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Re: Ethereal: Chronicles of the Spirit Realm
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gilzar
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| 01 Jul 2014 08:59 AM |
A world, unseen by most. Even those who believe it can’t see it, and those who see it at first don’t believe it at first. A world not like any other. The strongest telescope cannot see it, the bravest explorer could not find it. Yet it seems that those who do not seek it come upon it, and are bound to it for eternity.
The Spirit Realm, a place of wonder, mystery, and beauty. It was once a place of peace and order, the ideal realm, wouldn’t it be?
It would, as it is filled with individuals and creatures of all sorts, creatures that live as common folk, filling the streets, working jobs, just like humans would in the ‘Earth Realm’. They live in an entirely different realm, and this realm is one gigantic city on top of many cliffs, surrounded by what could be a never-ending sea. To Human eyes this city would look to have an old Asian architecture theme, due to the similarities in architecture with old Asian culture. Human eyes would also notice that this city ran on steam, as both giant and small steam pipes travel throughout the entire city, in the skyline, on top of buildings, in the under-sections, and scaling the cliffs.
The creatures that make up this realm vary greatly, from being animal-like to something very different. All of them work a variety of jobs, and make up the various levels of society, and are common sights of the spirit realm. They are known as Kurīchā, Japanese for ‘Common Folk’. Prior to common belief Kuricha is not apart of the social class pyramid, it is just the name of the various creatures that inhabit the spirit realm.
Of course you may be wondering if Humans fit into this. Of course they do, none of the chaos that is undergoing in the Spirit Realm would be happening if not for them. Humans are the undermost part of Society in Spirit realm, they are known as Ningen as compared to the Kuricha there are few. They are poor, work undesirable jobs, such as being a servant, or a Steam Station worker. This often turns many to a life of crime, which has tainted the reputation of the Human population. Humans are all regarded as dirty, fowl, criminals, and much of the Spirit Realms problems are blamed on them. As you can imagine they are heavily discriminated against, and the law is never on their side.
The humans that end up in the Spirit Realm are from various time periods in the Earth Realm, from the Romans to Modern Civilization. Their arrival in the Spirit Realm is a mystery; most have no clue how they ended up there. Yet there are a few who claim that a girl in white robe, with pale skin, white hair, and stunning red irises sent them there, usually saying some mysterious phrase that sounds like nonsense…
Like any other society, the Spirit Realm does have order. It is under the rule of Shadow-like individuals, or one may describe them as ghost-like creatures, which float slightly over the ground, are a transparent black in color, and two large glowing yellow eyes which show their emotion. They are all known as Hikage, Japanese for Shade. They are all very intelligent individuals, yet their personalities all vary greatly. But they are all infamous for one thing: All of them have extremely annoying laughs. Seriously, if you get a Hikage to laugh, they laugh, and laugh, or on some occasions have uncontrolled snickers. Either way, very annoying…anyway, getting back on topic.
The Hikage rule the Spirit Realm, they rule in a consul known as the Consul of Shadows. When making decisions like any consul, they vote about it. The Consul of Shadows listens to what the underlings in the social class pyramid say, and then act on it, passing laws or bills to meet their needs.
Sounds pretty nice doesn’t it? It was very nice, until the Consul of Shadows became made up of only power-hungry Hikage Nobles, who will do anything they can to keep making money, and stay in power. This contributes even more to the present situation inside of the spirit realm. To make matters worse, Hikages don’t die of old age, so you can’t wait out the corrupt Hikage.
Now, obviously something has to keep all of these individuals in the spirit realm in order, or what would stop them from overthrowing the Hikage? That is the job of the Keisatsu. The Keisatsu are men-shaped figures, that are completely white, have no faces, and wear police-like uniforms. They are trained in a elite kendo-like art, and they wield fighting sticks, to muzzle-loading rifles (No modern weaponry!). The Keisatsu run on logic only, and are extremely cruel. Something from handing out a simple ticket, which they do rampantly, can quickly turn into a brutal beating to keep an individual disciplined. The Keisatsu were meant to keep the realm in order, but they are controlled by the Consul of Shadows, making them extra-cruel.
The Keisatsu can be found patrolling the streets of the Spirit realm in various patrol methods. They can be seen traveling on foot in groups of three, one at the front and two in the back. They can also be seen in groups of two, being escorted by a medium sized pure white dog with no eyes, and a black nose that guides them. Or, on some occasions a single Keisatsu can be seen patrolling the streets on the back of a snow white bear with pure black eyes and nose. This is no ordinary bear, as they are slightly larger and can actually speak.
