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Re: The Phelps Chronicles: Chapter 30

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ThePhelpsChronicles is not online. ThePhelpsChronicles
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07 Jul 2014 07:52 PM
Swifttalon had just rescued MiaHarper from prison. I was going after them. I checked the security footage, and I saw them get on a speeder and head northeast. I grabbed a speeder and went after them.

DrHollyWood was tapping into surveillance cameras in the area that Swift and Mia were believed to be heading. When we got a hit, she'd send me the location, and I'd go that way. Finally, Holly gave me some good news.

"They seemed to have stopped," she informed me.

"Where?"

"At a warehouse about half a mile from your location. I'm sending you the coordinates."

I received them and went to the location. I parked my speeder and thought about what to do. I could burst in there, but I didn't think that would be a good idea. I needed to know what they were up to. I looked up at the roof and got my answer. There was a window.

I climbed to the roof and very silently opened it. I dropped onto one of the supports that ran across the length of the warehouse. Quietly but quickly, I made my way along it until I saw them down below.

There were three of them. Swift, Mia, and another woman. I didn't recognize the woman, but she looked ready for a fight. She was wearing light armor and had two blaster pistol holstered at her sides. I started to listen.

"...find where we planted it. And even if they did, they'd never be able to disarm it," Mia was saying.

"It's too risky," the other woman said. "Once this thing goes off, none of use will get off this planet."

"We'll be long gone before it explodes," Swift explained.

They were obviously talking about some kind of explosive. But what, and where? I continued listening.

"What is the point of this again?" the woman asked.

"To distract them," said Swift. "When it goes off, the planet will go into lock down. They'll mass their fleet here, expecting a big attack. But, while their massing their forces to defend Coruscant, we'll capture several targets, including-"

"Absolute silence!" Mia hissed. "There is someone else in here with us. I can sense him....."

They all started looking around. That was my cue. I dropped down a few feet behind them and ignited my lightsabers. They all turned towards me. Swift and Mia activated their lightsabers while the other woman readied her pistols.

"What do you want, Jedi?" Mia sneered.

"Why to offer you the Republic's gracious hospitality! Really, Mia, how could you refuse a comfy bed and three meals a day?"

"I have more important things to do than listen to you babble. Swift, give him a taste of our hospitality. I have to attend to our plan."

"With pleasure," Swift said with a wicked smile. He readied his saber while Mia sprinted out of the warehouse. The other woman prepared to fire.

Swift swung his saber at my head and the woman opened fire. I blocked Swift's strike with my green saber and deflected the laser bolts with my blue. I had to take down the woman before I could focus on Swift. I swung my saber at Swift, and he blocked it easily. But then, I kicked him in the stomach and Force pushed him back. I jumped at the woman, deflecting laser bolts. I landed in front of her, cut the barrels off her pistols, kneed her in the stomach, and slammed her against the wall. She crumpled to the floor.

Swift charged at me, and I back flipped over him. He turned around and assaulted me. His strikes were fast and furious, but I managed to block them as he pushed me back. He had a clear offensive advantage, and that needed to change.

He swung downward at my head, and I positioned my sabers in an X pattern to catch the strike in the top of the X. This was my chance. I pushed upwards with my saber X, and round house kicked him. He fell flat on his back and dropped his saber. I swung downward, but he rolled out of the way. He fired Force lighting from his hands, hitting me and knocking me down. He jumped up and Force grabbed his saber. He put his saber on his belt, but took something else off. He pressed a button on it and it began beeping: a grenade.

"Well done, Jedi," he said, "but I must leave you now."

He threw the grenade at the ceiling and it detonated on impact, blasting a hole in it. He jumped up and out through the hole. I didn't have time to go after him. I had to find out where MiaHarper was going. Fortunately, there was someone lying unconscious on the warehouse floor that could tell me. She was just beginning to come around as I walked to her.

She tried to get up, but I grabbed her arms and cuffed her. I pushed her back onto the ground. I squatted next to her.

"I need information," I said. "You're going to tell me what I want to know, understood?"

She nodded.

"Good. First, what is your name?"

"Starlilynight," she responded.

"Mhm. Now, where is Mia going, and where is the device planted?"

She wouldn't respond. I asked her again, and then a third time.

"One more time. Tell me where Mia went."

No response. Drastic action.

