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| 27 Jul 2014 01:30 AM |
~ Thanks to Stonesaber4, Username90, and Rockmax2112alt for contributing to this role-play ~
The supply and demand system has failed, with supply getting lower every day and demand slowly growing over time, foos and basic items became more expensive, causing more of the lower class people to go homeless or die. Due to the government not caring for the poor, they ordered them to become 'test subjects.' They used the 'test subjects' for medicines, newly made (insert words), and different kinds of tests that the scientists never tried before. One of these tests were; extracting animal DNA and inserting the DNA into humans genes. A week after this test, the test subjects showed signs of personality change, as well as primal behaviour and characteristics. These changes were shared with other governments as well to ensure a steady supply of subjects. As these tests were against the universal human rights, they were of the utmost secrecy and with top level clearence with the governments around the world, who supported these projects. With over 10,000 subjects, all of them were assigned numbers, and those which had some interestin irregularities were observed. Some test subjects developed tails, fins,scales, or even ears of the DNA they were given. Those were marked as success and that was the proof to the government, that they had made a breakthrough in Genetic Science. Even though the test was quite a success, there were quite a few flaws to their plans. Scientists found that their modified genetic traits made them more powerful than a normal human.
Even though the security in the compound was state of the art, quite a few subjects escaped. Both scientists and the government were apprehensive that the mutations would kill off humans or breed their own species in the wild, so they started sending out specialized troops to hunt down the escaped subjects.
~RULES~
1. Normal ROBLOX Rules apply. 2. Grammar and spelling must be proper. You don't have to be perfect, but try the best you can. 3. No cursing. 4. No dating/romance. 5. Respect everyone. 6. No power gaming, metagaming, godmodding 7. Don't controll other people's characters. 8. Don't bash on other role-players, it's rude. 9. Don't be a Mary sue/ Gary sue. This means, don't be pitch perfect. 10. You cannot have any mythical creature DNA or dinosaur DNA, hence they don't exist. Please only use real animals as your DNA. 11. Write Mutations in "Other" to show you read through the rules. 12. You may have as much characters as you like. 13. The troops and scientists are controllable by you , but you may not mainly be a troop or a scientist.
~ CHARACTER SHEET ~
Name?:
Gender?:
Age?:
Appearance? *This is after you're mutated *:
Personality?:
Bio? *Optional*:
DNA? *What you are mutated with *:
Other?:
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PawzKat
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| 27 Jul 2014 01:39 AM |
Name: Ryan Spratowski Gender: M Age: 30 Appearance: Not yet mutated, kidnapped. Other than that, he wears long pants and a shirt. (Will update after mutation) Personality: Yet to be revealed. Bio: Ryan was a high ranking colonel in the Polish Defense Force. He was kidnapped unknowingly by agents. Not even the Polish government knew about this. DNA: TBD Other: mutations
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l0ldude1
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| 27 Jul 2014 01:39 AM |
Name?: Charis Exiticus
Gender?: Male
Age?: 39
Appearance? *This is after you're mutated *: The test on Charis failed, so he came out horribly deformed. He has a completely black third eye on the side of his face which allows him to see more. His skin is drooping over to the left. His teeth are pointy and black. His voice is very low. However, he is surprisingly balanced and graceful, with increased strength.
Personality?:
Bio? *Optional*: N/A
DNA? *What you are mutated with *: Charis was mutated with a spider monkey.
Other?: N/A
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| 27 Jul 2014 01:40 AM |
| I'm going to sleep. Too tired. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 01:40 AM |
~ CHARACTER SHEET ~
Name?: Thomas 'Tom' Adams
Gender?: Male
Age?: 22
Appearance? *This is after you're mutated *: Cheetah speed, and markings, but tires quickly. Also mixed with eagle's wings and eyesight. The drawback is that bright sunlight is often dangerous.
Personality?: loyal to people who he knows and can trust, and also very joyful. He is rash, and can rush into battle without thinking much.
Bio? *Optional*:
DNA? *What you are mutated with *: Eagle, cheetah.
Other?: I'm not telling you guys figure it out
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l0ldude1
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| 27 Jul 2014 01:43 AM |
(Forgot personality.)
Charis is passive and wishes to save all species, though he can and will hurt people. Basically, this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KRy9mlAsOSs#t=03m40s |
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| 27 Jul 2014 01:45 AM |
| Loldude you are missing something. |
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jcarsonw2
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| 27 Jul 2014 02:16 AM |
~ CHARACTER SHEET ~
Name?: Kevin Ash
Gender?: Male
Age?: 18
Appearance? *This is after you're mutated *: Kevin has green skin and is covered in scales, he also has spikes protruding from his spine. He has pitch black eyes that allow him to see in the dark, however, because of this he is incredibly vulnerable to bright lights. He wears ruined jeans and a scratched up white t-shirt, Kevin tends to walk on all fours as he finds it uncomfortable to stay bipedal.
Personality?: Kevin is bipolar, half of him is a feral animal with uncontrollable instincts to hunt and defend himself, but the other half is a gentle, caring person, these sides are constantly at war with each other, because of this Kevin is hostile to those around him and is incredibly unstable.
Bio? *Optional*: Not for right now, too much thinking
DNA? *What you are mutated with *: Snake, or some other sort of reptilian creature.
