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Re: this is the crappiest essay i have EVER written

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momomarshmallow is not online. momomarshmallow
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23 Aug 2014 08:08 PM
keep in mind this is just a really rough draft and i havent really tied off the end yet but its still absolute crap

In Veronica Roth’s trilogy, Divergent, Tris Prior gets three personally symbolic tattoos that represent who she is. She lives in Chicago, which is split up into five factions based on core beliefs, and although she grows up in the Abnegation faction, Tris choses to leave her home so she could join a new one, Dauntless. By switching her faction, she leaves behind her family. This decision marks the beginning of her new identity.
Tris’ first tattoo is representative of her family that she moves on from; the three birds each symbolize one family member. This tattoo is a symbol of her past, a constant reminder. The second and third tattoos are the signs of Abnegation and Dauntless. This ink on her skin is both literal and metaphorical; abnegation has been her home or so long that even when she has moved on, it will always be a part of her. Similarly, Dauntless is her new home, and will also forever be a part of her. These two places have made such a deep imprint on her that they are now a part of her identity, which is why Tris choses to imprint them on herself physically as a symbol.



help me make it less cheesy please
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FrigidusIncendium is not online. FrigidusIncendium
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23 Aug 2014 08:09 PM
tl;dr

nobody reads.
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AhhTree is not online. AhhTree
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23 Aug 2014 08:09 PM
why, the cheesier, the better
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67thave is not online. 67thave
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23 Aug 2014 08:09 PM
you've done well
it's as cheesy as the actual book series
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momomarshmallow is not online. momomarshmallow
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23 Aug 2014 08:11 PM
but i dont want it to be cheesy
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AhhTree is not online. AhhTree
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23 Aug 2014 08:11 PM
cheese is good, keep it very cheesy
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momomarshmallow is not online. momomarshmallow
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23 Aug 2014 08:12 PM
moral of the story: ot is in no way helpful
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AhhTree is not online. AhhTree
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23 Aug 2014 08:13 PM
im trying to be helpful here by telling you to keep it cheesy
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momomarshmallow is not online. momomarshmallow
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23 Aug 2014 08:26 PM
bump please help me make it decent
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