iaw35
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| 01 Jul 2014 02:05 PM |
[WARNINGS] This is meant to tell a story of how I feel I dont care about the vocabulary, or how lyrical it is These are things from my deepest thoughts, never before seen.
The Storm-Verse
I was I was hurt and burned By a person that made my love turn He used to hang with me We kicked it and listen to music from lil wayne to lil boosie (Until) One week of school i had the Flu It came from no where, no one knew Saw he was attracted to the wrong crowd..... Know it feels, as if he hates me now I know that he'll deny it I felt ike he pulled a strap, and [s] got violent Next thing you know, he was talking behind my back in a riot He found attention from his new crew and wanted to try it who knew sudden death could be so quiet I wanted it to all be a dream..... Well,... to bad, it was real as can be. WHO KNEW THEY COULD MAKE HIM SEE ME DIFFERENTLY Next thing you know they got'em speakng explicit I told him, but hell, the [n] couldnt listen A brother I'd take a shot for And still, he just had to burn me to the core Most night he changed... Was the night me and biggie had our exchange Biggie beat me.... I was fine, till he turned kh on me so deeply Yes i got him back know...... But he still isnt the same child In roblox and R-L Know he is making betrayed part 5...... If i counted how much you hurt me, I'd be at Betrayed 29!!!!!!! This Mother [f]er couldnt care if he tried..... Sometimes i wish, he got caught up in a homicide But i Guess its the people you keep close They turn on you and it hurts the most
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iaw35
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Avulsed
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| 01 Jul 2014 03:16 PM |
9/10
Sorry kid.
iDon't have haters, iHave fans in denial -SwizZz |
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| 01 Jul 2014 03:55 PM |
| this song sounds so GrAY lol |
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| 01 Jul 2014 04:12 PM |
| I now have even more cancer!! |
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| 01 Jul 2014 06:34 PM |
| Dis is horrible my dck can rhyme better |
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RandyMD
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| 01 Jul 2014 06:41 PM |
Nice story
" I was I was hurt and burned By a person that made my love turn He used to hang with me "
Love..? As in.. feelings? Did you like him? Did you have a crush ona boy? |
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| 01 Jul 2014 07:21 PM |
"this song sounds so GrAY lol" How is that an insult? |
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| 01 Jul 2014 07:27 PM |
| @Randy I hope not cause this song is about me. |
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| 01 Jul 2014 07:45 PM |
| @Randy, Iaw has said he was bi before and maybe even gae.. But aye no judging homes. Love is love man. |
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| 01 Jul 2014 07:45 PM |
Only word that comes to mind is...
"Uhhh" |
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| 01 Jul 2014 07:54 PM |
| ^ like your music is any better |
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:00 PM |
how is that even an insult
Did I say it was an insult? pls use your head |
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:08 PM |
| No hate at all when I say this, but aren't King and those others g ay for each other? |
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:12 PM |
@theflame
Don't say it around keke she will get offended and ragee |
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| 01 Jul 2014 09:14 PM |
| @lion If you say so, i'm genuinely curious tho not trying to offend anyone. |
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| 01 Jul 2014 10:52 PM |
| itt: a bunch of white boys scared of their true feelings |
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| 01 Jul 2014 11:06 PM |
| I thought that was a girl. |
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