I slammed my fist into her stomach. "TELL ME!" She didn't say anything. I hit her again. Still nothing. I hit her again, harder.

"TELL ME NOW!"

I was about to hit her again, when she broke her silence.

"Okay, okay, I'll tell you. She went to arm the bomb!"

"And where is the bomb?"

"I don't know."

I slammed my fist twice into her knee cap.

"I really don't know!" she said as tears started to form at the corners of her eyes.

I grunted and got up. I was willing to believe her on that one. I called Holly.

"Did you get her?" she asked.

"No, she got away, but I found stuff out. There's a bomb planted somewhere. We need to find it and disarm it. I'm going after Mia. Hopefully she'll lead me to the bomb. You need to secure a prisoner at my location."

"I'll send a team out right away. Phelps, be careful."

"I will be."

I left my prisoner for Holly to pick up, and went to my speeder. This was going to end today.





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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 07:57 PM
This is getting insane.




~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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DanielVox is not online. DanielVox
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07 Jul 2014 07:58 PM
One,

FOR GOD'S SAKE PUT IT IN ROLEPLAYING OR MOVIES AND BOOKS YOU LITTLE TWI-

And two,


TL;DR.

sweggity swegitty swoo comin' at you
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 07:59 PM
@Daniel

This doesn't belong in RP or Movies and Books. It is a fanfic, which is Off Topic.

Plus, it has OTer characters.

So beat it, newscrub




~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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DanielVox is not online. DanielVox
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07 Jul 2014 08:01 PM
k, k, but i still joined ROBLOX before you
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:01 PM
"k, k, but i still joined ROBLOX before you"

I'm an alt. My main joined 2/17/10



~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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DanielVox is not online. DanielVox
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07 Jul 2014 08:04 PM
oh

my (first) account joined in '11. hes called epikmegabot or epicmegaboy.
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:05 PM
Coolzerz. He permad?

Mine's just got a 1 dayer



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DanielVox is not online. DanielVox
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07 Jul 2014 08:06 PM
no, he's just offline


i don't use him anymore, i just get on sometimes
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:06 PM
Oh, mkay.



~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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07 Jul 2014 08:07 PM
domestic abuse
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I can see right through, all your empty lies
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:08 PM
YOU TRIED TO KILL ME, STAR!




~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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07 Jul 2014 08:09 PM
you raeped me
and besides
didnt you say we were married?

I can see right through, all your empty lies
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:10 PM
None of that happened in the context of this story.




~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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07 Jul 2014 08:10 PM
"None of that happened in the context of this story."
still
domestic abuuuuuse

I can see right through, all your empty lies
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SupahBoshi64 is not online. SupahBoshi64
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07 Jul 2014 08:11 PM
This is getting GOOD
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:11 PM
You still tried to kill me.

I was just defending myself.....and trying to make you talk.




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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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07 Jul 2014 08:12 PM
what if i dont wanna talk

I can see right through, all your empty lies
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transformerclay is not online. transformerclay
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07 Jul 2014 08:12 PM
wwwshrek


what the heckaroo
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mikeyman12ash is not online. mikeyman12ash
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07 Jul 2014 08:12 PM
not the real star
she would've cackled maniacally as you tried to get information out of her and then stab you with a spork
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:12 PM
@Supah

I hope so. Some major stuff is coming up. It's gonna change the tune of the story for a few chapters.

Also, I'm trying to bring in a bit of the darker side of the main character, as evidenced by his interrogation of starlily




~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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Ingratiate is not online. Ingratiate
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07 Jul 2014 08:13 PM
@Star

Exactly why I had to make you

@Mikey

Hard to do when you're cuffed. Also, I suspect she gave up that information too easily....





~MrPhelps; 1 dayer
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mikeyman12ash is not online. mikeyman12ash
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07 Jul 2014 08:14 PM
i think star should have been more Heath-Ledger-Joker-ish
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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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07 Jul 2014 08:14 PM
but i have social anxiety
-starts crying-

I can see right through, all your empty lies
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mikeyman12ash is not online. mikeyman12ash
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07 Jul 2014 08:18 PM
can i b a minor character later
like maybe an army captain or something
i'd say clone commander but idk if clone technology existed in the time period you're writing your story in
Captain Michael Ash

sounds like such a badass name to me
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