Otaii
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| 23 Jun 2014 12:07 PM |
-MODS: Move this to whatever forum I need to have it in, I posted it here because it's about ROBLOX but I didn't know of another forum to put it in. If this gets deleted, I'm moving it to OT. I have it saved to file, so I can easily copy/paste it wherever.
-PLEASE NOTE: I'm not making fun of the developers here in any way, this is just a story. I actually like all three of these guys. :D
A pretty long story I wrote about three developers that lead the army to take down ROBLOX's evil sides that currently rule the world. There is no tl;dr, don't bother reading if you don't like long posts.
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In a world where ROBLOX is ruled by the lower rankings of character - the classic new player, the online dater, the troll - the battle for ROBLOX has been watched over by the Gods of ROBLOX: Shedletsky, Builderman, and the other many that live in Adminville, the heavens above ROBLOX.
The world has been taken over by the categories mentioned above - the new players, the online dater, the troll - and the ROBLOXians have been plotting the demise of the overpowers in order to stop this new threat. In a dark cave just miles from the famous Sword Fighting Tournament game, some very persuasive people, Clonetrooper1019, Nikilis, and loleris, are plotting the comeback of the advanced users, in order to take hold once again of ROBLOX.
"How should we handle such a threat?" Clone shouted, after a reply from Nikilis saying it'd be easy to destroy them. "Tell me, how exactly do we do that when the populations of their army is in the millions, and we're sitting here on our knees begging for mercy as they're out there basically ruling over the population?" "You have a point," Nikilis said, in one of his quiet, eerie voices. "We can't just take them down with ease, given the way you just described their actions. I was wrong. However, we do need to come up with a way to take them down." "We have to distract them."
It surprised the two of them that loleris said that, seeing as he hardly ever said a word to the two and most of the time it was just an agreement of a sentence like "I agree." or "Yes, that will work." loleris was a very shy fellow, and his brainpower was unmatched by the others, but seeing as he never shared his ideas he was considered the weak link of the team by the other two.
"You have a point, loleris. If we find a way to distract most of their players, we could easily move in on the smaller parts and take them down. Then, with only the biggest part of the army left and the weak links removed, the battle would be more equal." Clone had never thought of such an idea and was amazed that someone like loleris would figure that out. "If I might go on to say," loleris continued, "we'll need to figure out a WAY to distract them before we're able to move in." Nikilis chimes in his opinion on the matter. "But how would we do that? We need an efficient method that makes all of the new players want to do something other than harass the experienced ones. How do we pull that off? What would we be able to do in order to stop them from protecting their weak links while we move in?" "A new game," Clonetrooper mentioned. "A new game is what we need. Something that will top the front page in mere seconds. Something that attracts so many users, that all of the new players will show there and no more of their army is left protecting the lower ranks." "That's a great idea," again, more surprising words from loleris. "I've had a concept for a game I want to produce hidden away in my room for years now, but I've never been able to quite pull it off. Nikilis, could you try to develop it for me?" Nikilis, with pride, accepts the invitation to do something for the so-called developer of the year. "Of course I will," Nikilis states. "But what do we do if the game dies down? If the army still exists and the game disappears, there will be no way to stop them. Even if we distract them again, they'll know that we've made a move and then they won't fall for the distraction again if we want them to." "Clone, I want you to have your own version of the game ready. I will make one as well. I can put more effort into it if needed. I will send you the files of a concept game I have already created, as well as some designs I've put in. These should be ready by next week at the earliest, next month at the latest. Please attempt to complete your games as soon as possible. The fate of ROBLOX lies in this game's hands."
loleris was proud of himself for speaking so much today, but he hated every second of it. How badly he wanted to just stay quiet and see what the two of them would come up with on their own. He probably would have been more secure about their ideas than his own, seeing as he has more faith in them than himself. He knows his insecurities are the reason he is shy, but he is slowly working to overcome them and be the awesome developer he wants to be.
The three of them had disbanded their meeting, and went into their own separate rooms in the cave (seeing as the developers had to stay in that cave or the evil army would have destroyed them already. Nobody knows of the team's whereabouts, but everyone knows they exist and are plotting against the army), working on their games. (They have wi-fi because they're so close to Sword Fighting Tournament, and the wi-fi is so big there it stretches out to that cave.) Clone manages to get his game to a 20% mark, and heads to sleep. Nikilis puts his game up for beta testing as a paid access place that only his friends know about, and loleris is basically finished with his design - he works quickly, but there were plenty of bugs to be fixed as well.
