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Re: OI: Contest!

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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
Joined: 23 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 16465
24 Jun 2014 10:19 PM
OI=OoC(ish)

Contest, because I'm extremely bored, and it's too late to think properly enough to continue my story.

What'll happen:
-I say a random category
-You write a small story or description, making the category into a disaster.
-I score it with the below GS (Grading Sheet), and other people can do that as well. But MY word is the final word.
-After I think there's enough entries, I'll say who passed and who didn't.
-Whoever doesn't pass CANNOT compete in ANY more rounds. They may write their entries, but it WON'T count in the terms of the contest. (It's really cool when you try even when you know you won't win, though ;)
-We'll do however many rounds it takes to get rid of everyone. The last person not to be eliminated wins.

~GS~
Intrigue/Creativity: -/20
On Topic: -/5
Grammar/Spelling: -/5
Comments:
Total: -/30


~Round One~
Topic: Coffee! (disgusting, I know, but that's the topic.)

Now get writing!


♫Just waitin' for something to show, o-oh♫
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k3rl343 is not online. k3rl343
Joined: 26 Jan 2011
Total Posts: 6702
24 Jun 2014 10:21 PM
Coffee is a horrible thing that makes you have poopy butt problems, horrible diahrea and also makes you stay up.
not to mention people make coffee out of poop.
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superboy5519 is not online. superboy5519
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24 Jun 2014 10:22 PM
I've got forty minutes.
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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24 Jun 2014 10:22 PM
@k3rl
Ew. That doesn't even count as an entry.


♫Just waitin' for something to show, o-oh♫
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greenjd101 is not online. greenjd101
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24 Jun 2014 10:25 PM
Coffee makes you hyper. It makes you bounce off the walls. It is also very disgusting. But it depends what u put in it. It is so disgusting a coffee bean spit it out.

HOPE U LIKE MY STORY
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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24 Jun 2014 10:27 PM
"HOPE U LIKE MY STORY"
NO, NO I DO NOT LIKE YOUR STORY, YOU IGNORANT BUFFOON.
IF YOU DO NOT WISH TO TAKE THIS CONTEST AT LEAST MARGINALLY SERIOUSLY, IMBECILE, THEN PLEASE GET OFF OF YOUR LAZY BUM AND LEAVE AT ONCE! FOOL!


♫Just waitin' for something to show, o-oh♫
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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24 Jun 2014 10:36 PM
easy Infact I love coffee.

The last cup of coffee for this year! Everyone panicked in fear of no more coffee but one man was brave enough to atttempt the impossible, reason with the god of coffee Cafeckst. He dared to meet the god in person. The man did the dance of coffee and soon the god was face to face with him.
" Why are you done making coffee? "
the god cried till made a warm cup of coffee to calm himself, the god had a very sad look on his face and you could tell he had a problem.
" Well people like coffee cream but I can't make any. "
" Why? "
Cafeckst started telling a story, a long one. He was walking around the godly world and making coffee for all, he loved his work. He was one of the nicest gods and nothing bothered him, Infact he was the stronger god in the coffee kingdom. He found the most tender coffee beans mashed them into a bitter juice and used milk and many oils to turn it into amazing coffee. He was rich due to his mad coffee skills and had many people wanting to a Demi god under him.
One day he was about to meet his friend Crai the god of cream but Crai had been attacked by a pissy god, menacing no more coffice cream for us, the cream is the best part of coffee but without it, coffee is just disgusting. Cafeckst cried like a baby, his coffee didn't even calm him.
" I'll get people to drink coffee without cream! "
" R-Really? "
" I promise. "
So the man went back to town with news and told them the story why no more coffee but they all wanted cream, the man told them just use milk and sugar it's like the same.

The end!

That's a weird piece of the mind.
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
Joined: 23 Apr 2014
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24 Jun 2014 10:39 PM
Round One GS: Jester
Intrigue/Creativity: 18/20
On Topic: 5/5
Grammar/Spelling: 4/5
Comments: Cute story.
Total: 27/30


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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byrondude16 is not online. byrondude16
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24 Jun 2014 10:40 PM
Try to make it into a disaster?
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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24 Jun 2014 10:41 PM
"Try to make it into a disaster?"
Precisely what I said, is it not?