I’ve gone on and on about the current situation in the spirit realm, and you’ve probably grown curious about what it is. Well, even though I may have said that the Human population is small compared to the other populations, but they are still causing major problems. The main problem is that the Humans are unhappy, they want a better life in the Spirit Realm, or they want out of the spirit realm. This has been an issue for years but they are starting to violent, as riots are breaking out in the streets. These riots are extremely destructive, and hard to tame, and usually result in a mass beating from the Keisatsu, who are growing more and more violent by the day. Now a days it seems glaring at the wrong person could get you a beating from the Keisatsu.
But something is going on that is more than just simple riots, there is talks of revolution! Talks of the Human Population overthrowing the Hikage, or even trying to find a way out of the Spirit Realm. The Hikage don’t want this, and are going out of their way to be especially cruel to the Human population, which causes more unrest, which causes the Keisatsu to be even crueler to everyone. Even the Kuricha are suffering and growing restless. Now there is inflation on goods, price of living is increasing, and the slums are expanding.
Not to mention everyone has been frightened by some kind of masked figure, weaping a smiling drama mask, dressed in all scarlet colors that parades around painting a red version of his mask on walls with Revolution under it, and he has become a symbol of the revolution. He is extremely evasive, and the Keisatsu have yet to catch him. Even speaking of his name… ‘The Phantom’ is against the law, speak of him with a whisper if you must.
Currently (Where this Role-Play will be taking off at) there appears to be a storm on the Horizon. Between the Revolutionary group that goes under the alias ‘The Scarlet Phantoms’ and the Hikage there seems that there will be no compromise. The Scarlet Phantoms appear to be ever growing, and their smuggling operations run rampant through the city. Now, the Hikage have halted all fishing vessels in the docks to try and prevent contraband from spreading across the city, putting thousands out of work, on the streets, and with nothing. So far things have been quite…as in nothing major has happened…yet.
Social Classes of the Spirit Realm: Like any society, there are classes. Listed below are the main classes of the Spirit realm.
Hikage: The Highest Social Class, the rules over all the other classes. It is, as its name suggests made up of the Hikage.
Nobles: The second highest social class, made up of the powerful and the rich. It’s mainly just a bunch of Merchant Moguls turned politicians, but there are exceptions.
Merchant: Third highest social class, made up of merchants as the name suggests. Merchants can vary extremely in wealth.
Commoner: The Largest Social Class, made up mainly the Kuricha (Like nearly all social classes). There are few humans in this class, and this is the farthest humans can climb on the Social Tree. Wealth varies.
Ningen: The lowest social class of all, made up of entirely Humans. This is also the poorest social class, and one of the smallest in comparison with the rest. Though they are larger than the Noble Class.
The City: The Spirit Realm is a hugely diverse city, and it is composed of these main discricts
The Upper Districts: A beautiful, nice part of the city. Very little steam pipes exposed, beautiful upper class homes, patrolled regularly by Keisatsu to ensure the safety of its Noble/Upper Merchant residents. Servants are also a regular sight here. Small in ratio to the rest of the districts.
The Market District: A cramped, extremely busy district. This is where all come to shop for things varying from common goods to rare goods, this is where all Merchants make their wealth. Keisatsu patrol this area rampantly to keep crime in this section to a minimum. A Large district in ratio to other districts.
The Middle District: District filled with the common people, moderate housing, a moderate view. This is where the Commoners live, and it is a normal sized district. Keisatsu patrols are a tad bit lower than normal, as this is an orderly district and residents watch out for one another here.
The Docks: District that is the backbone of the city, supplying jobs to over 33% of the city. This is where fisherman keep their boats, and store their fish, and where the dock workers keep everything in line, etc. A normal working dock really. Keisatsu patrol this area very little, as the corporate owners have other means of keeping this area orderly and safe.
The Steam District: A very small industrial district, that supplies steam power to the entire city. Pipes run rampant through here, Keisatsu patrol this area much more than normal to keep this area safe and in line for the rest of the city. Many steam power stations are here, and much of the Ningen and lower commoners work here.
The Slum District: As the name suggests it is slums, this is where the poor and scum of the city live. Humans are forced to live here as most don’t have the financial means to live in the Middle District. Keisatsu have many patrols here as this area has an extreme amount of crime, and this is where the Scarlet Phantoms reside.
