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Re: Fave Gives Feedback: Edition V

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Faave is online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Total Posts: 7167
26 Jun 2014 02:45 PM
This is Fave Gives Feedback, an occasional thread where I ask for links to your videos, and I give feedback on them, pointing out flaws and rating them on a scale of 1-10
If you can't take constructive criticism, then PLEASE don't post

yeah i'm fave
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SWAGER21c is not online. SWAGER21c
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26 Jun 2014 02:46 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x62_d4dCUlg
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Faave is online. Faave
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26 Jun 2014 02:47 PM
@SWAGER
10/10 for pills

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InsaneDeveloper is not online. InsaneDeveloper
Joined: 16 Jun 2014
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26 Jun 2014 02:47 PM
feedback on the video: don't do drugs
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InsaneDeveloper is not online. InsaneDeveloper
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26 Jun 2014 02:48 PM
lel
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EpicMonstercjr is not online. EpicMonstercjr
Joined: 17 Nov 2011
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26 Jun 2014 02:48 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZ-EeusQcfI&feature=youtu.be
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Faave is online. Faave
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26 Jun 2014 02:51 PM
@epic
a couple of problems with this vid
intro is a little too long
where's the audio? doesn't even come in till midway through the video
in some scenes i can see the morphs/face changers in the background
you need to have a good way to start the video, if you bore the audience, they'll leave the video before the good bits come in
cool outro

6.5/10
definitely not the worst vid i've seen, but nowhere near the best

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EpicMonstercjr is not online. EpicMonstercjr
Joined: 17 Nov 2011
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26 Jun 2014 02:53 PM
I have considered making a new intro... the outro's fine, it just has to be updated so that new video clips are showing... the "CHECK OUT OTHER VIDEOS" clips are around 9-11 months old.
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Faave is online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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26 Jun 2014 02:54 PM
just turn ur outro into a template

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XxxFr33B33BuildzxxX is not online. XxxFr33B33BuildzxxX
Joined: 02 Aug 2012
Total Posts: 1462
26 Jun 2014 03:08 PM
A have a template in my decals, I can make you one for 200 R$

Fully customizable.

Youtube:SikkidsTV Twitter:SikkidsTV
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AlmightyNoob is not online. AlmightyNoob
Joined: 18 Jun 2010
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26 Jun 2014 03:09 PM
I'll never say no to feedback.
Here's a video we made quite a while ago.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOU8kogQJxY
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Faave is online. Faave
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26 Jun 2014 03:10 PM
@outro guy
rofl no i can make my own

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Faave is online. Faave
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26 Jun 2014 03:12 PM
@almightynoob
i would be biased anyway, routess is my dawg

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XxxFr33B33BuildzxxX is not online. XxxFr33B33BuildzxxX
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26 Jun 2014 03:13 PM
mk. Just advertising on your thread.

Anyway, Guest is Love Guest is Life: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h5dVclfjfP8

Youtube:SikkidsTV Twitter:SikkidsTV
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SWAGER21c is not online. SWAGER21c
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26 Jun 2014 03:14 PM
@xx

i don't like the template

its basic, 200 robux isn't worth it.
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AlmightyNoob is not online. AlmightyNoob
Joined: 18 Jun 2010
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26 Jun 2014 03:23 PM
Well if you can find a way to critique a gameplay montage (or just my videos and channel in general)
here ya go.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2q5DEoPhNYI
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XxxFr33B33BuildzxxX is not online. XxxFr33B33BuildzxxX
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26 Jun 2014 03:26 PM
Go watch guest is love guest is life pls.

Youtube:SikkidsTV Twitter:SikkidsTV
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Faave is online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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26 Jun 2014 04:46 PM
@fr33

very odd video,
the use the chat menu joke was good,
and this vid is a clever way to parody shrek is love and shrek is life
i love the shameless twitter plug
i give this video a good rating definitely not for the editing, but for the concept and how well written it is
8/10

@almighty
no idea how to judge
?/10

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LavaDraco is not online. LavaDraco
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26 Jun 2014 04:48 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NI2rio4V0pI
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Faave is online. Faave
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26 Jun 2014 04:51 PM
@draco
normally i'm all against copyrighted/mainstream music but i'll let it slip this time
u should put a seizure disclaimer before the vid
i absolutely HATE the war clan community, they're stuck up and they're responsible for the worst forum here, but i'm not going to become biased like that
pretty boring vid overall, shouldn't montages be a bit more, eh, FUN? and action packed
using the same flash effect over and over gets repetitive
i guess war clan freaks will get convinced by this odd vid

it's just boring, meh overall
6/10

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LavaDraco is not online. LavaDraco
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26 Jun 2014 04:54 PM
that is okay if you don't like war clans.
what about this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85q4Dbp7LsQ
O yeah I don't make these videos for money I just make them for fun so copyright doesn't bother me
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Faave is online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Total Posts: 7167
26 Jun 2014 05:02 PM
@draco
this video would've fit way better like 4-5 years ago
make that vid today? meh it's whack
6.7/10

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LavaDraco is not online. LavaDraco
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26 Jun 2014 05:05 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wqzc-g0dQy4
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LavaDraco is not online. LavaDraco
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26 Jun 2014 05:06 PM
might have went a little bit to much wide screen but who cares lol
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EpicMonstercjr is not online. EpicMonstercjr
Joined: 17 Nov 2011
Total Posts: 834
26 Jun 2014 05:17 PM
Nice iMovie template...
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