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Re: Eazy-Breezy- H@te/love

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Philbuscus123 is not online. Philbuscus123
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03 Jul 2014 01:54 PM
Instrumental-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ToZg08eUFs

Verse 1-
Yeah x15
Last night, he was love-struck
He tried to forget but his mind was stuck
On her body, on her face
D@mn, he knew she was an ace
He couldn’t stop; he at least had to get to second b@se
But by a look around he could see he was in a race
And he knew he had to win because he can’t just replace
That girl, she @int a ten she a one hundred
He got to her first, he didn’t even think, it was so sudden
That night, was not special
That night, he found out that she is like the (F)ing devil
The next day it was so stressful
He wanted to leave her, but he didn’t want to break her heart but her heart is metal
But after several
S3xual
Nights
He told her how he felt about her and it felt so right
Yeah
He said
Chorus- x4
I Love you
But I h@te everything about you
And I know you h@te me
But you love everything about me

Verse 2-
Even thought he said that shet
He stayed with him even though he acted like a (D)
Yeah
They were together for 5 years
But he just couldn’t take every night her tears
He couldn’t deal with the yelling, and lying and crying
But he didn’t want to break her heart but don’t worry her heart is metal
After those days he became mental
He started not even being gentle
He realized what he was doing and he felt like he should d1e
He even thought it was a good Idea
But it wasn’t
But he still decided to take the same fate as his cousin
He swallowed the r@t po1son
He then heard voices
He put a b@g over his face
He then took sleeping pills so he could feel no pain
Yeah
The next day
She came
And she saw what she made
She felt like crying but like I said her heart is metal
She found a letter for her
Saying
Chorus – x4
I Love you
But I h@te everything about you
And I know you h@te me
But you love everything about me

Verse 3-
After the funeral she felt terrible
She felt like she had no soul no heart no nothing
But when she felt like she had to cry she heard something
Voices of him telling her to stop crying
Yeah he said
“Baby stop sobbing
Nothing could have stopped me from dy1ng
I wasn’t even thinking
I just thought I was a monster
And sooner or later you would be a goner
Even the lord came down to me saying it aint worth it
But I said (F) it
And I did it anyways and you just gotta accept it
Girl, just become a better person and find another man
And travel to different places like Italy or Japan
Just live life the fullest
And make sure that the only thing in your heart will be goodness
And don’t worry about me I’ll be always right next to you
No matter what happens
I’ll be your guardian angel
Yeah, always by your side
And if anyone tries to hurt I will break their sp1ne
Just remember these words
And always go towards
Your goal
And don’t let anyone stop you, not even me
I love you
just please remember everything
About me
Except the bad things”



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Philbuscus123 is not online. Philbuscus123
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03 Jul 2014 02:02 PM
leave a rate and comment please
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DaWondersOf is not online. DaWondersOf
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03 Jul 2014 03:44 PM
100/10, you rhyme with a story.
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kenzie12345555 is not online. kenzie12345555
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03 Jul 2014 07:32 PM
Decent,nice, has a good flow. 8/10
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Philbuscus123 is not online. Philbuscus123
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03 Jul 2014 07:36 PM
thanks for the nice rates
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XxGoAtMaNxX is not online. XxGoAtMaNxX
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03 Jul 2014 07:36 PM
Decent.
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XxGoAtMaNxX is not online. XxGoAtMaNxX
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03 Jul 2014 07:37 PM
5/10
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ShadowKnight45573 is not online. ShadowKnight45573
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03 Jul 2014 07:53 PM
Nice, 8/10.
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ShadowKnight45573 is not online. ShadowKnight45573
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03 Jul 2014 07:55 PM
9/10.
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Cpt5 is not online. Cpt5
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03 Jul 2014 08:50 PM
15 yeahs is not necessary
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CombatChampion123 is not online. CombatChampion123
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03 Jul 2014 08:57 PM
3/10 its so corny..
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KieraAllayn is not online. KieraAllayn
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03 Jul 2014 09:12 PM
6/10
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EvilNoobKitty123 is not online. EvilNoobKitty123
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03 Jul 2014 10:04 PM
Easy breezy
Your song is fvcking cheesy
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DarkScourgeSilence is not online. DarkScourgeSilence
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03 Jul 2014 10:23 PM
its ro rap auto 0/10
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TheAmbitiousOne is not online. TheAmbitiousOne
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05 Jul 2014 02:59 AM
It started off okay then towards the end it didn't even rhyme. Plus it's not true or based on a true story it's a dramatic situation that you created. Yes, ROBLOX is for being creative and coming up with ideas out of the blue but I can't say the same for rap. Rap needs to be true to life, if you didn't have a hard life to rap about, you could do it about something you heard or an event, perhaps even dramatize something not too big.
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Philbuscus123 is not online. Philbuscus123
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05 Jul 2014 12:17 PM
@TheAmbitiousOne
Bro, I'm a story teller, except i make it out of rhymes, my imagination helps me create stories and i put that into a song. I know this story is not based on a true story and it is not a real story, it's just a story i thought of and i thought maybe it could turn out to be a good song. My songs could be true and not true. I've been through hard life, these stories i think of is what kept me alive, and some of my songs, you just got to except.
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Cpt5 is not online. Cpt5
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05 Jul 2014 12:28 PM
Ambitious has a point, why make a rap the writer can't relate to?
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TheAmbitiousOne is not online. TheAmbitiousOne
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05 Jul 2014 08:41 PM
My point exactly.
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KieraAllayn is not online. KieraAllayn
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05 Jul 2014 10:10 PM
rap/writing can be at a story telling perspective tho
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NarutosRasengan1 is not online. NarutosRasengan1
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05 Jul 2014 10:15 PM
>why make a rap the writer can't relate to?

its not necessarily bad; you can still show sympathy/empathy for it if it happens to be true, and even if not true, you'd still be fast to say "god forbid that actually happens"


and if you'd said "pretty please naruto-san", i would have stopped 5 hours ago
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