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Re: GOBLINS¡ - The Beginning {Comment/Rate}

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kekeswag is not online. kekeswag
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28 Apr 2014 06:13 PM
Verse 1- ChanelG
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Ya already know who this is
At the top of my game, real talk, no disses
I can go on forever, [B] I'm relentless
Watch out for the haters, you know they'll resent this.
Take a seat, relax, cuz this is one hell of a doozy
Turn the speakers up, bumping Chance and Lil Boosie
You wanna collab? Well I'm awfully choosy
I'm sorry if that came out rude, I hope you don't hate me...
(SIKEEE) Here's the funny part- I don't give a [F]!
Did you want me to be hurt? Well then you're outta luck.
I'm too high for your standards
I'm like a Commander
I own the authority
Keep the bad [B]'s with me, like I'm in a sorority.
Did you say something? I'm not paying attention
OH OH OH, I almost forgot to mention
I like compliments so uh hehe, leave a comment below -wink-
I'm a queen, sink to your knees and drop down to the ground
Shout "All hail Chanel!" and hand me my crown.
Long story short, no need to explain the rest,
You should know it by now- I'm the [MF]'in best.
#GOBLINS

Verse 2-King Hurricane
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I'm a Goblin that spits rhymes.
Hard to describe.
Hurricane and Goblin teeth more sharp than a knife.
Scared to look when Kh is near ya.
Scared of myself I don't even look in the mirror.
Yet Phantom can deal wih it.
Everybody else says your face is sick!
I put people in a casket.
Skin more green than acid.
I can spit fire no need for a matchet.
I get people screaming for help.
And for me it's easy to serve people even when they full of themself.
So violent I get building burning.
I'll say it again Face disturbing.
It always ends up as death the talk is never working.
Pointy ears.
I'm my own fear.
I end up killing someone in a diss when ever I'm here.
If I were you i wouldn't test me.
Evil and hero's can never catch me.
I'll say it again there is no stoppin.
I guess I'm just a Goblin.
East Coast

Verse 3- Kekeswag/Allayn
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To achieve my greatness i need to unlock my imagination
With Goblins becoming bigger than any other operation
We not just some "cool new clique" we making a [F] statement
"Well wont you have beef with radicals" "what about character assassination"
Y'all dudes act like drama is y'all secondary education
Get off my back, y'all riding me like I'm the only form of transportation
How we suppose to settle problems without simple communication
Music is just a random word in our generation
Changing in the making, green with a Goblin relation
Call in the station, "She's having some kind of educational nation"
Let me stop all these big words before its a problem
6th graders asking "wtf is a Goblin"
Well, you see your socks? Normally i would just rock 'em
But a Goblin will take them off making you run for it like Tarzan
I like how I make a couple songs on Radix
Now im claimed to have "[F] the team".... Wow thats magic
I need a survival guide, these guys have never seen a real girl
Get nervous start to stutter now you think you about to hurl
Im not famous? Then please tell me why my name is in your mouth
Rednation spare me the bull or at least take it to the south
Because your crew, the ones that stay following you around
Were the same ones at my concert, jumping up and down
Screaming radix we made it, this is Goblin ground
Me, Chanel, and KH, i see there is only three crowns
This isnt new to us, all we did was add a [F]ing name
Were building each other up creating bars thats insane
The rhymes that y'all writing aren't even on the same frame
Of a mind from a wise dime
Rare grind, sharing fine time
With Radix cause we clean, our lime pine makes a good shine
Reading these disses laughing hard
Flipping flags like color guards
12 year olds mad, computer taken for F's on your report card
I dont need to explain myself, yall scared to see a girl do well
Radicals and Goblins takeover so please spare your words of farewell
[F] 16 bars, im grabbing 16 stars
Rap over them till they green, hop in the get-a-way car
Blowing red hookah, looks like a devil's cigar
Hate to see a girl rightfully skip her place and take charge
If you didnt know Goblins before, now you do
If you cant see my skills, wash our eyes out with shampoo
Because honestly its time you start giving a female a chance
Radix, Radicals, and Goblins heres our spark in advance

Bvtch
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drake17dude is not online. drake17dude
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28 Apr 2014 08:10 PM
MAD DOPE 10/10!
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iaw35 is not online. iaw35
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29 Apr 2014 08:55 PM
10/10 work of art but if its only three crowns why does everyone claim to a king?
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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29 Apr 2014 11:15 PM
Great collab guys !
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KingHurrican3 is not online. KingHurrican3
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30 Apr 2014 03:27 PM
Stop lying. This was the best collab.
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GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
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30 Apr 2014 04:54 PM
Ahem, 4 crowns.
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minniem is not online. minniem
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30 Apr 2014 05:56 PM
@above

"Me, Chanel, and KH, i see there is only three crowns"

>"only three crowns"

Wait a little longer Golden, you're still new.