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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24 Jun 2014 10:41 PM
Can I post my entry tomorrow,once I return from the horrors of having School during the summer? ]
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superboy5519 is not online. superboy5519
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24 Jun 2014 10:46 PM
"Coffee." A word that rolls off the old tongue as if we've known it all our lives, which is true for some coffee enthusiasts. Coffee is such a popular drink that it has spawned many beverages and slang words that relate to it like cappuccino, espresso, java, ink, "the hot stuff," mocha, and so many more terms and beverages that wouldn't fit on ten pages of notebook paper! The point is, coffee is a diverse and varying drink that can come black, cold, hot, lukewarm, sweet, bitter, in different containers, from different brands, from different cafes, the list goes on! Statistics even show that 54% of Americans over the age of 18 drink coffee, and a revenue of 18 billion dollars is generated from specialty drinks like mochas, cappuccinos, and espressos alone! The epitome of this paragraph is to show how important coffee is in the lives of many and the economy, which is apparent if the United States is generating 18 billion dollars in revenue a year from specialty beverages alone! So let our minds come up with new and diverse coffee flavors, new brands, new cafes, and so much more, because coffee truly is a great thing!
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byrondude16 is not online. byrondude16
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24 Jun 2014 10:46 PM
Yet when the first 2 entries were posted - both disasters - you yelled at them?
I could be mistaken and they trolling, but it's hard to tell the difference when you want to write a mess of a entry.
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tezakat is not online. tezakat
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24 Jun 2014 10:53 PM
"Hey! How've you been? Good? Man, I haven't seen you in AGES! Say, why don't we go out for a cup of coffee some time? I heard there's a new place in town!"

This was her last phone call.

"I'd like a mocha with a shot of expresso, please."

This was her last Coffee Shop Order.

"Let's sit over here."

These were her last words.

/This doesn't taste righ-/

And this ... was her last thought.
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kaykay975 is not online. kaykay975
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24 Jun 2014 11:41 PM
It was their last bastion of hope. Beyond the paralyzing of hatred, there lay a sea of brown that gave them hope, energy, and happiness.
Beyond the heartlessness their lay an ease, one that would only spread when consumed by this magic serum. There sat the parent, sipping away the hazel ambrosia; Sipping away the sorrow.
It was another day; Another day where the addiction conflagrated inside of their minds. Telling them this was there high time, there lust. Without it they would be lifeless shells. This gave them life.
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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25 Jun 2014 11:21 AM
~Round One GS~

~Super:
Intrigue/Creativity: 16/20
On Topic: 4/5
Grammar/Spelling: 5/5
Comments: How is this disastrous?
Total: 25/30

~tezakat
Can't grade you. That'd be unfair.

~kay
Intrigue/Creativity: 19/20
On Topic: 5/5
Grammar/Spelling: 4/5
Comments: Loved it. Short, but maybe that's a good thing there.
Total: 28/30


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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birm123 is not online. birm123
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25 Jun 2014 11:24 AM
i cant even write about this xd
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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25 Jun 2014 11:30 AM
"cant even write about this"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WxulBzEIyE


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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25 Jun 2014 11:32 AM
What does "OI" mean? That was all I clicked on this for, and I'm really quite curious.

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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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25 Jun 2014 11:34 AM
"What does "OI" mean?"
I point upward at the first line.


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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superboy5519 is not online. superboy5519
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25 Jun 2014 11:45 AM
Super:
Intrigue/Creativity: 16/20
On Topic: 4/5
Grammar/Spelling: 5/5
Comments: How is this disastrous?
Total: 25/30

What do you mean by the comment?
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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25 Jun 2014 11:46 AM
@super
re-read the original post


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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superboy5519 is not online. superboy5519
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25 Jun 2014 11:48 AM
So you're penalizing me for not saying coffee is disgusting?
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flywrench is not online. flywrench
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25 Jun 2014 11:49 AM
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PurringThunder is not online. PurringThunder
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25 Jun 2014 11:51 AM
"penalizing me for not saying coffee is disgusting?"
Uh, no....

@fly
Wrong forum. And wrong thread. Where the heck did this even come from?!


♫When he shouts, nobody listens, Where he leads, no one will go, o-oh ~Genesis♫
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