OWENDG
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:28 PM |
You are a normal citizen of a small kingdom in medieval England, you are heading to castle to pay taxes, suddenly, Raiders come in and capture your kingdom, you are also captured, You arrive at the kingdom's castle, you immediately realize these weren't normal raiders, they were vampires. now, you have to choose to become a vampire and serve their king, or be innocent and try to escape.
:Name :Race (Vampire or Human) :Position in kingdom (Both original kingdom and vampire if you choose) :Age
:Joshua :Vampire (Originally) :Prince :1400 |
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:44 PM |
| Peasants didn't go to castles to pay taxes. They had tax collectors for a reason. |
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vamking12
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:50 PM |
| Vam disproves VAMpyric kingdoms. |
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:51 PM |
Vam disproves VAMpyric kingdoms.
Well Visual Arts Mississauga disapproves of VAMKing, but you don't see them complaining. |
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OWENDG
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:52 PM |
| Well in this case, act like the tax collector was fired... |
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| 03 Jul 2014 06:54 PM |
Well in this case, act like the tax collector was fired...
Then they'd hire a new one. They wouldn't force all the peasants to march to the castle to pay taxes. Imagine how much work would be lost? And nobles don't want filthy peasant stinking up their land. |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:20 PM |
suddenly, Raiders come in and capture your kingdom
So, some raiders just march in and capture everything in a few seconds?
Were they at war for a long time?
Were the guards all drunk?
Did they shoot arrows at all the knees?
i mean srsly
wut is their MOTIVATION to plunder |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:21 PM |
they weren't normal raiders, ninja
they were vampires
it's different |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:25 PM |
So the peasants were paying their taxes at night?
And why didn't they just stab the vampires with wooden stakes?
If there's vampires, why didn't the guards wear neck armor?
DID NOBODY THINK ANYTHING THROUGH?
PS: How to get away from a vampire kingdom? Just walk away when it's daytime. The vampires couldn't follow you. |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:26 PM |
"these weren't normal raiders, they were vampires"
i was making fun of a quote from the rp itself
ur right this rp makes no sense |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:28 PM |
the key word here, Ninja, is "suddenly"
the raid wasn't anticipated, so they couldn't make the preparations you listed |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:29 PM |
Also, the OP's character is the prince of the kingdom
But he's also a 1400 year-old vampire.
So who was vampires, the kingdom or the raiders? |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:30 PM |
the vampires were a kingdom in disguise as raiders
i guess idk |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:31 PM |
OR
they raided the human kingdom and turned it into vampryic kingdom
im just guessing here |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:32 PM |
I WILL POINT OUT EVERYTHING STUPID IN THIS RP.
Vampiric* |
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| 03 Jul 2014 07:39 PM |
its prob a troll rp most vamps are |
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