The Forbidden District: The only district that is now allowed free access, as it is where the ruling Hikage reside. There a large, complex structures here and the nicest commodities in the city, even nicer than the Upper Disctrict. This is a heavily guarded district, only those with special permission are allowed in it. Even messengers have to have special passes to access it.
Miscellaneous Information on the Spirit Realm:
The Spirit Realm is roughly five times the size of New York City!
Transportation around the city varies from boats riding around the island, to trollies and trains, to horseback or carriage. Or you can always just take the simple means of walking.
There is no official religion of the spirit realm, as there are various cultures mixed throughout the cities.
Upon arriving in the spirit realm, Humans are sent to an office where their job and residence will be decided.
There are various underground organizations spread throughout the city, such organizations are illegal and offer various different services to individuals that can contact them.
The Laws of the Spirit Realm are similar to any society, but those who break those laws must face the Keisatsu, and don’t expect to be able to take down a Keisatsu easily.
Questions about how the city operates, or about the story itself? Just ask, I will be more than happy to answer your questions!
(Now, I know you’ve already read a good amount of information but we are nearly finished!)
Rules- We all know general rules, just remember what I, or my admins say goes and we’ll all get along fine. Other than that I’m pretty easy going on the rules.
But there is just one thing I want to address though. Throughout this RP I really want people putting emphasis on Personality, so that every character sticks out from the other. So if you make your character a generally grumpy or nice individual, show us that! Make sure their personality shines through every decision they make! That is all.
Character Sheet
I expect EFFORT on Character Sheets, remember that Character Sheets are how I, and every other Role-Play creator/administrator decide on whether or not you join this role-play and typing some two sentence piece of crap isn’t setting the best example. Sorry if this sounds uptight, but my largest pet peeve is when people don’t put effort into their C.S.’s, this is something that I’m not very easy-going on.
Kuricha C.S.
Name:
Age:
Appearance: (If you’re going to be a Kuricha, you’re going to have to describe what your creature looks like, like if a Kuricha is animal-like, state what animal its like and further describe appearance, like clothing, eyes, etc. If it’s not animal like…you’re going to have to fully describe what it looks like from scratch)
Personality: (Effort into this, tell what your character’s personality is, and why it is like that)
Bio: (Effort into this as well, this is your characters backstory that has defined them as an individual!)
Social Class:
Occupation: (Job)
Misc. Information:
Anything you feel that should be in the CS feel free to put in yourself, I just set up the basics
Human C.S.
Name:
Age:
Appearance: (What your human character looks like, describe basic appearance like eye color, skin tone, height, etc. then other characteristics like clothing)
Personality: (Effort into this, tell what your character’s personality, and why it is like that)
Bio: (Effort into this as well, state in this what year your human character was from before finding themselves in the Spirit Realm, or state if they were born in the spirit Realm, then go into the backstory.)
Social Class: (Since Human, it has to be either Commoner or Ningen, nothing higher)
Occupation: (Job, something that normal people wouldn’t want. Example: Fisherman, dockworker, servant, power station worker, etc.)
Misc. Information:
Anything you feel that should be in the CS feel free to put in yourself, I just set up the basics
Othernote: Last time I opened this thread it died, so I'm going to try and start it again. Don't be surprised if it dies though. I seem to have the hardest time starting good roleplays.
Enjoy!!!
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cirrem
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:23 AM |
Human C.S.
Name: cirrem
Age:12
Appearance: short, is still a child, has sandy hair and blue eyes
Personality: likes to read, demands fairness, can be stubborn, he tries to be nice
Bio: was born in the spirit realm, is an orphan because the house where he lived was burned down with his parents inside. the house was burned down by Keisatsu because his parents were found part of the revaluation.
Social Class: ningen
Occupation: servant
Misc. Information: he was in the library when his house burned down, wants revenge on the keisatsu
Anything you feel that should be in the CS feel free to put in yourself, I just set up the basics |
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gilzar
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:29 AM |
| (Rejected: I recall posting something about effort into cs's on the rules.) |
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:54 AM |
Kuricha C.S.
Name: Zanko Kuna
Age: 43
Appearance: He is similar to a fox, except his tail is larger and puffier. His fur is grey, instead of red. His ears are larger, like an elf' ears. He is slightly fatter than a normal Kuricha, as he is overfed. He also has orange-red eyes.
Personality: (Effort into this, tell what your character’s personality is, and why it is like that) Zanko is truly a businessman. He is a good liar, he focuses on business only, he is cruel to merchants and lower classes. He does not care about anyone except himself, and tends to be arrogant and cocky.
