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| 03 Jul 2014 04:54 PM |
I spit my lyrical flow very slow rip out your bones and take em home. I put the chrome to your dome have you bodied Like phantom when he's dissing all alone. I climb into the throne because i have a spell on the game i can never get a vacation so i disown my notebook. I spit then the whole world turned and shoot you just had to bring me out my cave homie look. Big daddy (H)es fruitier than Xerxes don't you little kids realize you can't hurt me? I burn like a furnace i keep the wheels turning with out me the rap game is nothing. Fake (G)sters on the radix wall huffing and puffing crying cause the can't get signed to RCRD These (N)s broke buy them arbys I'm starving lyrically carving my name in their veins. I tear them up like the Achilles i aim for the brain brake your ankles call it a sprain These dirty talking smack rappers are insane like pinky in the brain a shame to the rap game its lame I'm a burning flame not the red but the blue who knew i could smash ash and pikachu Speaking of you (F) bdh and the rest trying to be kh in the race i keep up my pace i don't need speedy raps their (F)ing (G) Top of the food chain apex (F) a paycheck i don't need it No more hit songs (B) stop breathing. I'm eating my opponents own this can't get any better then the Xponent Oh (S) My flow sick basic lines punchlines to the brain have you in an oven getting baked (F) the rake piles of leaves jump in it like its a lake punk rappers always been fake All these haters spitting jokes i beat the beat up give it a bl00dy nose and broken toes Good night to all you (H)s thinking you're real when your faker than a tv dinner meal. |
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| 03 Jul 2014 04:57 PM |
This is pretty good, the impact is good, story is great. The flow is nice and how it sounds is great.
This line would be my favorite:
"I'm a burning flame not the red but the blue who knew i could smash ash and pikachu "
For the whole song, I'd probably rate it a 8/10, I predict the audience will give you 7-9s/10.
Great job and keep doing what you do xD. |
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| 03 Jul 2014 05:27 PM |
| Damn gold, BARS MY NGGA, I LOVE YOUR NEW STYLE |
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:28 PM |
| Lmao Is the ignorant monkey mad cause he's not good? ^ |
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:47 PM |
| I have never been a fan of golden but DAYUMM THIS IS BEAST 10/10 |
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Aristios
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:11 PM |
| He's mad cause i'm getting better reviews than him. |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:11 PM |
| me and arist having a lol war. Wtf? |
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| 03 Jul 2014 08:49 PM |
| My head hit the keyboard, can no one be original anymore? |
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