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| 06 Jul 2014 01:14 PM |
(This is a reboot of a RP I creared a couple months ago) (I've revised it slightly) (Check out the original thread here if you want) ( http://www.roblox.com/forum/showpost.aspx?postID=133721996)
[Story]
Long ago the world was a prosperous places. Humanity had realized to the true extent of technology and had begun utilizing it to its fullest potential. However....
It was predicted that soon man would use up all the earth’s resources. So testing began on a project to restore to earth to its original natural state. They deemed the project "The Yggdrasil Project". After much testing and many deaths the project was finished. However, by the time it was finished the world had already begun to decay. Within theit last few moments the scientist planted the Yggdrasil, and with their dying breath, watched as it grew and absorbed the waste.
[Setting]
Now, 1000 years later. The Yggdrasil tree has grown and a great labyrinth has grown around it. The labyrinth is full of resources and because of that; a giant town by the name of Etria has sprung up next to it. Young adventures come from all around the world seeking fame and fortune in the labyrinth. Some, however, think there's something more at the very end. They say the secret of Yggdrasil itself may lie at the end.
[Locations]
The Rooster Inn: Adventurers come here to sleep and heal.
Shilleka's Goods: The main weapon and amour shop in town. It sells all the equipment any adventurer needs.
Edrian Mansion: A great mansion said be owned by the greatest adventurers in Etria.
Golden Deer Pub: A place were adventurers come to rest there fatigue and take on requests from the request board.
Explorers Guild: The place were new adventures come to establish parties and smaller guilds.
Radha Hall: The hall of the chieftains of Etria, the Radha. If an adventurer is skilled enough, they might even get a chance to meet the Rahda chieftain, Visil.
[The Labyrinth]
Floors 1-5: The stomping grounds of new explorers. The final floor of Emerald Grove is said to be guarded by a ferocious alpha wolf
Floors 6-10: A large area filled with huge trees. The final floor of Primitive Jungle is said to be guarded by a huge beast with giant horns and fists big enough to take out an entire party
Floors 11-15: A beautiful area full of gems of all kinds. The final floor of Azure Rainforest is said to be guarded by a giant ant queen.
Floors 16-20: A sandy area with dead trees and many different kinds of rocks. The final floor of Sandy Barrens is said to be guarded by a legendary golden bird
Floors 21-25: An area said to hold remnants of a much older and more advanced civilization. Not even to the top guild in Etria have made it to the final floor, but many speculate that the secret of Yggdrasil is hidden at the end.
Floors 26-30: A place of legand amoug the explorers of Etria. It can only be reached through a secret passage on floor 25. Claret Hollows is a desgusting place that resembles the insides of a human body. It is unknown what is truly at the end of Claret Hollows
[Classes]
(Landsknect)
Description: Those skilled with melee combat with either swords or axes. They are well balanced and can use a Varity of different armors.
Characteristics: Often very friendly but also very dim-witted at times. They have no real distinct facial features
(Survivalist)
Description: Specialists in forest survival. They strike quickly with their bows and follow up with a quick stab from there daggers.
Characteristics: Very quiet and secluded. They become friends with their party but none outside of it. No matter who they are, survivalists always have a bandana over there face and a feather in there hat.
(Protector)
Description: Holy knights sworn to protect their allies. There sword and shield are invaluable tools in any situation.
Characteristics: Protectors make up for their slow speed with impenetrable defense. Quiet , friendly and always willing to help. They have no real distinct facial features.
(Dark Hunter)
Description: They are very useful for weakening foes. They use there long whips to bind enemies limbs, rendering it much less of a threat.
Characteristics: They tend to be very sadistic. They enjoy watching as their prey squirms and squeals in pain. Female Dark Hunters also tend to be very flirtatious.
(Medic)
Description: Healers who treat the parties’ wounds. There combat skills are limited but they are highly useful regardless.
Characteristics: Friendly and outgoing. They tend to have lightly colored hair, a sign of their pure heart.
(Alchemist)
Description: Those who study the laws of the universe to gain control over the universe They wield the elements against their enemies.
