NiceCoder
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| 24 Jul 2014 03:33 AM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKpFhIhYDXo ^ i made
im looking for feedback mostly on what i can improve for the actual thing and rates on the job so far.
i know 1 thing is probably making the text clearer on some bits
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VFXed
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| 24 Jul 2014 06:50 AM |
Nice. But you could've tried to hide the GUI a bit better. Also, a bit of voice acting would be nice -- I almost fell asleep.
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NiceCoder
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| 24 Jul 2014 08:44 AM |
not really the guy for voice acting but there's more action in this one, official part 1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKCAHRFVKEs |
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