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| 15 Jul 2014 12:14 AM |
(Verse 1) Competition... Honesty I'm lacking that Matter fact that's truer than the bottom of a snapple cap Welcome to the habitat If you wanna battle rap I'm betting that you'll flop You know I called that like a magic jack Then I snap attack, and start spitting venoming Making Benjamin's Hitting up your women friends to take em' for some dinner then, I'm giving them the business when we in between the winning [s] I'm at the height of it Rhyming scheme freighting Lighting bolt inside your throat I'm dashing like a hypnotist The fresh little pest, and you kids ain't even ripening Best of the best, and I stick with O's like hydrogen That [s]'s disastrous I'm in it like a pathogen The fact that he's a masterpiece is practically miraculous Nah, man I'm past that [s] Captain of the capital You know I'm dropping rapping flow that makes em' [s] like Laxatives Talking trash but really they twice as whack as me All I see is sucker's like I'm in a Dyson Factory Getting hungry with a appetite for rappers, and eflow tifes from the future, so I have to type it backwards Prepare you for the service Then I sacrifice you after Make a joke in your expense Turn the after life to laughter
(Verse 2) Yeah, It's awesome how your lyrasisem dropped inside a coffin In the mist of talking about how swag's involved Then while your bumping that mess you made I'll be in the everglades, chilling while the record plays, and thinking about the better days Might not be the first to say, but I bet I'm the best to say that life is just a test of faze, so you don't get to exit late If you disagree then [b]'s please I got the sickest eaze It'll make your [f]'ing clique sit and sneeze Every single day you know I ball like Mystic Clean Now my name is fresh in they mouth like listerine Hotter than your stove top Grand like an old clock Growing on my own, but I ain't never harvest get your own crops Try to bite it but you choke because I'm enedible It's cliff hanging music, and trust me you should let it go When I'm on a track you know I kill it from the first sound Floating in the sky, but I think that I'm probably earth bound Put you in the dirt now Coming through to decimate Freshest in the music bis, and I ain't even estimate I don't care let them hate I'm hotter than the mandalize Rapping in the present got delivery like Santa kid I can handle it Kicking em' out like contraband Stay steezy that's the mother [f]'ing mantra man... |
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Aetion
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| 15 Jul 2014 06:21 AM |
Nice job LilB I called you that on purpose. |
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| 15 Jul 2014 11:39 AM |
DOPE bro, check me out tho, either watch and see or hype beast both by truensee |
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| 15 Jul 2014 11:43 AM |
"Snapple cap"? 10/10. Nice bro. |
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| 15 Jul 2014 11:46 AM |
| Thank you, and if you were wondering what a snapple cap was it's real facts. |
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| 15 Jul 2014 01:46 PM |
Welcome back man. You improved even though you were already good 10/10 |
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ChanelG
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Cpt5
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| 26 Jul 2014 06:31 PM |
| Congrats! You managed to be unoriginal! |
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| 26 Jul 2014 06:42 PM |
until you can prove how he was unoriginal no
and if you'd said "pretty please naruto-san", i would have stopped 5 hours ago |
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Cpt5
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| 26 Jul 2014 06:47 PM |
You want me to prove he was unoriginal? He is like everyone else, be a total scrub, add cuss words, then act like you are good. |
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| 26 Jul 2014 06:48 PM |
>be a total scrub
read that stopped taking you seriously
and if you'd said "pretty please naruto-san", i would have stopped 5 hours ago |
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| 26 Jul 2014 06:58 PM |
| I've always been a fan of you, I enjoyed the verse 1 but not so much with verse 2. I think you should try to add a bridge or a hook into your songs because without it its just two run on verses right next to each other... that's how I feel at least |
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Cpt5
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| 26 Jul 2014 07:16 PM |
| *naruto: So ignorant he can't take honestly seriously. |
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| 26 Jul 2014 08:45 PM |
nice try
and if you'd said "pretty please naruto-san", i would have stopped 5 hours ago |
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