TheNman1
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| 24 Aug 2014 01:44 PM |
(This is a story that I started to make about a year ago, and I stumbled upon it again and thought about reposting it, maybe even trying to continue/finish it. I'll post what I had finished here, and if I get good feedback/support for it then I'll try to finish it.
Now keep in mind that this was my writing style from a year ago, so there will probably be a few errors in spelling and grammar. Some of the storyline might seem a bit off as well, but if I decide to continue this series then I will edit it all to look cleaner and better.)
Month 4, Day 23. Location: NBC Holdout
This war started ever since ROBLOXians started using the terms "Noob" and "Guest", only about five months ago it got serious. I am Alecmac00, and I have been in here for most of those months. We were forced to, all the NBCs, after the first month. F.E.A.R troops guard us, since they are considered NBCs and Noobs like us. During our months here, we have had no information about the war. Nothing, except that we are losing. We don't even know what it looks like outside anymore. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I am planning a escape. I have gotten together a few people. Stellyboy, Caneat, Loralsnider, and Fireballracer are all with me on escaping. Tomorrow night, we will attempt our escape and finally get the information they never gave us.
Month 0, Day 4. Location: ROBLOX News Station
"...and now time for our lead story. Over five thousand ROBLOXians with BC, TBC, and OBC have rioted on NBCs and Guests! This has been going on for a few days now, and most ROBLOX militaries are supporting the riots by giving Civilians with the BC weapons and ammo, giving them advice on how to kill them, and even creating militias throughout many ROBLOX towns and games! One of our crew members, Wilsonpwn, even died in one of these riots because he wasn't BC! We have gotten reports of many people contacting the admins of ROBLOX to stop these riots somehow and keep the number of players from dropping, but no responses have been heard from them at all. This is a warning to all NBCs who still want to play ROBLOX! Do not go on these games, as BC people will fire upon you! The Town of Robloxia, The City of Robloxia, The Pizza Place, All ROBLOX Military Group Bases, The Complex Roleplay..."
Month 0, Day 12. Location: F.E.A.R Base
Three attacks have been made on this F.E.A.R Base, and the soldiers have been forced to stay there. People only got in, not out. Except the Generals and up. One day, after a devestating attack on that base, Sonic came to it to help the soldiers train a little. Yet, he was there for something else. He walked through the base, took the elevator down to the Nuclear Weapons room with the Authorized Personal Only elevator, and walked towards the nuke warhead, ready to be launched at the touch of a button. Sonic walked towards it with his guards and greeted the scientists working there. He then went over to the nuke. A scientist looked over and shouted, "NO DON'T-" but it was too late. The nuke was launched with all its warheads heading to different BC supporting bases around ROBLOXia. After the nuke was launched, the alarm went off. Many soldiers wanted to get down, but none were allowed to go in, because they weren't authorized. They had no clue what was going on until Sonic came up the elevator and explained in a meeting what he did an hour later. The war had officially begun.
Month 0, Day 25. Location: Several ROBLOX Games and F.E.A.R Bases
NBCs and Guests, even though most didn't understand what the F.E.A.R soldiers were saying, were trained to fight with their lives against the militias and militaries around 75% of all the games in ROBLOX. The Admins still weren't acting up, so Sonic decided to try recruiting NBCs for a month, and if they succedded in the war after that month, they would continue that streategy. If not, then they would build NBC Holdouts to keep everyone at to keep them safe. F.E.A.R had over 10,000 soldiers and was the largest group on ROBLOX, so they thought they would succeed with this plan. If not, they were fighting the war on their own.
Month 1, Day 16. Location: NBC Holdout
Alecmac00 is thrown into a NBC Holdout. They tell him he must stay there for the majority of the war. BC militias and militaries were nearby the Holdouts-closer then F.E.A.R thought they would be at this time-so until they retook the area, then they would be freed. Hopefully.
Month 4, Day 24. Location: NBC Holdout
Stellyboy, Caneat, Loralsnider, Fireballracer and I (Alecmac00) are all in different bunk rooms. F.E.A.R soldiers patrol the hallways to make sure no one gets out. "It is for your safety! Do you want to die out there?" That is what they say when we try to escape the first time. The second time, a little more harsh, and they punish us. Third time, well, the only person who has tried a third time died for reasons unknown, but most of us think that F.E.A.R soldiers shot him. We tried escaping tonight. Our plan was to get a weapon from a F.E.A.R soldier and take him out without killing him, just in case we need it when we get outside. After that, we'll avoid hallway patrols, get the keys to the door to the outside, and escape. Most of us got out. Most of us. When we stole the gun, another soldier saw us and started shooting at us. Loralsnider died from those shots. We quickly got out though. What we saw wasn't pretty, and what we are going to do later I knew wasn't going to be better.
