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NiceCoder is not online. NiceCoder
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24 Jul 2014 03:33 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKpFhIhYDXo
^ i made

im looking for feedback mostly on what i can improve for the actual thing and rates on the job so far.

i know 1 thing is probably making the text clearer on some bits

k
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NiceCoder is not online. NiceCoder
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24 Jul 2014 05:48 AM
well
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VFXed is not online. VFXed
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24 Jul 2014 06:50 AM
Nice. But you could've tried to hide the GUI a bit better. Also, a bit of voice acting would be nice -- I almost fell asleep.

#VCRCanChangeProbablyMaybeNot
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NiceCoder is not online. NiceCoder
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24 Jul 2014 08:44 AM
not really the guy for voice acting but there's more action in this one, official part 1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKCAHRFVKEs
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