Bio: (Effort into this as well, this is your characters backstory that has defined them as an individual!) Zanko used to be the poorest of merchants. He was laughed at on a daily basis, which causes him to be the cruel man he is today. It was always like that until the one day he started dealing with the Phantoms, who gave him stolen merchandise and in exchange wanted power once he reached a high class. He used this as a chance to finally become known and after becoming a noble, he betrayed the phantoms and never granted them their wish. He is now the Head of Merchants, as well as the Phantoms' target. Social Class: Noble.
Occupation: (Job) Head of the merchants, he makes sure everything is alright in the merchant world. His word is law for them. |
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:58 AM |
Name: Overlord Ten'kra'ne
Age: Unknown, presumed to be around 568. (since immortal thingy that can only die in combat)
Appearance: Ten'kra has a lean, athletic human build and structure... except for the fact that he has an extra arm sprouting from his back, which he usually situates in a General Grevious position. His skin is completely white, and his eyes are icy blue. He has no hair ( at all ), although on his face, he has a strange, glowing blue symbol. It looks like a magnet with a handle on it, with the handle stretching from his forehead to the beginning of his nose and the magnet starting at the top of the nose and ending at the bottom of his face. However, they are actually not magnets. Sorry. Now, onto his clothing! He wears white and icy blue cloak and hood, with a white cape. His shoes are simple white winter boots. Kk.
Personality: (Effort into this, tell what your character’s personality is, and why it is like that) Ten'kra'ne is intimidating and cold, as well as cunning. He will win any argument, ever, with anybody, ever, because he is just that intimidating. He is also very respected because of his high social level... and the fact that people Ten'kra'ne don't like usually end up dead or missing.
Bio: (Effort into this as well, this is your characters backstory that has defined them as an individual!) Er... well... Ten'kra was in a reasonably poor family as a child... er... and his father was arrested and eventually killed for thievery.... and... er... his mother was sent to a mental asylum and died... so he was alone... and he developed toughness and started to rise in fame... and stuff... so now, here he is... all, er... tough 'n' stuff.... crap this, my bios always suck.
Social Class: Nobles
Occupation: All-powerful politician intimidating senator... thing.
Misc. Information: Uhh, yeah... uh.... he doesn't have servants. I dunno.
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gilzar
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| 01 Jul 2014 10:56 AM |
(Both have very interesting personalities. Loved them. Accepted, both of you!)
(Side note: This rp won't kick off for a while because I have to go on vacation for my 4th of july week) |
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| 01 Jul 2014 11:08 AM |
((That's okay with me. I'll just post I'm introduction.))
Zanko stands in front of the window, looking at the storm brewing in the horizon. He looks as the sun kisses the ground as it sets, as the clouds become darker in color, a sign that the storm is a big one. His tail moves from side to side out of habit as he observes the scenery. He turns around, a look of anger on his face. "Those revolutionaries are putting me out of business. The skunks in the docks are all leaving, and now the fish and such rate have lowered. If this is how they plan to take me out, they're not gonna get me." He lights a cigar and smokes. "Oi Kyo!" He shouts, a dog-like creature comes running. "Y-Yes sir?" It says before adjusting its glasses. "Any news?" He puffs, smoke coming out of his nostrils. "N-N-No, sir." Zanko's grip on the cigar tightens. "Fine. You're dismissed, Kyo." The dog nodded and walked away, seemingly in a hurry. He drops the cigar and steps on it before walking away to his office. |
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gilzar
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| 07 Jul 2014 10:39 PM |
(Alright, I am back. Why not start with a few CS's?)
Human C.S.
Name: May Durham
Age: 24
Appearance: May has a very young appearance. She has white fair skin, and stands at roughly 5'7, and has a light build, with thin hips. She has very attractive facial characteristics (Had to state.) with light brown eyes, and medium length dark brown hair, she usually ties it up into a pony tail. She has very little scars, and no tattoos.
For her apparel she wears a variety of clothing, but usually she wears a sleeveless red button up top, with a black skirt that goes just above the knees. Then May wears a variety of bracelets, usually her favorite is a green rubber bracelet that has 'hope' engraved into the side.
Personality: May is a rather warm-hearted individual. She shows her emotions often, though she tries hard to hide them most of the time. Overall though, she is a rather positive individual and can be quite the optomist at times, she is like this more than likely because she was raised like this, and it rubbed off on her by her mother's hard work. Though, May also has an up-beat rather tom-boyish side, often not hesitating to get into fights.
