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| 23 Jul 2014 05:57 PM |
I'm building for a game with a friend, this is the first map, just wanted you guys to take a look. http://www.roblox.com/DominusPrimuss-Place-place?id=133411287 [:TDP:] Add 1.9k to my post count |
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| 23 Jul 2014 09:42 PM |
| Well it's kind of harsh, unless you are doing a waterfall or rock/cliff type of terrain than the terrain should never bee that abrupt. It should be a lot smoother but other than that it looks great. |
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Notslony
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| 23 Jul 2014 10:01 PM |
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Danketsu
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| 23 Jul 2014 10:32 PM |
| Well, as my main focus being terrain, I can say a lot of things. None of this is meant to hurt your feelings of course, but it may be a bit harsh. Your terrain is like reaalllly rough. It should be much smoother if it's meant to be realistic, plus some pieces of it have parts that stick out, meaning it should have another brick placed to flatten it off, if you want to look for examples of how smooth terrain should usually be, you could check out my first place. I'm not saying my terrain is perfect, but it should be a good example of what I'm trying to point out. Also, the geometry is near impossiiiible. Things like this would never really happen, and if you want the place to look like something maybe real, it should be smoother. Just my input though, don't have to believe me! :P |
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| 23 Jul 2014 10:38 PM |
Dan, of you're rating terrain, can you please check out my similar terrain here. My main problem is the map is a bit small but I want the ground to look rough but like it fits in. What's you opinion of this: http://www.roblox.com/Legend-of-The-Cursed-Key-place?id=145938064 Also @original poster instead of a terrain drop I suggest a cliff using rocks |
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| 24 Jul 2014 05:00 AM |
That bit is meant to be harsh. [:TDP:] |
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