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| 03 Aug 2014 02:07 PM |
Hey guys. I went and saw "Dawn of the Planet of the Apes" a few weeks back in theaters. I loved it just as much as the first one! Also, from the looks of it, they are going to make a third one. I'm so excited for that, and for it to come out on Blu-ray so I can watch in on my Ps3! I started rapping this week. Being the Planet of the Apes fan I am I made a song about it. Here are the lyrics:
Verse 1
You can call me Caesar Ill make you a believer All of yawl can follow me Cause I will be yawl leada
For the children im a teacha For the faithful im a preacha Forget people like Koba All they do is leave ya
Never forgot where I came from You should do the same son Together we can rule this We come together We are one
We work together we too strong We keep grinding till they all gone This the planet of the apes This is our world This is our song
(Chorus 2x) Planet of the apes We one tribe We fight for this We vow our lives We taking back what we own Look how far we’ve come
Verse 2
One ape weak But together we strong United we stand and Divided we fall
Sacrifice one To save all Ape no kill ape That’s why humans mostly gone
The first time you saw us We were becoming one Now you see us again The night has now dawned
This planet We apes are about to run Our conquerous powers have nearly just begun We've lost faith in Koba that’s why he we shunned
He ruined our plans the last time with his Hate of humans But now he gone we ready to do this
Yawl called for backup but there isn't nothing new to it Me and my crew got work for you And we gonna give you it Bring in ya tank buck the lowland gorilla take care of it
Rocket punch you in the chest Until there aint no more air in it Quit yall starin and bring in the boom We read for it ____ So what do you think? Is it good? I really don't mind negative feed back if that's what you think. Just something, I don't mind because I'm new and still have a long way to being good. So yeah tell me what you think!
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:09 PM |
| LOL YOU MADE A RAP FOR A MOVIE |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:10 PM |
If you like this and want to here the actually song follow this link:
http://www.smule.com/p/237364004_57972454
I warn you that I say the f word in the first verse of the song in the link. I censored this version so yeah. Besides my beautiful singing during the chorus (sarcasm) what do you think? If you have the smule app drop me a love and if you don't I suggest you get it :p. That's it hmu with that feedback guys :) |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:11 PM |
| rapping about highly intellectual apes is the cool new thing to do |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:11 PM |
yeah dude, i love that movie ;_; xD
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:12 PM |
| lol yeah trend setting dude :) |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:12 PM |
| I haven't seen the new movie yet, but I've been meaning too |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:14 PM |
| you should in my eyes it might be better than the first :) |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:17 PM |
i think it looks just silly a bunch of monkeys riding on horses shooting guns
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:20 PM |
>a bunch of monkeys riding on horses shooting guns
I don't see anything wrong about this sentence, besides the fact that you called apes monkeys |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:20 PM |
nope but from the trailer i honestly dont want to |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:24 PM |
| don't judge a book by the cover punk :p |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:26 PM |
| lol @thepalegingerchick xD |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:29 PM |
@iibeachbae i wasn't talking to you. i nicknamine somepunk punk haha |
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| 03 Aug 2014 02:50 PM |
| out of all the things my mom wish she made me watch some movies :I |
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| 03 Aug 2014 04:37 PM |
Its was a great movie but i think the first one was better
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