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| 30 Jul 2014 09:12 PM |
I lay on my back unable to see a thing as emergency vehicles flooded the scene only moments after my battle with MiaHarper. I heard foot steps coming towards me, and I heard a voice I recognized:
"How bad is the pain?" TheLabScientist, my clone squad medic, asked.
"Not bad," I replied.
"Don't lie to me."
"Unbearable. Also, I'm blind."
"Can you breath okay?"
"It's tough."
"Okay, just lie still," he said as he began to look me over. As he did, another voice spoke:
"Hey, boss." It was LordCentral, the clone commander of my squad. "Anything I can do for you?"
"Yeah," I answered. "If you could go find my lightsabers, that'd be great. They feel somewhere around here."
"Sure thing," he said. He ran off to find them.
"Well," Lab began, "It's not good. You have two knife wounds, one in the thigh, and one in the lower abdomen. You shattered your left elbow. It probably directly impacted the ground when you fell. Your wrist and lower arm are okay, probably thanks to the armor you have there. Also, your left shoulder is dislocated. As for your legs, they're fine, again thanks to the armored boots you have. You'll probably have some bruising, though. Most injuries are predominantly on the left side. It appears you hit the ground slightly tilted left, but it wasn't enough that the fall didn't break your back. Fortunately, your spinal cord is intact. Also, you have a fracture on the back of your skull. Count yourself lucky. This could have been much worse."
"And my eyes?" I asked.
"Probably do to concussion from the fall. I doubt it has anything to do with the eyes themselves or the optic nerve. Just the optic center of the brain. Your eye sight should return by itself in time."
"How long?"
"Difficult to say. If it's not back in two and a half weeks, we worry. If it's not back in a month, we take action. But for now, I'd like to see if it'll naturally come back."
"Great," I groaned. Then I remembered Mia. "Doc, you gotta save Mia. She's got important information that we need."
"Someone's working on her right now. She's in delicate condition, though. Your knife throw was a fairly severe blow. Frankly, it's amazing you were able to reach for the knife, much less throw it.
"Yeah, amazing."
"Anyway, I can treat your knife wounds here, but then we need to move you to the hospital to fix your bone-related injuries. I'm going to give you a sedative. When you wake up, you should be feeling somewhat better."
I nodded, and he gave me a sedative. Everything went dark.
I woke up in a hospital bed a few hours later. I opened my eyes, but still couldn't see anything, so I was startled when I heard Master Builderman's voice.
"Feeling better, are you?" he asked.
"A little bit. Could be worse. It's primarily the blindness I'm worried about, though. How will I fight now?"
"An opportunity, this is. Grow closer to the Force, you must. Eyes a Jedi needs not."
"Wonderful."
He chuckled. "Go now, I must. Rest, you should."
After he finished uttering his words of wisdom, he left the room. I tried to rest, but couldn't. I had too much on my mind. A few minutes later, someone entered the room, then closed the door. I thought it was one of the nurses, until she spoke.
"Hello, darling."
"Who....Starlilynight, what are you doing here?"
"Relax, relax, I just want to talk to you, see how you're doing. If I wanted to kill you, you'd be dead already."
"I doubt that," I growled.
"Oh, honey," she began as she sat on the edge of the bed and took my hand, "you underestimate the wrong people."
"Why do you do what you do, Star? What is the appeal in killing people for money? Does it really pay that well?"
"It's not just about the money, Phelps. It's about sending a message."
"What message?"
"That people like me can do whatever we want, and no one can stop us. Take the bomb, for instance. You're living, well, barely living, proof of what happens when someone tries to stop us."
"And MiaHarper is barely living proof of how we can drag you down with us when you make one of us fall."
"I suppose. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that when you're up an frolicking about, don't come looking for me," she said. Then she leaned over and whispered in my ear, "I'm dangerous." Then, she got up and left.
When I was ready to get up, and I had gotten the bomb's location from Mia and disarmed it, I was going to have a serious talk with Starlilynight about hospital manner.
Intro and chapter updates: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=118443665
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| 30 Jul 2014 09:14 PM |
I don't think I have yet, blop. I'll find a spot for you soon.
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| 30 Jul 2014 09:15 PM |
| let me be a fedora wearing scrublord in the story plz |
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| 30 Jul 2014 09:20 PM |
Lol
Maybeh
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| 30 Jul 2014 09:24 PM |
I supah on right now?
I know she lieks dis series.
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| 30 Jul 2014 09:26 PM |
YO, TIMELAPSED, READ AN COMMENT
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| 31 Jul 2014 09:42 AM |
Thanks bbys
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| 31 Jul 2014 10:33 AM |
"It's not just about the money, Phelps. It's about sending a message."
This made my day |
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| 31 Jul 2014 02:59 PM |
Ask and ye shall receive, mikey.
:)
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| 31 Jul 2014 03:03 PM |
| did I miss a chapter or did you go blind in chapter 31? |
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| 31 Jul 2014 03:09 PM |
Yeah, it happened in chapter 31
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| 31 Jul 2014 03:10 PM |
Phelpy!
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| 31 Jul 2014 05:48 PM |
| add meee withhh aaaa fedorraaa pleaseeee |
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| 31 Jul 2014 05:52 PM |
| Great chapter again, 11/10 |
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| 31 Jul 2014 06:30 PM |
A very talky chapter, but talky is good.
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| 31 Jul 2014 07:38 PM |
character development is good yeah i like stories that actually develop their characters like this one does and doesn't have a bunch of two-dimensional characters who could die and no one would care |
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| 31 Jul 2014 09:25 PM |
I do my best lol
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| 31 Jul 2014 09:28 PM |
| omg stop bumping start writing one with me in it :( |
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| 31 Jul 2014 10:04 PM |
You're not gonna be in one for a little while yet. I've got the next couple chapters planned already.
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| 31 Jul 2014 10:07 PM |
phelps i'm hyped af judas priest is going to be on tour two hours away from where i live but idk if i can afford tickets |
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| 01 Aug 2014 09:59 AM |
JUDAS PRIEST, THAT'S AMAZING!!!!
See wat I did there?
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