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| 24 Jun 2014 10:51 AM |
This song is about how you cannot just think you can build love. Credit to Ed Sheeran-Lego House for the inspiration [verse 1] You say you're gonna pick up the pieces, And build a better love. And if things grow wrong you'll build it higher. And I know its hard to say, "That I've been a fool!" Although I would still surrender all of my heart, And swap it for yours! Oh! [chorus] If you broke your leg, Wouldn't ya'? But I'd keep you sheltered from the storm that's coming home, Yeah! You're out alone, I'm on my own. And you still think that, After all the things we've done, You can just build a better love! You're out alone, I'm on my own. And you'll still say that, After all the things you've learned, That you can just build a better love... [verse 2] You say you're gonna pick up those pieces, And build a better house! And if things go wrong, You'll just buy another. And don't ya' know it's hard to say it, "That I've been a fool!" But you'd still surrender all of your heart, And swap it for mine! [chorus] If you broke your arm, Wouldn't ya'? But I'd keep you sheltered from that big old raging storm, Yeah! You're out alone, I'm on my own. And you still think that, After all the things we've done, You can just build a better love! You're out alone, I'm on my own. And you'll still say that, After all the things you've learned, That you can just build a better love... [verse 3/rap] Oh you know that I'm not the fool So shut your pool Ya' lil' fool 'Cause you know that you ain't you So go take your lil' Fu Manchu And enjoy you're lil' koo koo Yeah cause you ain't seein' Real Life Real Sights Oh boy do you don't know this song I know right! [chorus] If you broke your leg, Wouldn't ya'? But I'd keep you sheltered from that nasty storm, Yeah! You're out alone, I'm on my own. And you still think that, After all the things we've done, You can just build a better love! You're out alone, I'm on my own. And you'll still say that, After all the things you've learned, That you can just build a better love... [end] Thanks for reading it. If you bought the Travels album, thank you. Feel free to post feedback in replies! |
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| 24 Jun 2014 02:23 PM |
All I have to say is that I like it. c: 9/10 |
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| 24 Jun 2014 03:09 PM |
i can help you with song writing
because this is absolutely horrible |
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| 24 Jun 2014 06:14 PM |
| Thx for liking it, and thx for offering help. Although, no thanks. I get hater notes a lot. I don't care. I just want feedback. |
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| 24 Jun 2014 06:20 PM |
| I was kidding, this is pretty good. |
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:48 PM |
| LOL first person to kid about the song. Also you both are the first two to like my songs. xD I've been getting hater notes all my music career. It's so annoying... |
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| 27 Jun 2014 04:43 PM |
| Make up your mind, will you? |
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| 27 Jun 2014 11:46 PM |
| xD i guess youre saying its a little bit of both? |
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