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| 08 Aug 2014 05:31 PM |
Heavy vs. Metal Hale: A TF2 Fanfic It was Wave 666 in the Nightmare mode on Mann Vs Machine where the Heavy was enjoying a Lunch break with his fellow friends. “This steak sandvich is delicious!” A heavy with a Ghastly Gibbus says. The Killing Gloves of Boxing heavy nods his head. “Next time, eat a salad!” a snarky Scout says as he kicks the Gibbus heavy. The wave began as the Engineers built sentries and were using their Southern Hospitalities and their Wranglers.
The Soldiers had their cow manglers out, too. The robot pyros and soldiers were approaching as the snipers took some out and the spies sapped them. Then 3 tanks approached which were about to reach the bomb place, but then the Cow Manglers fired up, and the soldiers used them to blow the tanks to pieces. The wave was in the middle, as Metal Hale, a variant of Saxton Hale approached and punched the other team mates, which made them not respawn. The robots were going everywhere, but the Gibbus heavy took out his fists and raised them to the sky. The Heavy had Gloves of Running Urgently, which he had taken out the robots and Metal Hale beat Heavy to a pulp. “Do you have any last words?” Metal Hale said evilly.
Metal Hale was about to punch Heavy, but Heavy grabbed the fist, and punched Metal Hale. The Heavy got out his Dragonborn hat, and performed a Dragonshout. “DRAGONSHOUT: POOTIS RO DAH!” The Heavy yelled, disabling Metal Hale. He fell to the ground, and Wave 666 was over, the Team mates respawned, and it was all over, the game had switched to the next map.
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| 08 Aug 2014 05:33 PM |
i've seen better ones on fanfiction sites and 4chan.
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Noivern
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| 08 Aug 2014 05:37 PM |
| Bump for all the PC Master Race to see. |
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s3cksh0n8
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Drake1458
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:24 PM |
1/10
i cried
not because of the story, but because it was so terrible |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:26 PM |
| I am just beginning to write, man. If you have any criticism, go shove it up someone else. |
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Drake1458
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:36 PM |
| yet criticism is the only way to improve |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:38 PM |
| How is it "Terrible" then? |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:39 PM |
If you cant take criticism. Stop right there with these fanfics, and never do them again. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:39 PM |
http://youtu.be/yInw8LyWTN8?t=50s |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:39 PM |
| I am taking criticism right now. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:41 PM |
I am taking criticism right now. your narsism is plain annoying so get out
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:42 PM |
"Get out" Oh, an overused insult on a weak community on a children's game that is going downhill, nice one! |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:43 PM |
Oh, an overused insult on a weak community on a children's game that is going downhill, nice one!
you're just cancer and really annoying |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:43 PM |
First of all, this is the wrong forum for this crap. Second of all, how much more generic fan fics are we gonna get. |
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Drake1458
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:43 PM |
your "fanfic" is terrible because it has no 'emotion' and grammatical errors
'emotion' is used to play on the reader's feelings which in turn makes a 'connection' |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:45 PM |
"Cancer" I'll have you know I have special needs, it's not funny to use a disease that's killing as an insult. If you have any more insults then go elsewhere. Roblox is NOT your use for the words cancer, autism, etc. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:47 PM |
I'll have you know I have special needs, it's not funny to use a disease that's killing as an insult.
"wah wah!11 sum1 is makn fun of a diseaz!11 it supposed to be srs!11"
If you have any more insults then go elsewhere.
if anybody should be leaving it's YOU it's the internet for godsake there is supposed to be insults and bad things you can't just not go to the internet and expect everything to be nice
Roblox is NOT your use for the words cancer, autism, etc.
OP has autism
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:49 PM |
When ace does'nt give a god damn what disease you have and calls you out on it.
You know shots about to be fired. |
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Drake1458
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:49 PM |
""Cancer" I'll have you know I have special needs, it's not funny to use a disease that's killing as an insult. If you have any more insults then go elsewhere. Roblox is NOT your use for the words cancer, autism, etc."
actually, "cancer" is an internet term that describes a thing as an unwanted 'mutation' item/person within a server |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:49 PM |
@Axl
brb pm'ing that to slingshotjunkie
enjoy your b& |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:50 PM |
@Casualties Already reported him. Goodbye, Axxl. |
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| 08 Aug 2014 06:53 PM |
Already reported him. Goodbye, Axxl. No matter how many times i get banned I'll always come back
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