Other?: Mutations |
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| 27 Jul 2014 02:39 AM |
Critique:
Ignoring the grammar and spelling mistakes there are a bit of plot errors I'm seeing. One of my biggest problems with this story is that it is never explained why putting animal genetics into a human would be needed or useful in anyway...
This line also gets me: "Due to the government not caring for the poor..." Seems a bit misguided without more information to why they don't. Is it because they can't pay bills? Wouldn't stealing homeless or just poor people spark controversy, homeless and poor people have families and they would notice if they just disappeared completely.
The plot isn't necessarily bad it is just missing some points, none are key. They just leave blank spots where there shouldn't be. Seems a bit unoriginal but the effort and style is all there.
6.9/10
(Might join because I'm bored and I'm a hypocrite when it comes to my judgments.) |
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:02 AM |
I forgot to add something to Ryan's appearance. Ryan wears his combat gear: ballistic vest, camo shirt and pants. His uniform includes polish flag patches on his chest and shoulders. Reason why: He was returning from a top secret mission in Georgia (the country) and he was about to change clothes when he was suddenly kidnapped and drugged. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:04 AM |
I've seen splicing animal DNA into human DNA with captives done multiple times on this forum. Then again I've been around for a while. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:34 AM |
| Should we anyway start? Or should we wait fir Pawz? |
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PawzKat
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:39 AM |
| I'm just looking up some parasitic beasts. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:43 AM |
| How about a lamprey? They scare the crap out of me. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:47 AM |
| Hehe. I just found a nice one. I'll be creating my form now. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 10:57 AM |
Name?: Pattyn Jaspert Grimm.
Gender?: Male.
Age?: Eighteen.
Appearance? *This is after you're mutated *: : Jasper stands at about 6'1, which, in his opinion he considers to be rather average for a guy his age. He weighs in at something around 150, his frequent activities keeping his build lean. Being tall, he is also lanky, and has a tendency to trip over his feet, or to accidentally knock something over with a backhand. A veteran runner, with lean, sinewy muscles in his legs. With skin colour that resembles something close to a creamy pale, with a hint of peach, he's certainly strange. Due to his fair skin, whenever Kayden is pressured to blush, his skin instantly heats up, becoming a splotchy, fiery red. Freckles can be spotted, falling over his nose and even lightly crossing into his cheeks.
His eyes are green. Not the normal kind of green, which is a crisp, clear colour, but a more pronounced emerald, or jade. Actually, that's not really the truth. While it was not a lie that both irises are green, one might perhaps note that they're, well, different shades of green. His right, a deep, penetrating emerald, the colour that seems to stare through your soul and beyond. On the edge of this alluring emerald lay a ring of yellowish-hazel, a colour normally reserved the felinistic eyes of cats. Kayden's left eye, was a light slate. Similar to a blade, this faint, clear green could harden and strike, rendering one speechless at the plain mixture of these odd eyes. A rounded appearance, his eyes hold, they are lashed by his long, thick lashes, which have been described as "lashes" a girl could kill for. Pattyn's features could be described more as "rugged", or "sculpted", with prominent cheekbones and a chin.
His hair is a dark, frenzied mess. Though while it isn't curly, his hair wouldn't be described as straight either. It can be called wavy, because, as stated, it was a mix of the two. It's also rare to see this boy comb it, as he prefers the mismatched strands and such. As for the accurate colour description, it's dark...almost black in colour with the occasional streak of a chestnut running through, which he dyed himself. His eyebrows match his hair colour, as in most cases. On some days, Jazz will run around with a faint stubble on his chin.
As a result of his mutations, he now as beautiful, insect-like wings jutting out from his shoulder blades, which he can use to fly. In addition, his fingers are all topped with stingers, that he can use to paralyze, numb pain, and to 'zombify' people, which is where they would essentially loose their 'fight or flight' instinct. Another result of the experiments is that he's developed a taste for blood, which is what's needed to replenish his energy. He drinks the blood by either injuring someone, or biting them with his teeth. And lastly, his senses, and reflexes were enhanced.
Personality?: [ this will be developed as the foreplay progresses, please. ]
Bio? *Optional*: He can't exactly remember, as is the result of the experiments.
DNA? *What you are mutated with *: Emerald Jewel Wasp.
Other?: Mutations. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 11:05 AM |
| Alright, I think we should start. I'll describe Ryan's kidnapping, I guess, when sweet is on. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 11:55 AM |
Name?: Ben
Gender?:Male
Age?:Eighteen
Appearance? *This is after you're mutated *: He has more of a raven look to him. His arms had turned into wings so hes unable to pick things up normaly. His face had changed, so his nose and mouth had changed to a beak for him to be able to pick things like a normal bird can. His eyes are sliver, he has a tail which helps him balance himself to fly. Most of his body are covered up of feathers, Which makes him look poofy in his cloths.
Personality?:Hes quiet and a bit of a curious one than most people. Due to the experiment his Personality is bit like a bird
Bio? *Optional*: He tried to get money for his family. But he got kidnapped in the process. Pretty much it
DNA? *What you are mutated with *: Raven
Other?: nah, just hope mine is fine. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 12:23 PM |
Glitch, you forgot something. Other than that, everyone is accepted. |
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| 27 Jul 2014 12:24 PM |
| What did I forget? I would like to know please. |
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