Bio: May was not one of the unfortunate few that were sent to the spirit realm, she was born there under two commoner parents, both worked their tails off as servants. Growing up May often despised how her parents would go into servitude, instead of working other jobs. But never the less, she learned the ways of a servant, which was hard work and respect. Her parents taught her always to show her emotions, and that if she followed them she would be on the right rode, and she would truly be free.
May got into many fights growing up though, living in the slums originally she was picked on by various groups of boys and kuricha, all because her parents were servants. Now one may think that she would have taken brutal beatings. She did...to a certain point. What most don't know about May is that she is trained in multiple fighting styles, and it has been that way since she was a little girl, so it was often the bullies who received the beatings...instead of the normal route.
When she grew to the ripe age of 18 or so, she moved away from her parents, who were sick with disease and died from it years later. She of course received inheritance, and received their home inside of the Commoner districts. Now she resides as a chef at the back of a small food store.
Social Class: Commoner
Occupation: Chef (Not a five star chef, works in grimy conditions.)
Misc. Information: Nothin'
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gilzar
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| 08 Jul 2014 12:07 PM |
Kuricha C.S.
Name: Grobo
Age: 20
Appearance: Grobo is a very large brown bear. He has puffy, rough fur and when he stands on two feet he is over 6 feet tall. He ways as much as a normal brown bear would. The only thing that sets him apart from other brown bears is a white spot around his left eye, and the fact that he can speak fluent english. For clothing, all he wears is just a Green colored vest.
Personality: Grobo is what we would call a crab. He is always grumpy, never seems to see the bright side of things, and hates nearly everything. We could state everything he hates but...that would take a while. Seriously, you could give Grobo gold and he would complain about how heavy it is. He is like this probably because it's just in his nature. Most bears are grouchy, or jolly. There is no in-between. Grobo just happens to be the grumpy one.
Bio: Grobo grew up in the slums, pulling carts around everywhere. Not a desirable job, but due to his size what else could he do? He grew up in a home of 12, being the youngest. He had all brothers. He was always the butt of the joke, always being pushed around. This made him grow rebellious and into a very unlikeable individual. He never obeyed the rules, and so he would always get beatings from the authorities.
Eventually he left home, as everyone does and gained work as a fisherman/steam worker, working unforgiving hours. It kept him busy, and away from the beatings, and that's the way he liked it. However...due to the docks being shut down, he now has found himself with a lot of free time...and that's what he hated.
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shysun
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| 08 Jul 2014 12:43 PM |
TL;DR
*Kills everyone*
There, end of roleplay. |
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| 08 Jul 2014 01:21 PM |
| ( could humans also be set in the future? I wanna have a steampunk character) |
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gilzar
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| 08 Jul 2014 02:17 PM |
(I see no problem with it so long as effort goes into the cs.)
Grobo
Grobo walked on all four's through the streets of the market district. He sighed. He hated merchants, yet he needed food. He would send the occasional growl at a passerby that he didn't like the smell of.
After a while, he picked up the things that he needed he continued to stroll through the streets, eventually sitting down in a small opening to go through his things and organize them slowly...he liked taking things the nice and slow way.
-The Phantom-
A hooded figure, wearing a smiling white drama mask stood on top of a building, overlooking the market district. The figure wore a lot of black and scarlet, with a black jacket over top with a trim of scarlet, with pure scarlet pants, and black boots. On the Phantom's back was a sword, and he carried a few bombs (You know, the classic bombs with the fuse?)
He eyed the streets for a few seconds, finding a route. Keisatsu were patrolling this area rampantly, some were armed with rifles. The Phantom took off, jumping and free-running from roof to roof. He wasn't sighted at first, until he crossed the first street, jumping across a few stalls. There were a few screams, followed up by a street bell being rang. Within not even a minute the Phantom was out of sight.
He stopped at his first target: The large flag of the spirit realm, hung proudly above the market district. Phantom gripped both hands firmly on the rope of the flag, and he began to pull and heave down. Every pull, and every heave the flag lowered, it was quite a large flag, and the wind was pulling against the flag, making the flag extremely hard to lower.
