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| 18 Jul 2014 10:35 PM |
(Verse 1/2Crucial) Addiction.... No I'm addicted to whatever that'll take the pain away, and make it feel a little better My brother think I'm losing my mind Thinking my brain fried If only he could see a glimpse of how my brain tries Oz of analysts of everything I see in this world My satellite that's too much [s] to dish off, and I mis fall from a discharge Like K Dot say, and I will doof doof any [n] off the K Dot way You feel me, or you don't I give a [s] less of your interest I picture bigger than you little [n]'s ever pictured You looking to fill your glass I'm looking to fill my picture Y'all looking to get a draft Over looked the greatest picture, my [n] Please don't let me catch you slipping Give em' something to remember, make em' wish they did it different, cause I do it I do it I'm doing it well, well better than you [n]'s doing, so [h] Might as well give you [n]'s this issue, cause I can hit a target if I happen to miss you I'm asking em'
(Chorus) What are you, what are you, what are you so afraid of x2
(Verse 2/2Crucial) Well for me it's addiction No I'm addicted to whatever that'll take the pain away, and make it feel a little better Ain't nobody better say I can't fit when I'm up on this cliff About to jump off I feel it It's like I feel somebody got they gun drawn, and still is Pressing against my back This pressure I'm getting at it It's how I'm feeling on a daily, and pressing me is the fact that I haven't done it already I'm quick to carrying on I'm quick to load up my rifle, and blast it on every song I'm quick to flip up the script when you feel like you [n]'s on I just wonder where my thoughts go Off, think I'm lost in the place I should not go, but here I got roaming again Something about how you got me feeling keep on pulling me in I'm going
(Chorus) What are you, what are you, what are you so afraid of x2
(Verse 3/Chanel G) I have no one else to blame for my own destruction Before I start this discussion, let me give an introduction About my mind's corruption and it's repercussions You see it's not too much of an addiction... It's more of a habit No matter how hard I try to avoid it, I just gotta have it They think I'm going crazy, then again I just might be I do what ever causes me to shine less brightly In the back of my head it smites me, it's unsightly I do whatever'll take the pain away, and make it feel a little better Stay away from me, I deserve a scarlet letter I do it to make my living hells turn into heavens Nevertheless, shame on me for never learnin my lesson Seems like everything bad tends to make you feel good If I was able to stop, trust me- I would If only I could It's got ahold of me to a point where you don't understand I've tried to stop, but I just can't My head is spinnin around and around, Feet feelin high off the ground, Alright enough of the excuses To be real, the truth is I'm losing my mind, I'm afflicted Not gonna sugarcoat it, I admit it- I'm addicted
(Chorus) What are you, what are you, what are you so afraid of What's up? Been a minute since we kicked it, you've been caught up With them [b]'s, I don't get it, you're a star love You shouldn't have to deal with that, I'd never make you feel like that x1 |
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| 18 Jul 2014 11:02 PM |
| 8/10 makes sense, Weenie likes it |
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MANTIS21
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| 18 Jul 2014 11:41 PM |
ill be honest
this is pretty good |
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romallo
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| 19 Jul 2014 01:35 PM |
| Very good. Really good. ChanelG ripped it. 2Crucial ripped it too. ChanelG strung her words together really well. 2Crucial also did good but his word choice threw me off once or twice. But over-all Very,Very good. |
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| 19 Jul 2014 03:34 PM |
I may be speaking for other people as well when I say I've been waiting for a collab from you two for a looooong time. This came out just as perfect as I thought I would.
2Crucial: GREAT wordplay- You're one of the rare "Ro-Rappers" or "Ro-Poets/Lyricists" I know here that can successfully tell a story through your words. Its pretty difficult to express emotion without looking stereotypical, but you overcome that flawlessly. Welcome back, 2Cru.
Chanel G: PERFECT multi's- You never fail to wow me with your use of awesome vocabulary, and references without them quite being metaphors. Great job, and I'm hoping to see you on an upcoming cypher soon.
Overall rate: 9/10. The chorus could have used a bit more work, but that didn't take away from the talent I've seen here today. Keep up the good work both of you. |
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| 19 Jul 2014 04:41 PM |
| There's really not many metaphors or wordplay here but this track was GREAT, I especially like Chanel's last line and how it flowed a pattern, and you guys both did a great story |
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ChanelG
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Aristios
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| 19 Jul 2014 07:49 PM |
| Lol Chanel and 2crucial like we haven't seen this before Lel MT TMZ |
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| 19 Jul 2014 10:32 PM |
| Appreciate the comments and feedback! |
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| 20 Jul 2014 08:55 AM |
Ayeeeeee 100 lions out of 10 lions. 2fab4me |
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altar30
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| 22 Jul 2014 12:38 AM |
| Dang Keke just out with it XD |
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