But anyways , 9/10.
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KingRoseXI is not online. KingRoseXI
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30 Apr 2014 06:08 PM
4 Crowns!
lel
8/10
Perfect Collab
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GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
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30 Apr 2014 06:39 PM
lmao stfu read my songs before you comment you only saw one
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GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
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30 Apr 2014 06:40 PM
and im not new at all....
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kekeswag is not online. kekeswag
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30 Apr 2014 06:46 PM
Thanks guys.
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Aetion is not online. Aetion
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03 May 2014 04:11 PM
Would have been the best if I was there. LOL

Making fun of people's spelling since 2010
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Aetion is not online. Aetion
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03 May 2014 04:12 PM
Goldking The only crown you'd have is the crown for rookie of the year. You'd still have tough competition for that too.

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Aetion is not online. Aetion
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03 May 2014 04:27 PM
Only 3 crowns, but there is a family of gods

#RadicalFamily

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kekeswag is not online. kekeswag
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03 May 2014 09:05 PM
Why would we let you on the song if it's a Goblins' track? xD
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Sonicjr723 is not online. Sonicjr723
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03 May 2014 09:28 PM
Chanel was below average as it went on. She was barely decent to begin with. The rhyme scheme got basic at some parts of the verse. At least you had some multis. You should keep working on those. You might want to work on metaphors as well.

KH was pretty weak to average, the lyrics were pretty weak. Since the other two were at least bringing simple similes you could have made better bars. Some multis, you should work on making more quality ones as well.

Keke took over on this. Not particularly because of the quantity, but because of the quantity she had more room to fit in some quality schemes and metaphors. She had some good similes here and there. Your rhyme schemes could still use improvement, but I would suggest that you continue to improve your lyricism as well.

Also, study the extended metaphor.

The verse overall was on a decent to a slightly above average level. I see some potential.


Overall, it was alright. I feel like the collaboration would have been far better had Chanel and KH brought better material (so that they could have at least come close to matching up with Keke), which I am sure they are capable of. Everyone stayed on topic, though. Chanel was the only one who strayed away from it. She probably should have stuck with the theme so the quality overall would seem better.

A horrorcore instrumental would have gone nicely with these lyrics, probably.

After improvement, I would like to see this trio again.
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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03 May 2014 09:51 PM
@Sonic Sorry, I was unsure what the theme was. XD

But thank you so much for the thorough feedback! ^_^
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kekeswag is not online. kekeswag
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04 May 2014 12:57 PM
Thanks :)
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KieraAllayn is not online. KieraAllayn
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24 Jun 2014 05:03 PM
"Only 3 crowns, but there is a family of gods

#RadicalFamily"
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hellraiser98 is not online. hellraiser98
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24 Jun 2014 08:26 PM
waste of words/10
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iaw35 is not online. iaw35
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22 Jul 2014 03:03 AM
Who remembers this dope ahh crew???, ain't heard from'm in a while, still waiting for these recruiting's to happen...
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GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
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22 Jul 2014 03:37 AM
I think it's safe to say there are 4 crowns now :)
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iaw35 is not online. iaw35
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22 Jul 2014 03:44 AM
Not so.much....kh....got dropped.by the goblins long ago....now its only.2
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streetfighter919 is not online. streetfighter919
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22 Jul 2014 08:45 AM
Gold you've improved by you still not have the credibility to be saying you have a crown, you're not in the elites, yet to do something to change the Ro rap game or be popular in it. You're far from achieving this. You need to show an elite your work and see if they like it, that's the first step.
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streetfighter919 is not online. streetfighter919
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22 Jul 2014 08:46 AM
It's far from safe to say that u have as crown now, your credibility has barely increased. Keep working though
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