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| 24 Jul 2014 12:36 AM |
[Hook (x2)] I've been riding around with my blunt on my lips With the sun in my eyes and my gun on my hip Paranoia on my mind, got my mind on the fritz But a lot of ngga's dyin, so my 9 with the shts.
[Verse 1] Move to the neighborhood, I bet they don't stay for good, watch Somebody'll steal daddy's Rollie, call it the neighborhood watch. Pray for a safer hood when my paper good, watch Captain Save-a-Hood, hood savior, baby boy. Still getting ID'd for Swishers (Mama still wash my clothes) Still with Save Money militia (I'mma still watch my bros) Trapped in the middle of the map with a little-bitty rock and a little bit of rap That, with a literary knack, and a little shtty Mac, and like, literally jack ahhhh!
[Hook (x2)] I've been riding around with my blunt on my lips With the sun in my eyes and my gun on my hip Paranoia on my mind, got my mind on the fritz But a lot of ngga's dyin, so my 9 with the shts.
[My Verse] Life is a blur. They say, Nah is just a Verge of lies, and cries from person to person. And then there some that says Life is good, Because of the money. Well honey open your eyes. Life is now full of crimes, Pennies, Nickles, And dimes. Ahhh! No more Hustlers, Now its just Phony's That don't work For their money ahhh! - Chuckles - But if you look at it, The world is trash full of ass, and Fg's. That Hate on ngga's that is being successful. Ahhh!
[Hook (x2)] I've been riding around with my blunt on my lips With the sun in my eyes and my gun on my hip Paranoia on my mind, got my mind on the fritz But a lot of ngga's dyin, so my 9 with the shts.
Leave a comment on my verse, Tell me how i did for my first verse evr on roblox. |
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Stan115
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:43 AM |
| 0/10, verse has no structure |
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:43 AM |
| Thanks for letting me know im Just starting man >:( |
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:47 AM |
| Yo Bruh you aint even signed so GDFO telling me what to do. |
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JunJoe
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:57 AM |
| Well i had to make that verse in like 20 minutes so its trash tbhh. But ill have more time for more songs. |
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JunJoe
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:19 AM |
| what do you mean you HAD to |
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| 24 Jul 2014 11:25 AM |
Masculists can make a better and original song in just 5 minutes. WTF you talkin' bout? |
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:09 PM |
| ^ xD that is so true. xD when I send wobull verses I write em in five minutes too. XD |
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:10 PM |
| He used the same word 3 straight times to rhyme |
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| 24 Jul 2014 12:15 PM |
better than me I spent a month writing a song, and it failed. |
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| 12 Aug 2014 01:18 PM |
| I made my raps in like a minute xd |
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| 01 Jul 2017 11:22 AM |
| doesnt rlly give an unblocked id.useless |
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