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| 24 Jul 2014 09:19 PM |
This song is about wanting to quit, being afraid and angry. My thanks go out to Indiella for featuring with me for the second time. Appreciate it, Indie! <3 ———
Chorus: My head spinning, Wanting to leave, no kidding. Challenges are hard to face, Decisions like these may make your head pound and your heart race. Before you do anything, be grateful what you have and wait, Because what I've been thinking has been a waste, so don't loose faith.
Verse One: Indiella I remember as a kid, I was so self concious Being pretty was all that I ever wanted Wishin' I was anonymous, Hide behind a mask and never again be spotted On TV, all I'd see were these skinny white girls, Wanted to paint myself in a magazine and get rid of these long curls I beat myself up for not being like everybody else, Like MGMT said it's Time to Pretend, I didn't want to be myself Looks are all that matter, personalities' not in Scrub poison on my face just to have clear skin Googling natural remedies remembering that nothing can fix Nothing can change my dark eyes and skin - I'm intermixed Five foot two, one of the shortest in my grade Everyone's intimidating to me, I'm always afraid You don't know how many times I secretly walked onto the scale, waiting to be weighed 115lb? Unexceptable, I gotta downgrade Lose some weight on my thighs, maybe then I'll be presentable Hiding in hoodies and jeans, what those girls are wearing is never acceptable I mean this ain't a 3rd world problem but it was surely one, But I was struggling for a year, thank god I'm finally done It was pointless, I'd never look like these other women I mean, you can put on makeup but you can't put on a fake image I rid myself of these negative examples, These tumblr girls? They so skinny anyone could trample 'em Be careful, don't want to dismantel 'em I finally accepted that I'll never be white, I finally accepted that I'll always have curly hair, it's what I like And for my eyes? Who gives a [D], they're perfect for me I finally stopped beating myself up, at least now I can see
Chorus: My head spinning, Wanting to leave, no kidding. Challenges are hard to face, Decisions like these may make your head pound and your heart race. Before you do anything, be grateful what you have and wait, Because what I've been thinking has been a waste, so don't loose faith.
Verse Two: I'm angry how I've been so afraid, To take the opportunities, spread out my wings and fly out of this cage. Everything everyone has said to me has made me feel sad or angry, Threatening to quit, thinkin' nobody believed in me. Talked with Chanel, Jub and Kyle, they changed my mind. Those kinds of friends are hard to find. 'Told me I had a great road ahead of me, to keep movin' and not to give in. They took to time to care for me, treated me like kin. Rates don't judge talent, talent is skill, Take risks and protect what you believe with your own will. I thought my first time in the studio was just for fun, Chanel turned my thoughts around, told me she wanted me, no pun. I made up my mind, said yes, turned my thoughts around, I thought my rhymes were as funny as a clown, I kept goin' downhill, thinkin' I couldn't. Took all the negativity and wanted to quit. A while went by, I then realized I didn't. I shouldn't. |
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SomePunk
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| 24 Jul 2014 09:20 PM |
damn isnt filtered dumbass
assuming [D] is damn |
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| 24 Jul 2014 09:23 PM |
10/10 Beautiful, and nice rhymes.
Proud of you Lionblaze, and great job Indie. |
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Indiella
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| 24 Jul 2014 09:25 PM |
> damn isnt filtered dumbass
Thanks for the feedback. And thank you Chanel. :) |
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| 24 Jul 2014 09:27 PM |
Wow, this is so touching I loved it
10/10 |
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| 24 Jul 2014 09:42 PM |
| I enjoyed the message from the song. I feel like Indiella's verse could've been written differently for the song, as I compare it to Lion's, I noticed Indie's is more about self and Lion is talking about self but related to music. But now that I think about it, they both wrote of how they were afraid and overcame the hill they were at. |
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| 24 Jul 2014 09:45 PM |
| Thanks Jub and we had to write verses about diff topics so that we could reach a wider span of an audience. |
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| 24 Jul 2014 10:40 PM |
I mean, I can't lie this is aight y'all on you're A s[] so am I. maybe on my song you can stop by maybe give it a listen rate or reply 8.8/10 |
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| 24 Jul 2014 10:49 PM |
| -10000/10 a generous score for such trash |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:13 PM |
| 10/10, it was amazing. Props to Lion and Indiella for making such an amazing thread. I hope you don't just go around trashing great artists, combat, because you really need to stop dissing people for things you can't even do. I bet you couldn't write half as well as these girls. Stop being a jerk. The song was great. Great job! |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:14 PM |
| Ripped it sucked so dont hate on da truth kid |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:17 PM |
| I have a different opinion. But if you hate it, fine. You can, just don't go making my friends feel bad because one person has a different opinion. Keep it to yourself. |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:19 PM |
Champion, you can sometimes write some fairly decent crap, but stop hating. 8/10 |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:19 PM |
| All I did was give my rate kid and so did you so get ypur skinny azz back in your corner :) |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:20 PM |
| No, you didn't just rate it, you called it trash and tried to make them feel bad. |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:20 PM |
| Im not hating taiske I gave my opinion like da rest of u kid lol |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:20 PM |
| you can give your rate just don't be a jerk about it and call other peoples work trash. |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:22 PM |
| Ripped I can do what I want now get off this thread with your oder package :) |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:23 PM |
| Look, Rip is right. These 2 worked hard, and it was good, maybe you think not so. But instead of just saying it sucked tell them how they could make it better. If not keep it to your self, that or is it possible you are just acting like this because you think you are better? Just because you might be better doesn't mean you can be an idiot. |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:25 PM |
| Taiske there is a difference between being an idiot and telling da truth so go fk yourself lol |
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Indiella
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:28 PM |
| Thanks for the replies guys and Combat if you didn't like it, please just give us constructive critism instead of being rude and completely bashing the song, thanks. :) |
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