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Re: How is my waterfall place?

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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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08 Jul 2014 08:22 AM
So, it has been some time since I last updated my place and currently before I do any updates or changes, I would like to know how is it so far and what should I improve or add? Also maybe even a rating would be nice too. The place is called Shalmon Falls, just a nice place to relax and look around. Please post a rating and also maybe even a suggestion! Thank you.
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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08 Jul 2014 10:35 AM
Anyone?
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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08 Jul 2014 10:40 AM
Don't forget to give a rating too!
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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09 Jul 2014 12:29 AM
Anyone, suggestions?
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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09 Jul 2014 05:15 AM
Please anyone?
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09 Jul 2014 08:24 AM
Any ratings?
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MrMeese is not online. MrMeese
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09 Jul 2014 09:22 AM
3/10.

Use more Cframing.
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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09 Jul 2014 09:26 AM
Thank you for the rating. So just wondering, which part of the map needs more CFraming.
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10 Jul 2014 06:27 AM
Anyone here?
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fatdoggy100 is not online. fatdoggy100
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10 Jul 2014 07:36 AM
ok, so
Maybe instead of having the same tree model, use the tree generator plug-in for a custom tree each time.
Add more detail to the side of the mountain thing, like:
Make ledges and stuff hanging off the the side in random places
Make the walkway up not so obvious, maybe just redo the whole thing and make the trail longer but make it a nature walk type of thing, with a path that's sectioned in by a wooden fence, and outside of the fence there'd be trees and bushes and stuff.

hi
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WiredVengeance is not online. WiredVengeance
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10 Jul 2014 07:42 AM
It's a little too, Ah simple. But simple is okay. Just keep trying and improving!

5/10
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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10 Jul 2014 07:54 AM
Alright, thanks everyone!
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LeslyStillwell is not online. LeslyStillwell
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10 Jul 2014 08:26 PM
The waterfall is pretty simple, but the landscape is pretty good

6 or 7/10
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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11 Jul 2014 08:11 AM
Oh ok, thanks, when I get the time to update the place, I will try to make it a little more detailed.
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11 Jul 2014 11:12 AM
Any more?
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12 Jul 2014 12:12 AM
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12 Jul 2014 03:37 AM
When I get the time to update, I will try to improve the waterfall and also the trees. Any other suggestions and ratings?
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12 Jul 2014 06:25 AM
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13 Jul 2014 01:41 AM
Please, anyone else?
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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13 Jul 2014 05:39 AM
Any more ratings?
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TakeYourLemons is not online. TakeYourLemons
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13 Jul 2014 09:34 AM
it's like all my places...a work in progress. The general area doesn't deserve the amount of space you're giving it, and the hike up the mountain didn't net me anything different than what was at the bottom, although I like the stone walkway.

Try and animate the birds when you get close to them--that might be a 2.0 thing.

Good idea about tree generator--didn't know a script existed...

Maybe you can inject some "fog" or some mist at the bottom of the waterfall...not sure how hard it would be to play a waterfall sound when you get within a certain distance of the waterfall.
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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13 Jul 2014 10:45 AM
Oh, ok, I have planned to work on bellow the waterfall too and to animate the birds might be tricky but I could try. Thanks for the suggestions. Any ratings?
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TakeYourLemons is not online. TakeYourLemons
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13 Jul 2014 11:00 AM
I think it's more important for you to get feedback as opposed to ratings. A number doesn't give you specifics.
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Paramedic4 is not online. Paramedic4
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14 Jul 2014 03:05 AM
Oh, ok. I just wanted ratings because it also gave me an impression on how good the place was to them.
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14 Jul 2014 06:21 AM
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