gtahub
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| 16 Aug 2014 07:30 AM |
Hello,
This is my First attempt to do something like that, I'd really like to hear your reviews.
http://www.roblox.com/Joseph-Phillip-place?id=172328662 |
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| 16 Aug 2014 09:49 AM |
6/10
The guy on the left, looks funny. Try a different package if you can.
Put a commando face on him, and that'll fix him.
Motorcycle looks too plain and small.
Terrain looks funky. Background is good. |
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gtahub
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| 16 Aug 2014 09:56 PM |
Better.
Love the new font.
9/10 |
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