Indiella
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| 02 Aug 2014 12:34 PM |
Created by Indiella and Jubril/RandyMD ---------------------------------------
[Chorus x2 - Indiella] Put, all, the cards on deck Put a heart down and you'll never get it back I'm, the Queen, and you're the Jack I got these slick girls comin' at my neck
[Verse 1 - Indiella] Love is like a game of cards, You play with one, you play with your heart You see, I'm just another face in the crowd, Like the game Old Maid, no one knows who you are All these girls think they're the Queen Bee, But my darling, don't you see That I played for you, I have the Ace of Hearts, Maybe that's why winning you is so hard
[Hook - Indiella] I got that ace up my sleeve, About to show these girls that I'm the Queen, And I'm about to make y'all leave, So that it's only the Queen and the King I know that you're my Uno card, In one move, I got you caught off guard You're makin' me feel like a superstar, You make winning look extremely hard
[Chorus x2 - Indiella] Put, all, the cards on deck Put a heart down and you'll never get it back I'm, the Queen, and you're the Jack I got these slick girls comin' at my neck
[Verse 2 - RandyMD] All cards on deck, Win that money, get that check I play with your heart like it's a deck of cards but I'll learn to be your King before I keep playing with this Jack Solitaire, Spades, Texas Hold 'Em I really tried to tame your hearts girl, but I lost control and I sold 'em All 3 charms like an ironic sign Like your heart, I grab all the chips and claim them all as mine Wait, this ain't poker Why would I take this love as the Joker? I would never flip the dime to see if I should out smoke her But going against me would be like living the life liva loc-ar Winning these riches and winning these bishes, I guess I shouldnt of showed her Cause now she getting crazy, might as well give her the cold shoulder
[Bridge x2 - Indiella] This love is like a magic trick, I know it'll always be you Even if I shuffle the deck, I find your card so I have to pick a card new
[Chorus x2 - Indiella] Put, all, the cards on deck Put a heart down and you'll never get it back I'm, the Queen, and you're the Jack I got these slick girls comin' at my neck
--------------------------------------- comment and rate, but note that this song was written a while ago so it's not the best song I've written. |
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ChanelG
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| 02 Aug 2014 12:42 PM |
I liked it!
The metaphors were cool and this was very entertaining to read. This might be one of my favorites from you, actually.
9.5/10 |
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Indiella
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| 02 Aug 2014 04:44 PM |
| Im honestly surprised... 7.5/10 |
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| 02 Aug 2014 05:51 PM |
10/10
Do the math! I have 4000 posts!|I came in like a shreking ball!|TREE|Firefox 4 lyfe |
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Zokulzoh
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Aetion
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| 02 Aug 2014 06:24 PM |
I liked the song I would give it a 8/10. The only thing I didn't like is the way Jub had his verse at the very first few lines. Other than that I find this pretty good. |
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Indiella
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| 02 Aug 2014 07:01 PM |
5/10 for lyrical content
no vocals to rate though probably trash |
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| 03 Aug 2014 12:47 AM |
| Indiella's chorus turned me on |
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RandyMD
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