Characteristics: Loudmouthed yet reliable. They often wear dark red or orange colored coats and always have a gauntlet on their arm to help harness there elemental powers.
(Troubadour)
Description: They strive to support allies with songs and dance. There true strength is the ability to support their allies.
Characteristics: Light hearted and friendly. The often wear very light and colorful clothing and keep their hair long.
(Ronin)
Description: Foreign masters of the art of bushido. They see death as a part of life, and so neglect defense in favor of offense.
Characteristics: Quiet and focused. Female Ronin often just wear a bandage over there chest and a long medium sized skirt for easy movement. Male Ronin wear no shirt at all, just pants.
(Hexer)
Description: Their forbidden arts use curses to control the mind. As so few are fit to master the practice they are quite rare.
Characteristics: Quiet and dark. The forbidden magic has changed their skin and hair color to either grey or white. They always wear a red or grey colored cloak and hood.
[Rules]
*No godmodding
*No perfect characters. If they have an asset they need a flaw.
*No getting to the final floor within the first few pages. If the greatest adventurers in Etria cant get that far I highly doubt anyone else could
*No spamming flaming or trolling
*Be respectful to others!
* Put "Etria" in other if you read through the whole thing
(Character Sheet] Name: Age: Class: Personality: Appearance: Asset: Flaw: Bio: Inventory[Optional]: Other[Optional]:
[Admins]
Myself EagerCharch Bowtiesarecool001
Admins may take control of certin special characters that I will specify They may accept or decline character sheets Ban or punish people who break the rules And add more rules as they see fit (so long as I give clearence)
[Side notes]
This is a reboot of a RP I did a couple months ago I originally planned for a sequal, but because of a lot of things, it will be awhile before I can do any major work on it This is also based on a video game, or, game series The Etrian Odyssey series, and specificly, Etrian Odyssey Untold: The millennium girl The ending events will be based on the actual one from the game So, if you've beaten the game yourself, don't spoil it!
That's about it, enjoy the RP! |
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| 06 Jul 2014 01:23 PM |
Damn, forgot to change the Ronin description a bit
"Male Ronin tend to go shirtless, but some don't" |
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| 06 Jul 2014 01:30 PM |
[Character Sheet] Name: William Konks Age: 43 Class: Protector Personality: Friendly, and very dedicated to his religion. Appearance: Brown hair and deep brown eyes. 6'2", heavy build. Asset: Very good with his sword and shield. Flaw: Slow. Bio: TBD. Inventory[Optional]: Longsword, Shield with a Red Cross, Steel Armor Other[Optional]: |
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| 06 Jul 2014 01:36 PM |
| I really dislike the idea of giving all the classes "personalties" sort of restricts Rpers. |
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| 06 Jul 2014 01:49 PM |
You don't haft to follow the personalitys You can have a moody troubadour or a cheery hexer if you so wish |
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lien587
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| 06 Jul 2014 02:23 PM |
Joining.
