Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 02:56 PM |
This is where you Warrior RP. (No, I wont be very active here in RPing.) ================================================================================= Crystalpaw padded straight towards the mouse. She wasn't even thinking about stalking up on it; just padded up to it. The mouse sniffed the clearing, and scrambled into a bunch of leaves. Crystalpaw gave up on it. The sun glimmered down on her from the sunshine, above the forest's roof. She padded all the way back to her tiny, stringy, mouse she buried undergrowth. She dug it up, and found her way back to the training hollow. Therefore, she didn't think of putting her mouse in the fresh kill pile, nor feeding the hungry elders. She had the mouse's tiny scruff in her jaws, and found her mentor, there, in the Training Hollow. "No, no. Not well done!" Spat her mentor, Snowfur. "What! What did I do wrong? I hunted so well!" Crystalpaw meowed. Snowfur blinked at her, trying to see if she was joking. She wasn't. So Snowfur spoke, "Everything. Well, you only caught one mouse, and its to stringy to even help a kit. You didn't stalk up on the prey. And didn't even go back to camp and place your catch in the fresh kill pile!" Spat Snowfur, disgustingly. Crystalpaw flinched, and pawed back to camp. She looked up from the underground, and stared in horror at her camp. Shadeclan was attacking! She yowled an alarm, and fear scent clinged against her fur. She sprung herself on top of their leader, Smokingstar. He flung her to the ground, and blood dripped fast off her pelt. And she was left in nothing, but darkness. (Now guys, continue the RP here!) |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:24 PM |
| C'mon guys! Don't be shy! I'll be active as much as I can! Please reply! Make your whole on book! C'mon!!! REPLY!!! :D Just continue the RP/ story!!! Like (This isn't it continue you from the first post) Crystalpaw saw a Starclan warrior. It was their old leader, Falconstar. "Oh Falconstar, why have you brought me here?" Falconstar spoke quietly, "We'll take care of you. You'll no longer be inside the forest." Crystalpaw stared at him. "No! Take me back! Please!" But Falconstar faded away, and she felt that she did, too. "I'm only an apprentice!" She wailed into the white fluffy clouds of Starclan. (Guys, don't continue from this continue from And she was left in nothing, but darkness.) |
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:37 PM |
And a fat guy walks in and sits on here. That was the end of Crystalpaw. The End. |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:38 PM |
YAY! Thanks so much! Fill out this! Name: Clan: (Dustclan ~Clan Crystalpaw is in~ Shadeclan, Dawnclan, or Midnightclan) Appearance: Age: Siblings: Extra: |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:39 PM |
| That cant happen, littleboyjimmy! Crystalpaw is still alive, for now. Well, we don't know. She got attacked by Shadeclan's leader. |
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:42 PM |
| then two hours later crystalpaw awoke in a strange unfamiliar scented place. she tried to get up on her feet but she was in too much pain, then she heard a soothing voice saying "you need to keep laying down little one". crystalpaw recognized her leaders voice. she asked where she was and why the medicine cat, diamondpelt wasnt helping her. the leader of the clan moonstar, replied "she helped to chase shadeclan away, and breeze clan took us in". some cats came to the den to speak with moonstar. crystalpaw over heard them saying that they saw stream clan members attacking also. this is bad moonstar thought streamclan and shadeclan have teamed up, so we will have to team up with breeze clan!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------continue from this post |
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:46 PM |
| your a good writer erinblox could you read my post? |
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:48 PM |
| (Mind if I give some advice for this?) |
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:51 PM |
| can we base it more off the series and make it breezeclan-(windclan) streamclan-(riverclan) shadeclan-(shadowclan) and lightningclan-(thunderclan) |
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:56 PM |
im like co leader of this post! lol
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:58 PM |
| I read it, diamond. Its great! Thanks for calling me a good writer, you are too. :) |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:59 PM |
| Sure. What is it? I might not take the advice, but still, say it. |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 03:59 PM |
| Great idea! But make sure the names aren't to similar to the books, and don't make any spoilers either. |
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:00 PM |
| what about the clan thing i was talking about? |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:01 PM |
| i was typing when you posted |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:02 PM |
| Oh, of course I'll take your clan idea, diamond! My post just, somehow got deleted. I said it was great. I'll take it. Now, diamond, don't spoil anything.. like nvm.. I cant even say. O.o |
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:02 PM |
| we can all go play out this roleplay in the warrior cats game i call being moonstar!!!lol |
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Erinblox1
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:03 PM |
| Why not play one? Ok, I'll go ahead and join! |
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l0ldude1
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:04 PM |
...Two ODers giggling about Warrior Cats? Disregard. |
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| 10 Jul 2014 04:04 PM |
| its funny how we both have nerd glasses! G-4-E |
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