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| 04 Aug 2014 07:24 AM |
Intro: We’re both supposed to be equal; Yeah, we’re all different From our genders to the type of our skin pigment But does the mask we all call a body have to categorize us What if you were in our place, how would you feel (and plus)
Chorus: For years we’ve been excluded, flicked off by a wave of hand But now we’ve got to make a stand So gather the feminists and anti-race, and for every person we will find a place
Verse: I know a woman with no rights; she can’t put up a fight There’s nothing she can do; since she's different than you You take away her voting; give her a weak job No, everything that’s good is for men- why does she even try When she knows she's only going to get turned down Nowadays that’s the norm: girls get nothing; boys get more Treat us the same, That’s all I ask Don’t go repeating what happened in the past
Chorus: For years we’ve been excluded, flicked off by a wave of hand But now we’ve got to make a stand So gather the feminists and anti-race, and for every person we will find a place
Verse: I know a man of a different race- he has no place Now he can do nothing, see what you’ve done You’ve made him feel bad about himself- but to you its just fun Criticizing him for his color, yeah he can’t help it Just because he was born from a black mother- what’s wrong with that? Trying to make him feel trapped- stuck in the rain It’s pouring outside, but to you it’s just a game
Chorus: For years we’ve been excluded, flicked off by a wave of hand But now we’ve got to make a stand So gather the feminists and anti-race, and for every person we will find a place
Hook: You create a barrier, but like MLK said you should only judge on one’s continental character Not because of the color of their skin, if their a man or woman Just treat them the same- you don’t have to win this game
Coda/Bridge: But there’s no reason to your rambling, to depress other people; make them sad We’ve got to do this as a team, counting everybody in Don’t leave anybody out- we don’t want any more sin
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| 04 Aug 2014 07:34 AM |
8.5/10 Love how you speak the truth (History) Keep up the good work. |
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RandyMD
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| 04 Aug 2014 09:37 AM |
| I loved the message from this, keep up the good work ^_^ |
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| 04 Aug 2014 09:42 AM |
| i really love the message here |
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| 04 Aug 2014 05:48 PM |
| Thanks for the support Randy and Otter |
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| 04 Aug 2014 05:49 PM |
| that's my little steevie!!! great job!1!!!111 awesome message!!! <3 9.5/10 |
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Wobull
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| 04 Aug 2014 06:03 PM |
| Nice message, but it's too plain a vocabulary to match with it. |
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| 04 Aug 2014 06:09 PM |
| OK thanks 4 the feedback Wobull. I'll try to work on that next time. |
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Indiella
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| 04 Aug 2014 06:22 PM |
| Very nice, and I love the message. :) 8/10 |
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KyleRilyx
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| 05 Aug 2014 10:58 AM |
| Very good :3 keep up the good work! 8.5/10 |
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Aetion
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| 05 Aug 2014 11:00 AM |
I commented about this on the RCRD wall but I might as well give you a better comment here.
This song has a positive message, and I feel you executed this very well. It's overall really nice, I think it flows well and worded right.
8/10 |
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JunJoe
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| 05 Aug 2014 06:57 PM |
| Thank you for your feedback Jun. I'm sorry you didn't like it. Do you have any ideas on how I could make it better? |
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| 05 Aug 2014 06:59 PM |
| KiIIing yourself will improve it a lotttttt |
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Indiella
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| 05 Aug 2014 07:13 PM |
| Dark I don't think you realize that you could get in big trouble for making a threat like that. |
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| 05 Aug 2014 08:02 PM |
| Yeah, please don't make rude comments on here. |
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| 07 Aug 2014 10:10 PM |
| C'mon rate it.. plz. Want 2 no what u think... |
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| 07 Aug 2014 10:19 PM |
| I dont like songs like this but good job. ;-; |
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| 07 Aug 2014 10:19 PM |
| Eh, very basic vocabulary and delivery 4/10 |
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| 08 Aug 2014 09:57 AM |
| I see I see. Yeah I'm new at this. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 10:00 AM |
| I have a stick and it is redwood. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 10:03 AM |
| I have no idea what you mean. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 10:04 AM |
| I ran across the rainbow to find only a pot of zinc. |
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