After about a good minute of pulling with effort, the flag was on the ground. The Phantom then pulled out a paint brush, and grabbed a few hidden cans of scarlet paint, and painted the drama mask on the flag, with the phrase "Awake" on the side of it. He quickly raised it, which was much easier than lowering it. Just in time too, a patrol of five Keisatsu were already on their way up to the roof, making the halt signs. Phantom quickly outmaneuvered them, jumping on top of a stall, and using the canopy to break his fall. "Capitalist Pigs. Squashing the smaller stores with their empires to make more money." Phantom says, before he took off, free running through the streets. He began chucking smoke bombs into stalls of major business moguls, and when the beings inside of them ran out of the stall, he chucked a live bomb into it, blowing them sky high. He then fled to the rooftops once again, fleeing the Keisatsu, who were on bear back this time. |
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| 08 Jul 2014 05:38 PM |
Zanko Kuna
Zanko heard of the news. He cursed under his breath as he swiped screens which displayed security cameras' footage. He seemed calm as he walked towards the window, but then punched it. "CRAP!" He shouted as his paws started bleeding. The fox like creature looked behind him. "Kyo! Get me some damned bandages!" After cleaning the wound and surrounding it with bandages he tightened his tie, adjusted his suit and walked into an elevator. Calmly, with bodyguards walking near him on rooftops, he walked through the town. He reached the place where the recent attack had happened and found the head of this branch of the markets. He seemed calm, his Red-orange eyes piercing into his, his puffy tail swinging from side to side with a kind of rhythm. "Kun, what the **** did we say about these kind of occasions, huh?" The head laughed. "Hah.. We said run like hell and use our friends as human shields, right?" He said. The merchants partly gasped, though some laughed. Zonko narrowed his eyes and punched Kun with his injured fist. He advanced towards him and caught him by the dirty shirt. "Listen here you little skunk. I will get you killed in two seconds. Just do your god damned job and be ready for those wanna-be ghosts!" He spat in the head of branch's face, threw him onto the ground then wiped his hand on another merchant's shirt. Zanko ordered for the flag to be brought down. He grabbed it and put it on fire, before throwing it at Kun. He screamed as the fire started catching onto him, while the Merchant Leader walked away. |
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| 08 Jul 2014 10:15 PM |
Human C.S.
Name: Auren Corve
Age: 25
Appearance: (What your human character looks like, describe basic appearance like eye color, skin tone, height, etc. then other characteristics like clothing) {Basic} Hmmm..Auren has one gold eye, on his left, and then a cybernetic bronze eye on his right- he WAS designed to be the best, after all. Anyways, he has black hair that's covered up by a red hood, and his face is covered by a mask, but I'm prattling on! He's tan skinned- not that anyone sees his skin. He is of a medium muscled build, and that's it for the basics! {Clothing} Auren has a red hood with a bronze mask that covers his face and is shaped like a skull. It also has a gold bolt in the middle of each of the cheek spots- it doesn't bore into his skin, too. Anyways, he has a bronze chest plate with gold bolts and bands that hold it in place, and he has more gold straps holding some long sleeves- that comes from a red long sleeves shirt under his chest plate- in place. There's also a pair of gloves and special bracers that hold it in place as we'll. The leather bracers have a long knife- that can spring forward to be even longer- on one side, and on the other, a pair of mini guns- two barrels strapped together with an ammo box behind them- in the other side. He has red pants (It has to be to be stylish!) that are also held in place by gold bands and a pair of boots! The boots have yellow colored strings, too! Oh, and he also has a pair of plates protecting his knee- bronze of course, with gold bolts as well! His hood is part of a cloak, so that means a cape as well! And it's red!! Oh, and he has a bronze thingamabob that helps him sight, it's under his mask and is like headphones or something. There are bronze cogs at the joints, which rotate to allow the eyepiece to move.
Personality: (Effort into this, tell what your character’s personality, and why it is like that) On first sight, Auren is a grim and fierce ( as well as shiny!) assassin, because that's how he must act. But normally he's kind when dealing with friends and comrades, as well as a jokester, (with some irony in his jokes and comments) because that's who he is! He's a leader because he has leading experience. He's persistent- due to having to trail his targets a few times, but is impatient- because he's the best, and targets go down real fast under his sniper. A bit of a rebel, due to living with tyranny nearly all his life.
