Wobull is not online. Wobull
Joined: 07 Apr 2014
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24 Aug 2014 12:03 PM
since you necrombumped
no, i see it

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