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| 22 Aug 2014 04:35 PM |
Draco The Hedgehog Was a Young Orange Hedgehog. His Dream Was To Become a Ninja Just Like His Father & Mother. When He Was About 7 Years Old His Family Died By a Murder. While The Murder Was About To Strike Draco Himself He Was Than Saved By a Wolf Named Light The Wolf. He Trained Draco To Be a Good Ninja. One Day, Light Suddenly Dissapeared. Draco Than Thought To Himself "I Need To Be a Full Fledged Ninja Before I Can Find Light!" So Draco Than Went To a Ninja Acadamy With Other Students. One His 1st Day They Were To Scared To Approach Draco. But Than, The Next Week After That a Student Than Walked Up To Draco To Sit Next To Him. The Student's Name Was Cinos The Hedgehog. After That Day, The Two Than Became Rivals & Best Friends. When They Both Got Older They Started Working Together As a Team To Protect Mobius From Evil Mobians On Mobius. Later On After a Mission To Protect a Mobian, He Than Finds Out That The Mobian He Protected Was His Little Sister Named Alexis The Neko. They Than Helped Out Each Other When They Were In Danger, But, One Of His Friends Turned Out To Be His Cousin Neo The Hedgehog! The Heroes Of Mobius Than Had One Final Mission..To Defeat The Strongest Villian, Metal Darkness. Draco & Friends Couldn't Give Up For The Sake Of Mobius. But, When Draco & Cinos Were The Last 2 Heroes Of Mobius, They Fused! The Two Heroes Now Became One Hero Named.. "Zap The Ultimate Hedgehog". Will Zap Have Enough Time To Defeat Metal Darkness? Find Out On My RPG Game Called.. Sprite Chronicles-The Legend Of Draco The Hedgehog. |
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| 22 Aug 2014 04:39 PM |
| Remember To Leave a Post On If you Liked The Backstory Or Not. Also Try To Play My RPG Game please! Thanks! :D |
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idunwanna
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| 22 Aug 2014 04:41 PM |
| And Don't You Forget To Be An Idiot Who Thinks Capitalizing Every First Letter Of Every God Damn Word Is Correct. |
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Cyantic
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| 22 Aug 2014 04:42 PM |
my eyes refuse to read that
they are literally moving down the page to avoid reading that stop eyes i want to see how bad it is stop it. |
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| 22 Aug 2014 04:47 PM |
An honest critique?
A story filled with many cliche' happenings; even for a backstory. So many, in fact, that I can't even list them all in a timely manner.
Terrible grammar doesn't even give the story the begrudging, 'at least it functions,' because it doesn't.
If this is a troll? Good job.
If this is serious? Stay in school. |
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Craxian
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| 22 Aug 2014 04:52 PM |
Why Do You Type Like This I Don't Understand It Takes Extra Effort To Type Like This And It's A Lot Slower So It's Not Because It's Easier Or Anything |
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Exunity
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| 22 Aug 2014 04:52 PM |
| lol screw you and suck my ass |
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| 22 Aug 2014 05:05 PM |
you're not kanaya don't type like that |
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Pruz
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| 22 Aug 2014 05:29 PM |
| I have no idea what anyone looks like. |
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duck14
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| 22 Aug 2014 05:33 PM |
| Why do people write like this? |
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| 22 Aug 2014 05:38 PM |
| "Unfortunately, You Have One Fatal Flaw, Numb Nuts." -bebithetuffle |
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| 23 Aug 2014 01:19 PM |
| Guys I Write Like This Cause It's Easier For Me >_> |
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l0ldude1
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| 23 Aug 2014 01:36 PM |
Nobody Likes When People Write RPs Like This. Please, Try To Refrain.
And, how the hell is is easier than NOT TAPPING SHIFT EVERY WORD?
Ham sandwich. That is all. |
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Pruz
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| 23 Aug 2014 01:50 PM |
Can somebody find the problem with this OpenHexagon2 level?
-- include useful files u_execScript("utils.lua") u_execScript("common.lua") u_execScript("commonpatterns.lua") u_execScript("mixedpatterns.lua")
-- this function adds a pattern to the timeline based on a key function addPattern(mKey) if mKey == 0 then pBarrageSpiral(math.random(1, 2), 1, 1) elseif mKey == 1 then pInverseBarrage(0) end end
-- shuffle the keys, and then call them to add all the patterns -- shuffling is better than randomizing - it guarantees all the patterns will be called keys = { 0, 0, 1} keys = shuffle(keys) index = 0
-- onInit is an hardcoded function that is called when the level is first loaded function onInit() l_setSpeedMult(1) l_setSpeedInc(0.025) l_setRotationSpeed(0.2) l_setRotationSpeedMax(1) l_setRotationSpeedInc(0.0025) l_setDelayMult(0.5) l_setDelayInc(-0.01) l_setFastSpin(10000.0) l_setSides(4) l_setSidesMin(3) l_setSidesMax(5) l_setIncTime(60)
l_setPulseMin(50) l_setPulseMax(70) l_setPulseSpeed(1.4) l_setPulseSpeedR(0.6) l_setPulseDelayMax(1)
l_setBeatPulseMax(15) l_setBeatPulseDelayMax(20)
l_setSwapEnabled(true) end
-- onLoad is an hardcoded function that is called when the level is started/restarted function onLoad() e_eventWaitS(10) m_messageAdd("watch for the boom at 60 seconds!", 120) e_eventWaitS(50) m_messageAddImportant("boom!", 130) s_setPulseInc(1) s_setSpeedMult(2.5) s_setSpeedInc(0.5) s_setRotationSpeed(1) s_setRotationSpeedMax(2) s_setRotationSpeedInc(0.01) s_setDelayMult(0.5) s_setDelayInc(-0.01) s_setFastSpin(100000.0) s_setSides(4) s_setSidesMin(3) s_setSidesMax(5) s_setIncTime(2)
s_setPulseMin(60) s_setPulseMax(90) s_setPulseSpeed(1.4) s_setPulseSpeedR(0.6) s_setPulseDelayMax(1)
s_setBeatPulseMax(15) s_setBeatPulseDelayMax(20)
s_setSwapEnabled(true) end
-- onStep is an hardcoded function that is called when the level timeline is empty -- onStep should contain your pattern spawning logic function onStep() addPattern(keys[index]) index = index + 1 if index - 1 == #keys then index = 1 end end
-- onIncrement is an hardcoded function that is called when the level difficulty is incremented function onIncrement() end
-- onUnload is an hardcoded function that is called when the level is closed/restarted function onUnload() end
-- onUpdate is an hardcoded function that is called every frame function onUpdate(mFrameTime) end |
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Pruz
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| 23 Aug 2014 01:50 PM |
| Holy sh!t! I think I've found it. |
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Pruz
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| 23 Aug 2014 09:23 PM |
| OP is truly worthy of all our praises. (No he's not) |
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| 23 Aug 2014 09:30 PM |
Why Must You Type Like You Are Doing An Acronym ?
W - hy M - ust Y - ou D - o T - his T - o M - e
WMYDTTM, going to become the new trend right there.
I'm the guy yodeling on your rooftop during Christmas Eve. I slayed Santa and his team of flying hood ornaments. |
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duck14
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