Indiella
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| 23 Aug 2014 09:51 PM |
Lose It All - Indi ft. Fiammata Reloaded Records -------------------------------
[Verse 1 - Indiella/Indi] He say he was a football player, a Quarterback Now he's on the street beggin' for dollars, wanting his quarters back Finding George Washingtons' on the ground, he thinks he's in a cent Blaming everyone else for what he did, he's always innocent He's begging for change but he knows he can't do it, He once told me "you'll never win, don't put your mind to it" He's picking up these coins only to see one side of a face, Toss it in the water and hope God'll spread his mighty grace Unlike him, I'm Indiella, I keep it real for those who ain't heard of me Wasted his dollars, look at the present at how I'm valuable, that's current - see? (currency) Bring it back to a couple of years before this happened, Back when he was still on the field and balls were what he tried catching He was getting showered with money, too bad he fell in the thunder I hate to rain on ya but the water really pulled you under Unlike gravity it's impossible to pull me down, Look at the one who's on the ground now I remember that day when he called me a fair hoe Well, now he's the servent while I'm that Pharoh This ain't Egypt, but I'm climbing up these pyramids Bury you in a tumb because that's where your spirit is I'm the one succeeding now when you ain't even working, This is Fiammata and Indi livin' our lives like we're kings
[Chorus - XxLionBlazexX/Fiammata] One day you're a wonder, Next day you are lost in the sounds of roaring thunder, Winning the gold medal from the Olympics, The next day you lose it all and the gold doesn't fit it Next time you have the famousness, Don't mess it up because you only have one chance at it
[Verse 2 - Indiella/Indi] Listen to Mr. Musician, he say he's in a band Had a fight at the bar, now he's on the banned I put the yes in music, he's stuck behind the pia-no Ain't nobody gonna tell me I suck when I know he swallows Saw him with girls on his lap one day, Then the next he was recorded like Ray Jay, But it wasn't a girl, no it wasn't no Kim K Uploaded to the computer, if I were you I'd clear my cache... He thought he was a G, he ain't an Al Capone Now he's stuck in jail, so I dialed his cell-phone You wanted to start somethin' so I'm loadin' up my ammo, But I don't wanna fire the shots 'cause you're all my witnesses But you best think twice before you witness this I mean, he wants to start beef, he's in the wrong farm 'Cause I'm a vegetarian, no cows are for harm I'm sitting on top holdin' my crown, I'm I-N-D-I Looks like you're the one at the bottom now, you envy I
[Chorus x2 - XxLionBlazexX/Fiammata] One day you're a wonder, Next day you are lost in the sounds of roaring thunder, Winning the gold medal from the Olympics, The next day you lose it all and the gold doesn't fit it Next time you have the famousness, Don't mess it up because you only have one chance at it
[Outro - Indiella/Indi] Funny how life works, but before you make your next call, Remember to keep it humble before you lose it all. |
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Wobull
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:02 PM |
| Probably closest thing to a diss you'll make |
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Indiella
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:12 PM |
| This wasn't meant to be a diss but I see how you got that. |
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Wobull
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:15 PM |
Cause you said that you don't plan to diss If I were to rate it would be 8/10, the first verse is better than the second, rhymes became weaker.
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:16 PM |
"He say he was a football player, a Quarterback Now he's on the street beggin' for dollars, wanting his quarters back"
top tier failure at word play. |
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Indiella
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:17 PM |
> If I were to rate it would be 8/10, the first verse is better than the second, rhymes became weaker.
Thanks, and yeah I understand where you got that from. :P |
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:20 PM |
| I don't normally like your songs but this is good keep on going no matter what these ignorant kids say 9/10 |
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Indiella
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:21 PM |
| i notice yall are matchin, you plan that? |
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Indiella
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:22 PM |
| Oh I just realized that too, lol. We didn't. |
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Wobull
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:23 PM |
| Golden, tell me who is being ignorant of you please. Yeah, nobody. |
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:30 PM |
@Wobull I was not speaking towards anyone in general I was simply commenting on the fact she gets a lot of negative views. So in this moment you are being ignorant by including yourself in a conversation that is not about or asking you to join into.
Moo, I'm a horse.
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Wobull
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:32 PM |
In no way did you say anything regarding of what people will say, it's more of a past-present statement. If ignorance is asking a question, then maybe I should be going back to elementary school
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Schrai
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:32 PM |
| why do indiella's posts always generate so much traffic |
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Indiella
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| 23 Aug 2014 10:45 PM |
| I'm very controvercial, you see |
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Indiella
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| 24 Aug 2014 01:06 AM |
@Wobull No no, You stated a question then answered it yourself concluding that I was speaking about someone that was on this forum I'm which you were once again being ignorant to the fact I was speaking in past tense like the monkey you are.
Moo, I'm a horse. |
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ducky980
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| 24 Aug 2014 03:43 AM |
Heyyy theres another who tries
ask me when and ill give you a pm on improvements |
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| 24 Aug 2014 09:41 AM |
@golden
so all this leads back to you thinking people are ignorant for having negative views?
now that's what I call ignorance in it's self. |
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| 24 Aug 2014 10:32 AM |
| 8/10, some of the rhymes were a little weak, but then again, it's better than most of my stuff. It was good :) |
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Indiella
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| 24 Aug 2014 12:07 PM |
Thanks guys for the ratings. :)
> Heyyy theres another who tries
ask me when and ill give you a pm on improvements
I've BEEN writing raps so idk where you've been. |
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Wobull
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| 24 Aug 2014 12:09 PM |
| i think ducky meant that you tried writing something good |
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| 24 Aug 2014 12:10 PM |
| indiella you've been here 'writing raps' for 2 months at max |
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