This is not a siggy; it is a tribute. |
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| 06 Jul 2014 02:31 PM |
Here are my first two characters
(Character Sheet] Name: Talia Rorosaki Age: 21 Class: Ronin Personality: Quiet, short tempered, caring when she wants to be Appearance: She has long black hair fixed into a pony tail. Purple eyes. She wears a fairly basic red jacket with a couple pockets and a bandage over her chest. She also wears a short red skirt Asset: She is an incredible swords(wo)man Flaw: she is a bit short tempered Bio: she grew up in a far off land. She was born to a father who had always wanted a boy, whitch automatically made her a disappointment in his eyes. Because of this, she strove to be the best at everything she could, even to the point of training herself in the art of the sword. Eventually she decided to move to Etria to gain fame and make her father proud Inventory[Optional]: Her katana, a few medicas Other[Optional]: she is a member of the second best guild in Etria, and is also considered the third best Ronin in Etria
(Character Sheet] Name: Tac Rawlder Age: 20 Class: Alchemist Personality: Loudmouthed, freindly, a bit sarcastic Appearance: Short messy blond hair. Green eyes. A fancy red woolen shirt with a few silver laced pockets. He wears a silver gauntlet to help channel his alchemy Asset: Very good with his alchemy Flaw: can be a bit annoying at times Bio: He lived a fairly perfect little life. He grew up in a very well-to-do house with loving parents. He got nearly everything he really wanted. After awhile, he decided he wanted to strike it out on his own. So, he joined up with Talia, to explore the labyrinth Inventory[Optional]: An old staff, some medicas Other[Optional]: He is part of the second best guild in Etria alongside Talia. He often calls Talia "Saki" much to her annoyance |
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cirrem
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:10 PM |
(Character Sheet] Name: cirrem Age: um... i'll just say 24 Class: alchemist Personality: loud and speaks a lot, says whatever is on his mind, thinks outside the box, tries to be friendly Appearance: wears a dark red coat, short sandy hair, brilliant blue eyes, wears gaunlets Asset: can make and control fire and water, and is able to freeze and unfreeze the water Flaw: not very strong physically, needs to be protected Bio: just having mastered moving fire, he decided to go on an adventure. he saw this place and decided it would be a good start Inventory[Optional]: Other[Optional]: etria |
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lien587
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:12 PM |
Age: James Siberous Class: 39 Personality: Alchemist Appearance: He's quite eccentric, and in conversation is hard to follow; he will be talking about how to disarm a bomb and halfway through talk about this sandwich he ate on that Thursday a couple weeks back at that tavern, the one with the portraits of all the celebrities? You know, with Mellonius Gibson, Baron Obama, and maybe a couple others... You know, I once met Baron Obama, he was eating a sandwich! And the sandwich had lettuce, and tomato, and egg, and mayo, and roast beef, and turkey, and some more stuff, and then I decided to try that sandwich myself. Wait, what were we talking about? Asset:img.4pl ebs.org/bo ards/tg/i mage/1382/3 9/138239985 2685.png Flaw:He has an extremely detailed knowledge of everywhere he's been, everything he's done, and an extremely wide range of scientific topics. Bio: See: Personality. Inventory[Optional]: Born in a rather rich farm family, he ran away from home at the age of twenty-two, much to the happiness of his parents. he's been working as apprentices to glass-makers, mirror-makers, alchemists, astronomers, and carpenters, so now he has a very detailed knowledge of many subjects. He set up a shop recently, where he sells alchemical remedies. Other[Optional]:
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lien587
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:36 PM |
You're kidding, you're accepting him?
This is not a siggy; it is a tribute. |
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:41 PM |
He's weird but a bit funny :P Though, the modern references were a bit weird |
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:44 PM |
| Actually, it was more so that I just accepted him for the hell of it |
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cirrem
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:50 PM |
| Heh, don't go crazy over there |
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| 06 Jul 2014 03:58 PM |
| My character is a Roman Catholic, alright? Order of thr Knights Templar. |
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lien587
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| 06 Jul 2014 04:04 PM |
No! No no no! I mean the other guy! His CS was CRAAAAAAAAAAP!
He couldn't make an actual name, couldn't decide on a real age, the personality is skimpy, and just restates what was said earlier about Alchemists, The appearance is just dumb and almost nonsense, telling us practically nothing about what they look like. The asset is OP, and the flaw is not enough to make up for it. The bio tells us actually nothing about them, and overall, this was terrible.
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| 06 Jul 2014 04:09 PM |
Meh I appreciate detail in CSs but I don't require it So long as its bog completely rediculase As for his asset Its actually pretty weak for alchemists As most have control over many more elements |
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lien587
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| 06 Jul 2014 04:17 PM |
You didn't actually explain what alchemists were. I thought they were just... Alchemists, not wizards. You aren't very specific in the classes, and may I repeat, his CS was not detailed, bu that's not the problem! IT SUCKED!
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| 06 Jul 2014 04:23 PM |
Yes, your right, I should have been a bit more specific And actually, reading it through a second time I will actually haft to decline it Make it more descriptive and i'll accept it |
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