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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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12 Aug 2014 05:43 PM
The people want you
The people want me
The two of us and others
A happy family
Everything is going right
We were meant to be
It's all fine
Don't disagree
Or you'll lose your power
Of being queen
You don't enjoy it
Them being on their knees
Begging for more
'Please, please, your majesty.'
You want the control
It brings so much glee
And a touch of misery
Remember the past
They dragged you by your feet
Into this world
Where you were never deemed free


yeye

;)
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Zulfie is not online. Zulfie
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12 Aug 2014 05:46 PM
my gosh i keep forgetting to post on this acc
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jaykombat19 is not online. jaykombat19
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12 Aug 2014 05:50 PM
Deep.
Passionate.
Love it.
lov you 2 bb
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Zulfie is not online. Zulfie
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12 Aug 2014 06:33 PM
meep

;)
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 12:51 AM
bump

;)
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 01:04 AM
tea

;)
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pwner195 is not online. pwner195
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13 Aug 2014 01:05 AM
"They dragged you by your feet
Into this world
Where you were never deemed free"

wot
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DesiredShark is not online. DesiredShark
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13 Aug 2014 01:06 AM
This might sound cliché but, did you randomly come up with that in the back of your head?
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 01:06 AM
"wot"

please tell me why you had that reaction

;)
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 01:07 AM
"back of your head"

usually yes

with this the rhyme and stuff i did but i already had an idea of writing a poem relating to a queen before

;)
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imgurian is not online. imgurian
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13 Aug 2014 01:08 AM
maybe 3.5/10

the only solution
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DesiredShark is not online. DesiredShark
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13 Aug 2014 01:09 AM
At least some fair elements of "fancy" adjectives would spruce the poem up nicely.
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SkaterDude119 is not online. SkaterDude119
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13 Aug 2014 01:10 AM
I read this in the Adam's Family rhythm.
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SkyEmolga is not online. SkyEmolga
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13 Aug 2014 01:10 AM
tl;dr

11/10 anyways



Hello there, Expand Dong!
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 01:11 AM
what is considered fancy to you

;)
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DesiredShark is not online. DesiredShark
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13 Aug 2014 01:18 AM
Any adjective that isn't elementary.

i.e. Elementary adjectives: happy, sad, mad, scared.
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 01:21 AM
so which words specifically would you change?

;)
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Geomitrix is not online. Geomitrix
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13 Aug 2014 01:23 AM
me and you should have a rap battle some time
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 01:24 AM
rap battle

my brain doesn't work that fast

;)
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Geomitrix is not online. Geomitrix
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13 Aug 2014 01:28 AM
neither does mine.
it takes me two minutes to think of stuff
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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13 Aug 2014 02:47 AM
FANCY

;)
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