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Re: A book I'm working on (ORION, THE FALLEN CONSTELLATION)

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MasterRelic is not online. MasterRelic
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26 Jul 2014 05:27 PM
A constellation, a group of stars that seem to develop a imaginary shape in the skies. Named after something from people and animals to just objects.
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Orion, The Fallen Constellation:
A constellation, isn't just a group of stars. And in this book, they mean more than that. Humans are currently unaware of what is beyond the galaxies and the stars. But what if I told you these constellations weren't just stars.

Each star that goes to a certain constellation holds part of that constellations essence. If it were to be damaged or cracked, it's possible essence could leak and cause issues with that specific constellation. But these constellations aren't stars, they are human lifeforms.

There was once 88 constellations, with now only 16 remaining. Orion being one of them. Each constellation has a goal which is to defend earth from the beyond galaxies and constellations, there is much more to this that I cannot explain. Nor' can I explain the reason they defend the Milky Way galaxy. But they have a reason, and their creators built them for this reason.

ORIONS FALLING: Orion made a choice that went against some laws of all the constellations. Therefore the leading constellation known as Scorpius. Humans made their own stories about their past but they knew their own.
So, Scorpius went to Orion seeking a answer to his betrayal. The answer wasn't given, and they had a battle which in the end Scorpius was victorious. Therefore Orion fell from space, and all his essence stars with him. Shattered across earth, with one of his stars being his human form.
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My name is Orion if you didn't know, and this book seemed interesting to make in my head.
In this book we don't know what happens to Orion when he falls to earth until I actually publish the book. There are hundreds of things that might have happened. One being memory loss, fractured his bones, broke a few bones, died on impact. And so much more.

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MasterRelic is not online. MasterRelic
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26 Jul 2014 05:55 PM
Bump
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gokussj127 is not online. gokussj127
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26 Jul 2014 05:59 PM
its gonna fail and never come to fruition
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MasterRelic is not online. MasterRelic
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26 Jul 2014 06:04 PM
Thanks, bump.
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phoniex is not online. phoniex
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26 Jul 2014 06:10 PM
Science fiction that goes completely against modern science? Isn't that like having a romance story that goes completely against the rules of human love?

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26 Jul 2014 06:12 PM
I mean, SERIOUSLY? Constellations are human beings? What kind of setup is that!?

It's like saying that North America is actually an ant! It makes NO SENSE!

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26 Jul 2014 06:15 PM
Read about mythology on constellations.

You learn a lot.
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26 Jul 2014 06:20 PM
I am aware of the mythology about constellations, but writing this book is like trying to make a movie adaptation of Dante's Paradiso: You have to update it to fit in with the modern understanding of our universe, otherwise it makes no sense!

This isn't like evolution or the existence of a deity which is still a serious debate, it's confirmed as a reality beyond any doubt!

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26 Jul 2014 06:25 PM
Then what do I 'update'
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26 Jul 2014 06:30 PM
Your book's entire premise.

Actually, even in the realm of mythology, there are mistakes:

Not all the constellations are humans. Some are animals, half-breeds, mythical beasts, and gods.

Also, If we are following Greek mythology, what about the planets as gods? You know, Hermes (Mercury), Aphrodite (Venus), Ares (Mars), Zeus (Jupiter), and Kronos (Saturn)?

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26 Jul 2014 06:38 PM
I understand that not all constellations are human. There are 88, 14 consisting of humans. Which is exactly why, I said 16 remained. The other two are animals. But you don't know yet what their usage is.

The planets representing gods is a myth that humans got incorrect.


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26 Jul 2014 07:04 PM
@master

"The planets representing gods is a myth that humans got incorrect."

AND THE CONSTELLATIONS AREN'T!?

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26 Jul 2014 07:22 PM
It' a story, wha'd you expect?

It's the same as in real life, some things that human believe are real as to some not being real.

It's pretty logical using common sense.
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26 Jul 2014 07:29 PM
@Master

Mate, anyone with a milligram of common sense knows that the constellations are stars, not sentient beings.

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26 Jul 2014 07:35 PM
Woopty doo

You just realized the books fiction

gtfo.
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phoniex is not online. phoniex
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26 Jul 2014 08:43 PM
But even fiction needs to have SOME basis in logic and common sense!

Unless you are going for something absolutely bonkers like Alice in Wonderland or FLCL, which you are clearly not.
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26 Jul 2014 08:56 PM
Doesn't sound bonkers at all.

I can explain this all in 10 sentences without detail.
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26 Jul 2014 09:34 PM
evolution is a fact it's just up for debate among people who won't accept it

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26 Jul 2014 10:17 PM
^ Thank you, Bump.
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26 Jul 2014 10:20 PM
By "bonkers", I mean "no logic or common sense," not "far too complicated."
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MasterRelic is not online. MasterRelic
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26 Jul 2014 10:24 PM
Same thing...


No logic = Confusing


Where were you born.
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26 Jul 2014 11:19 PM
Just because you can explain it, doesn't mean it can't be illogical. Let me demonstrate:

I was almost dead. The demonic sun was falling to Earth, but then the most powerful gun in the world appeared next to me. I didn't find any bullets, but the gun was powered by friendship, so I took it out and shot the sun to pieces, causing gummy candy to spill out of it's every wound, and for peace to be restored to the ninth dimension and Sixth Earth.
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MasterRelic is not online. MasterRelic
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27 Jul 2014 12:20 AM
That's what someone would do on purpose dumbo...


Which is why you don't WRITE IT FKING ILLOGICAL.
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27 Jul 2014 03:11 AM
To me, your story doesn't make much more sense. I mean, think about it this way: How can random shapes people found made up of stars hundreds of light years large possibly be sentient beings? It's like a connect-the-dots structure coming to life if the dots were hundreds of miles apart.
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