The three would meet up again in the morning, but each one takes a tunnel to their own home in order to go about their days, all except loleris. loleris, given his shy attitude, doesn't have much to do with his day, so he stays in the cave 24/7 just in case something bad happens and he needs to summon the others.
In a few weeks, once everyone's games are finished and bug-free, Nikilis's game is released first: Murder Mystery. It tops the front page in one night, and all of the new players spread there. Interestingly enough, some guests even enjoy the place, though the place was designed to be of no interest to any of the guests. Either way, this left the trolls and remaining guests at a standpoint in one area, without the new players there to protect them against the strong forces.
Normally, if it were a 1v1 competition, the guests, trolls, and new players would all be destroyed by the experienced players and developers, but seeing as the bad guys are much higher in numbers, the experienced guys can't do anything. They sacrifice their lives to save ROBLOXia, and they can't do it. This is why they're attempting to drive the new players out. With the Guests and the Trolls gone, the odds are even and the new players will be killed.
Since all the new players migrated away from the forums and all other places in order to play the ever-so-amazing Murder Mystery, Nikilis posted on the forums:
"Subject: We're Attacking Now!
Message: Hey guys, Nikilis here.
The new guys have been distracted, leaving the trolls and the guests wide open. Come on down to Crossroads as we claim our victory over the two evils and even the odds for ROBLOXia!"
Thus, the battle begins.
p2 coming later in the day: the battle begins, and the newbies realize they've been tricked!
Suggestions for what happens next can be added below, but hate will not be bothered with (constructive criticism is ok). |
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| 23 Jun 2014 12:08 PM |
tl;dr
I troll >:)
So hawt :3 |
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Otaii
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| 23 Jun 2014 12:08 PM |
@IAm (and other tl;dr's) It's fine you don't want to read it, it's a long post I get it. |
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Otaii
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Otaii
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| 23 Jun 2014 12:14 PM |
| I'm making 2 this afternoon, just so you know. kk. |
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rockitbro
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| 23 Jun 2014 12:19 PM |
tl;dr
OH COME ON! IT'S RAW! |
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Otaii
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| 23 Jun 2014 03:08 PM |
too many tl;drs
i get it but you're probably just doing it to troll me now oh well if you're trolls you die in my story anyway so |
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| 23 Jun 2014 07:04 PM |
ts:dr
too short , didnt read sorry i need a 109023801928392378490 word long thread to not say that |
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| 23 Jun 2014 07:06 PM |
tl;dr
┻━┻︵╰( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)╯︵ ┻━┻ |
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Otaii
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| 23 Jun 2014 07:33 PM |
p2 here: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=137955774 |
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Otaii
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| 25 Jun 2014 03:35 PM |
@valk action's in p2, i think i linked it up there |
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dzrambo
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| 25 Jun 2014 03:45 PM |
| i love the part where they say tl;dr |
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bio111
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| 25 Jun 2014 03:49 PM |
tldr put this crap in the roleplaying forum |
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Otaii
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| 25 Jun 2014 10:53 PM |
"put this crap in the roleplaying forum"
-not a roleplay -about roblox -the first one was MOVED here from ATR, so you can't say i misposted because the mods put it here
your point? |
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Pypar
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| 25 Jun 2014 11:02 PM |
you should give each new dialogue between characters a new line. it makes it easier on the eyes. ex. "hey there" billy said joyfully "howdy" jimmy replied. billy went to his mailbox to pick up the weekly issue of grammar weekly. "this is my favorite magazine!" billy exclaimed. |
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Otaii
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| 26 Jun 2014 11:49 AM |
@pypar
I don't remember exactly what I was doing but I'm pretty sure something along the lines of
"Hey Billy," said George. "did you take my daily issue of ROBLOX weekly?" "Yeah," Billy replied. "I borrowed it so I could check out that article on Shedletsky being fired."
is correct. If I put two different peoples' quotes on the same line I probably did it on accident |
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| 26 Jun 2014 11:56 AM |
tl;dr im not wasting my time
jaredvaldez logic | Follow me: @MarioSMRBLX |
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