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leader122 is not online. leader122
Joined: 04 Apr 2011
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06 Jul 2014 11:42 AM
Here it goes:

I couldn't take it anymore! I could feel the sorrows of my past life closing in on me. I didn't know how it was possible for me to feel the horrid emotions of my past life, but I could. It was like a pool of dread and I'm drowning. It was overflowing and I didn't know how to swim. Death! Abuse! Suicide! Murder! All these thoughts beating in my head as I struggled to escape out of this misery. It was like nothing I have ever felt before as I started to lose control. I knew, the end was near. I knew where my dad hid his shotgun as I unwillingly started to walk to that location behind the desk inside his office. I entered already knowing my intentions for bloodshed. I knew it was wrong what I was doing but I couldn't control these feelings within as my past life wanted me to suffer the way he had to suffer. By being forced to kill his parents. I loaded the shotgun sobbing to myself as I raised it at the entrance to my dad's office, which he was going to enter in about 20 minutes as I sat there and helplessly waited. The clock struck 3:30 and I heard my dad opening the door to the house...I was really angry at what my past life was forcing me to do and I finally found the courage to poke my head from under all this misery for what seemed to be half a second as I yelled at the top of my lungs "DAD DON'T GO IN YOUR OFF-" I was cut off as I had already fired the shotgun...But it wasn't my dad on the floor. It was me, lying in a pool of blood.


I'm not very good at this sort of this but I hoped you liked it :3
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shooter06 is not online. shooter06
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06 Jul 2014 11:43 AM
noob
it suks
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lily2479 is not online. lily2479
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06 Jul 2014 11:44 AM
Too long
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leader122 is not online. leader122
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06 Jul 2014 11:45 AM
Nah you're just lazy. :3 It's not that bad if you took the time to read it
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rocketkiller126 is not online. rocketkiller126
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06 Jul 2014 11:46 AM
tl;dr
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jamcal3 is not online. jamcal3
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06 Jul 2014 11:48 AM
too confusing
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leader122 is not online. leader122
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06 Jul 2014 11:53 AM
@Jam Yeah I guess I can see that
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