reddanger
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| 12 Aug 2014 05:43 PM |
The people want you The people want me The two of us and others A happy family Everything is going right We were meant to be It's all fine Don't disagree Or you'll lose your power Of being queen You don't enjoy it Them being on their knees Begging for more 'Please, please, your majesty.' You want the control It brings so much glee And a touch of misery Remember the past They dragged you by your feet Into this world Where you were never deemed free
yeye
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Zulfie
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| 12 Aug 2014 05:46 PM |
| my gosh i keep forgetting to post on this acc |
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| 12 Aug 2014 05:50 PM |
Deep. Passionate. Love it. lov you 2 bb |
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Zulfie
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reddanger
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reddanger
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pwner195
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:05 AM |
"They dragged you by your feet Into this world Where you were never deemed free"
wot |
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:06 AM |
| This might sound cliché but, did you randomly come up with that in the back of your head? |
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reddanger
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:06 AM |
"wot"
please tell me why you had that reaction
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reddanger
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:07 AM |
"back of your head"
usually yes
with this the rhyme and stuff i did but i already had an idea of writing a poem relating to a queen before
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imgurian
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:08 AM |
maybe 3.5/10
the only solution |
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:09 AM |
| At least some fair elements of "fancy" adjectives would spruce the poem up nicely. |
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:10 AM |
| I read this in the Adam's Family rhythm. |
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SkyEmolga
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:10 AM |
tl;dr
11/10 anyways
Hello there, Expand Dong! |
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reddanger
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:11 AM |
what is considered fancy to you
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:18 AM |
Any adjective that isn't elementary.
i.e. Elementary adjectives: happy, sad, mad, scared. |
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reddanger
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:21 AM |
so which words specifically would you change?
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Geomitrix
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:23 AM |
| me and you should have a rap battle some time |
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reddanger
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:24 AM |
rap battle
my brain doesn't work that fast
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Geomitrix
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| 13 Aug 2014 01:28 AM |
neither does mine. it takes me two minutes to think of stuff |
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reddanger
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