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| 21 Jul 2014 01:25 PM |
Verse 1:The Desire Accomplished is sweet to soul When U Know ure one of God's own The one thing to destroy that feeling is hate but u can only create hate with anger and ache you shuld imbrace hate and den change it to something great I think I have a purpose here that is to not be fake I find joy everyday because I know God is da reason why I'm here today Don't be listening to haters Don't change cuz ya great God has a purpose for you it don't matter if ya g(dash)I knw never to be scared cuz is right here looking upon me and everyone knowing we got somethin us so great Don't Change
Hook:Show Me Your Ways O'lord Teach me in your paths;Guide me in your truth and teach me, For you are God My Saviour, And my hope is in you all day long Don't Change!! 2x
Verse 2:God Loves u and He has not forgotten you For all we know there's a wrong and a right and a heaven and a hell I stay in my Lane tryna keep dis real trill and im true We all Push through It's Time For me to making a change thats why im rapping for real not for fake The Desire Accomplished is sweet to soul When U Know ure one of God's own The one thing to destroy that feeling is hate but u can only create hate with anger and ache
Hook:Show Me Your Ways O'lord Teach me in your paths;Guide me in your truth and teach me, For you are God My Saviour, And my hope is in you all day long Don't Change!! 2x
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RandyMD
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| 21 Jul 2014 02:20 PM |
This needs better work, i'm expecting more from you ghana. This song needed better grammar, song structure and it has little to no rhyme. Are you still rapping? or ist this just a Christian song. Its okay to do christian rap, just try to make your songs more clear with the meaning. Also,
The Desire Accomplished is sweet to soul When U Know ure one of God's own The one thing to destroy that feeling is hate but u can only create hate with anger and ache
That should've been a bridge |
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| 21 Jul 2014 02:46 PM |
| Besides the typos, impropper grammar, religous entries and lack of detail, this is fine :P |
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iaw35
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| 21 Jul 2014 05:20 PM |
| These verse are as long as the ones in pills and potions..., this song is literally 45 seconds... |
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Aristios
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| 21 Jul 2014 05:58 PM |
Lol this song is a joke lol people L m F A o.
There is no such thing as haters they are called critics you stoop |
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| 22 Jul 2014 02:30 AM |
| Thks for da comment and aristios do u see da point in dis song and how da song a joke its about God dumba$$ |
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| 22 Jul 2014 09:34 AM |
Yezzy G? Ok
A head G hogging up the mic I got it. |
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