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gtahub is not online. gtahub
Joined: 09 Jan 2013
Total Posts: 291
16 Aug 2014 07:30 AM
Hello,

This is my First attempt to do something like that, I'd really like to hear your reviews.

http://www.roblox.com/Joseph-Phillip-place?id=172328662
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TypicalDoodle is not online. TypicalDoodle
Joined: 07 Jan 2011
Total Posts: 4756
16 Aug 2014 09:49 AM
6/10

The guy on the left, looks funny. Try a different package if you can.

Put a commando face on him, and that'll fix him.

Motorcycle looks too plain and small.

Terrain looks funky. Background is good.
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gtahub is not online. gtahub
Joined: 09 Jan 2013
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16 Aug 2014 08:43 PM
Fixed it
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TypicalDoodle is not online. TypicalDoodle
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16 Aug 2014 09:56 PM
Better.

Love the new font.

9/10
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