Bio: (Effort into this as well, state in this what year your human character was from before finding themselves in the Spirit Realm, or state if they were born in the spirit Realm, then go into the backstory.) Auren was born in a military research facility, implanted with the best adrenaline, speed, accuracy, etc. implants, even going as far as replacing his eye with a cybernetic one that can zoom in, detect where to aim, upload viruses to computers, etc. they also placed a headgear that zooms even more, so combined with his modified, enhanced, and custom sniper, eye, and headgear, he's the best at sniping. He sucks at other weapons, though... Except for his braces. Anyways, he was equipped with a musket-sniper (eehhhh...) So basically, he has the best enhancements and gear for assassination. Got a crew for a ship, and did recon missions for his military. After a while, he and his crew got tired of the tyranny, and rebelled, as well as being assassins. After a long fight, they organized the other rebels and won, but conveniently, he disappeared to the Spirit Realm. After he realized the tyranny there, he became an assassin, and joined the Scarlet Phantoms.
Social Class: (Since Human, it has to be either Commoner or Ningen, nothing higher) Ningen
Occupation: (Job, something that normal people wouldn’t want. Example: Fisherman, dockworker, servant, power station worker, etc.) He WAS a steam worker. But then he became an assassin.
Misc. Information He has a sniper- musket.
(I DO hope this isn't OP. I tried leveling it out with the weapons part. And I also hope it's accepted. I died twice in minecraft working this...) |
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| 08 Jul 2014 10:21 PM |
| (Wow. This is a pretty interesting character. I just have a few request, first one is that you kind of tone down his power a tad bit...mainly the miniguns. And also he just seems a little high tech for being stuck in a realm that runs on steam. But other then that it was great!) |
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| 09 Jul 2014 06:51 AM |
| (Lel, with the mini guns, I meant a small gun, not a rapid-fire one. |
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| 09 Jul 2014 06:55 AM |
But I'll change it.)
Human C.S.
Name: Auren Corve
Age: 25
Appearance: (What your human character looks like, describe basic appearance like eye color, skin tone, height, etc. then other characteristics like clothing) {Basic} Hmmm..Auren has one gold eye, on his left, and then a cybernetic bronze eye on his right- he WAS designed to be the best, after all. Anyways, he has black hair that's covered up by a red hood, and his face is covered by a mask, but I'm prattling on! He's tan skinned- not that anyone sees his skin. He is of a medium muscled build, and that's it for the basics! {Clothing} Auren has a red hood with a bronze mask that covers his face and is shaped like a skull. It also has a gold bolt in the middle of each of the cheek spots- it doesn't bore into his skin, too. Anyways, he has a bronze chest plate with gold bolts and bands that hold it in place, and he has more gold straps holding some long sleeves- that comes from a red long sleeves shirt under his chest plate- in place. There's also a pair of gloves and special bracers that hold it in place as we'll. The leather bracers have a long knife- that can spring forward to be even longer- on one side, and on the other, a pair of tiny guns- two barrels strapped together with an ammo box behind them- in the other side. He has red pants (It has to be to be stylish!) that are also held in place by gold bands and a pair of boots! The boots have yellow colored strings, too! Oh, and he also has a pair of plates protecting his knee- bronze of course, with gold bolts as well! His hood is part of a cloak, so that means a cape as well! And it's red!!
Personality: (Effort into this, tell what your character’s personality, and why it is like that) On first sight, Auren is a grim and fierce ( as well as shiny!) assassin, because that's how he must act. But normally he's kind when dealing with friends and comrades, as well as a jokester, (with some irony in his jokes and comments) because that's who he is! He's a leader because he has leading experience. He's persistent- due to having to trail his targets a few times, but is impatient- because he's the best, and targets go down real fast under his sniper. A bit of a rebel, due to living with tyranny nearly all his life.
Bio: (Effort into this as well, state in this what year your human character was from before finding themselves in the Spirit Realm, or state if they were born in the spirit Realm, then go into the backstory.) Auren was born in a military research facility, implanted with the best adrenaline, speed, accuracy, etc. implants, even going as far as replacing his eye with a cybernetic one that can zoom in, detect where to aim, upload viruses to computers, etc. they also placed a headgear that zooms even more, so combined with his modified, enhanced, and custom sniper, eye, and headgear, he's the best at sniping. He sucks at other weapons, though... Except for his braces. Anyways, he was equipped with a musket-sniper (eehhhh...) So basically, he has the best enhancements and gear for assassination. Got a crew for a ship, and did recon missions for his military. After a while, he and his crew got tired of the tyranny, and rebelled, as well as being assassins. After a long fight, they organized the other rebels and won, but conveniently, he disappeared to the Spirit Realm. After he realized the tyranny there, he became an assassin, and joined the Scarlet Phantoms.