Month 4, Day 21. Location: Vaktovian Empire Rally Point
Vaktus walked up to the stand with a few of his Generals. Private First Class Shadowblacksmith stood with the crowd of soldiers and listened to Vaktus. The Vaktovian Empire was one of he groups killing NBCs and F.E.A.R soldiers. (No offense to them, this is just a story.) Vaktus proudly announced to the listening soldiers that in three days time, they would march forward, not falling back and take more territory for BC in the war. They would also attack several NBC holdouts to eliminate F.E.A.R soldiers guarding and normal noobs so that they could make the number of NBC members go down. After the speech, Shadow prepared for the attack in three days.
Month 4, Day 22. Location: ROBLOX HQ
The admins met together-Builderman, Telamon, PlayRobot, all of them. They discussed about the war and decided on what to do during and after the war. The plan was that during the war right now, they would bring BC prices up so that the admins could get more money to hopefully support the NBCs later. Then, they decided that if the BC members win the war, they would do one of two options. One, completly shutdown ROBLOX and make another site just like it, except without BC. Two, they would make every person wanting to join have to pay the BC price in order to join. If the NBC won the war, they would keep things the same, except keep an eye on BC members from that moment on.
Month 3, Day 15. Location: Edges of the ROBLOXia Borders
"Come on, James, we got to get out of ROBLOXia before they find us." "I know, I know...but, what is outside of ROBLOXia? Not many have been outside the borders you know..." "Well then we'll find out." I, TheNman1 and my greatest friend, jamestoosh were escaping ROBLOX. We were both BC, but any BC person found in ROBLOX was forced to grab a weapon and take place in a city to take out any fleeing NBCs. The thing was, is that jamestoosh and me both wanted to help the NBCs. We were escaping for now, until we found out how we could help in this war.
Month 3, Day 16. Location: A Mile into Unknown Territory
James and I had finally gotten out of ROBLOXia. It was a hard job to do, considering that the border is guarded by the Unclimable Mountain Range. We made it, though. As soon as we crossed the border, we looked across the land that the mountains were blocking. A huge forest was all we saw. No one had torn the place down to make any games or anything. It was the first natural thing we had ever seen in the world of ROBLOX. James said to me, "I wonder if anyone is out there...any other ROBLOXians...or a different kind of living spicies." We both stared out and wondered, then started our descent into the uncharted territory.
Month 4, Day 24. Location: Near NBC Holdout
Shadowblacksmith and the rest of the Vaktovians in his squad had cleared out this NBC Holdout of everyone there. The NBCs were dead and the F.E.A.R soldiers who surrendered were taken as POWs. The next NBC Holdout was about a mile away. It should only take them about ten minutes to get over there and start attacking. Some of the squads stayed to guard the NBC Holdout just in case as the rest of the army walked forward, step by step.
Month 4, Day 24. Location: In the hills by a different NBC Holdout
Alecmac00, Stellyboy, Caneat, and Fireballracer were all hiding behind the hills by the NBC Holdout they were once imprisoned in. They now saw almost all of The Vaktovian Empire taking over other NBC Holdouts and heading for this one. They knew they had to leave, so they ran far away, towards the City of ROBLOXia.
(And that's all I got around to. Feedback?) |
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| 24 Aug 2014 03:33 PM |
Do you know what this reminds me of? That YouTube channel that I kinda like but doesn't have many subs.
The channel made a 20 minute long film about a war of BC and NBC and it even had a holdout in it as well.
It's name was The noob: something. |
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| 24 Aug 2014 06:28 PM |
Also, I really like this, it keeps almost breaking the fourth wall a lot.
Are there any sequals? The story seems unfinished. |
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| 24 Aug 2014 06:37 PM |
Good, I like it.
Also, could I submit suggestions? I have never been so interested in a story about Roblox this much.
Also, the video is called The Noob: The Roblox War I think.
I advise watching the other noob videos as well. |
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| 24 Aug 2014 07:02 PM |
I have an idea
But it is so crap and cliche know will post it here.
Outside of the borders are different games, such as the unknown territory could be a forest in minecraft.
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TheNman1
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| Joined: 16 Dec 2010 |
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| 24 Aug 2014 07:35 PM |
@Gearblade I kinda just chose random people off of the Peoples page when finding people for this story, but I guess I could add in a few people who want to be in. I won't guarantee that you'll get the part you request, but I can guarantee you'll be in it.
@Eager *GASPS* TBC scum! When I wrote this story, I was BC, but at least I had enough sense to get one of my friends and run off into the mountains in order to not be the bad guy! You, on the other hand, are one of the merciless rioters who's adding to this genocide! This massacre! This tragedy!
*Nah jk, my RP self just felt like coming out once ya said that* |
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TheNman1
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| Joined: 16 Dec 2010 |
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| 24 Aug 2014 10:25 PM |
| Great to see that people are loving the story. I've decided that I'm definitely going to edit this beginning part to make it sharper and cleaner and continue to finish this story. Any feedback about things you liked/disliked or any suggestions to the plot (because that's still developing in my head) would be appreciated |
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