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| 29 Jun 2014 09:46 AM |
Noob Cop
One day, a new rookie cop was patrolling the streets of ROBLOXIA, suddenly, he heard an alarm from a fire in a nearby house. He walked past and waved to the helpless family. "Why were they screaming" he thought aloud. He continued and past a bank, inside there were hostages and a robbery. He walked in, waved to the robbers, welcome, everyone to the bank, and walked out. Then, he got back into his car. He drove for a while, little did he know, he was in the wrong lane. He then swerves in and out of the lanes, barely avoiding to crash, running red lights and violating every possible rule. He then crashes, gets out, calls a mechanic, and leaves. He sees a old lady being robbed. He says "Use words, not violence" then he walks right by him. That night he goes to sleep. The next morning his boss tells him that he has to do better and that and blah blah blah. Then he walks by a bank, again being robbed. He walks in. "Good mor-" he stops his sentence, pulls out his pistol, starts shooting all the robbers. And goes Rambo mode. Then, he walks past a old lady being robbed. He kicks off the man, beats him up, and the woman thanks him. He then walks by a house on fire. He jumps in, picks up the family, and jumps out to safety. He is thanked and he leaves. He gets into his car and drives perfectly, then he gets a call of a hostage situation at the ROBLOX HQ. He picks up his shotgun, and drives perfectly but fast to the HQ. He puts on a SWAT outfit, suits up and goes to the boss. "Word is some noobs who were rioting the price floor broke in and took hostages. We're going in and out. "Got it boss"
To be continued
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| 29 Jun 2014 09:49 AM |
| Title and beginning transitioning into the end just never made sense like how does someone be so hypocritical in such a short period of time just after one simple call from a boss and then turning into a cop on a rampage against criminals... |
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| 29 Jun 2014 09:52 AM |
| Lel, it's my first, sorry, I'm going to work on. Post apocalyptic shorts. Hope those are better |
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| 29 Jun 2014 10:00 AM |
| No no I was just giving constructive criticism it was not I was saying HEY YOUR STORY WAS THE WORST STORY I EVER HEARD! BOO YOU! and I do wish you luck in that. |
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