Social Class: (Since Human, it has to be either Commoner or Ningen, nothing higher) Ningen
Occupation: (Job, something that normal people wouldn’t want. Example: Fisherman, dockworker, servant, power station worker, etc.) He WAS a steam worker. But then he became an assassin.
Misc. Information He has a sniper- musket.
(Removed the headgear and fixed the mini gun problem. Well, corrected a word use mistake.)
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| 09 Jul 2014 08:34 AM |
(Thank you, accepted!)
-The Phantom-
As the Phantom fled on roof tops, it suddenly keened in on screaming that was about a few blocks away. He shifted his head over quickly, all to notice that the flag was being burned on some poor soul. Slowly, the phantom's left arm was raised above his shoulder, and he reached back gripping his katana.
He then took off, going faster than ever across the roof tops, leaping across an entire street at one time, before making his way over to where the flag was being burnt at.
"Capitalist pig." Phantom said, as his fingers gripped his sword tightly, as he stared down the fox-like kuricha. |
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| 09 Jul 2014 08:48 AM |
-Zanko-
Zanko stopped in his footsteps as he heard the two words. "How dare you-" He turned around only to see the Phantom. He let out a small, helpless gasp as his eyes widened. Taking two steps back, four guards jumped down from the rooftops. Zanko quickly covered his look of fear with anger. "How dare you threaten my merchant system, useless piece of crap! Stray!" He shouted, clenching his injured fist. "Who do you think you are?"
Kun laughed a horrid laugh before dying. He said only one word before being completely burned. "Awake." |
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| 09 Jul 2014 09:00 AM |
-The Phantom-
The Phantom spoke, with a light voice that was obviously being muffled.
"I am what you fear as a rich noble. I am the catalyst in the reaction. I am what is going to wake these souls from their state of sleep."
The phantom then reached its right hand into one of its side pouches and pulled out another bomb, and then lit the fuse.
"Catch." He said, and he tossed it to Zanko, before leaping into the middle of the street.
Grobo
"ERGH! What the hell is all this ruckus about! First I'm walking down the market district and then bombs start going off! I hate bombs!" he yells, and then he quickly goes quite as a squad of five Keisatsu ran pass him, armed with rifles and fighting sticks |
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| 09 Jul 2014 09:05 AM |
((I really like my character so far. Usually I get bored with them within two seconds.))
Zanko widened his eyes. He jumped out of the way barely and crawled away. "You ass! Get him!" The guards started shooting at The Phantom's spot. |
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| 09 Jul 2014 09:29 AM |
(Good! I am liking my character as well.)
(Sorry about long post...this entire rp won't be made up of them)
-The Phantom-
Never having really been shot at before...in all seriousness, the phantom scurried at the sound of gunshots, sliding into cover. In some what of a panicked state, he somewhat forgot where he was for a second.
However, the Keisatsu did not have that problem. They remembered exactly where he was, and within seconds they had him surrounded. There were five of them, four had fighting sticks, while one had a rifle, from the looks of it the rifle was loaded.
One of the keisatsu made the hand sign to put down the sword, and raise your hands into the air.
Phantom shaked his head, and reached into his pocket quickly throwing down a smoke bomb, then slashing his sword at the Keisatsu with the rifle, and then he heard the sound of something splatter, followed up by black ink dripping onto his blade. Did he just kill a Keisatsu? Immediately a fighting stick was hruled through the smoke, and made contact with the phantoms mask. He stumbed back a bit from the blow, and then the smoke cleared. One Kaisatsu, with the rifle was on the ground, ink splattering out of its wound. The rest of the four Keisatsu were in fighting stance, fighting sticks out. They all then exchanged blows for about a minute, Phantom slashing its blade at them, Keisatsu usually dodging it, and then countering it. Truth be told, even for the Phantoms training these things were extremely hard to hit. Then the Phantom did one cheap shot, by kicking in the gut of one while faking a slash, and it was effective. The Keisatsu was down on its knees, and then the Phantom went in for the kill. But then from behind two fighting sticks bashed against his back, and he fell to the ground. They then pinned their legs on top of him.
Phantom struggled for a second, before it saw the rifle of the Keisatsu it had killed. It reached over, and grabbed it then aimed it behind his back and fired. One of the legs that was pinning him to the ground went limp. Phantom then grabbed his blade and slashed at the other leg pinning him down, and the keisatsu went down in pain. Phantom then rolled over, and stabbed the Keisatsu through the chest. Black ink splattered over the drama mask he was wearing, and then he quickly got up. |
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