reddanger
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| 01 Aug 2014 10:26 PM |
I remember when I was little I would think that I would grow up and marry a wonderful man to spend the rest of my life with I kept focusing on it until I finally got what I wanted For a few moments It was wonderful But I realized I didn't wish for happiness along the way Big mistake It felt like someone had slapped me in the face To be specific, he went off for another woman, something people do that I didn't really take notice to All my dreams and fantasies crumbled Like a house of cards Which I felt like I had actually built steadily all the way to the top The high of accomplishment I wanted that moment to last forever But you can't freeze it in time as a souvenir That's just not how life works I thought it was though The idea is so simple You marry who you love and everything works out But life wants you to experience struggles If you can overcome it or not is up to you For me I'm still here I know about a lot of nasty things in the world Yet I didn't accept the fact that I could be cheated on I believed it would never ever happen and I would live a glorious life The happiness I did feel but it was all set up A big lie that seemed so real And if someone can make it seem that real Others can too, right? How do you create a trust that this person isn't a fake? Now the only thing I can imagine is lying in bed Past three AM Distracted by the thoughts of what he could be doing when I'm not around Not the amazing things we could be experiencing together Maybe it'll come back The feeling that we'll be forever Like the ending in fairytales Happily ever after
isn't quite as choppy
longer
kind of gives you more insight as to how this person was and how they are now
tell me what you think and if you see any grammar errors
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reddanger
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reddanger
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| 01 Aug 2014 10:43 PM |
10/10 saved to hard drive
_/Siggy.txt__Missing file or directory. Removed by: LOGIC.exe\_ |
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reddanger
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| 01 Aug 2014 10:45 PM |
"saved"
that sounds like you're trying to steal it
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